Old 03-12-2008, 03:48 AM   #1
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Make a haiku.

Go on. It's not terribly hard

Five syllables
Seven Syllables
Five

and make sure you say what you think about the haiku above yours

Sounds of thunder roll.
War brews in the depths of night.
My cats are crazy.
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Old 03-12-2008, 03:58 AM   #2
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and make sure you say what you think about the haiku above yours

Sounds of thunder roll.
War brews in the depths of night.
My cats are crazy.
I quite like that, and understand it quite well, having felines in my life, also.
Here's mine...

The gentle rain falls.
Mist catches in my lashes.
I laugh to feel it.
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Old 03-12-2008, 05:25 PM   #3
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It makes me wanting to go dancing in a spring shower.. too bad it's March and bloody cold at that.

All the things I hate
Could fill up the Bering Strait.
Dare you to debate.
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Old 03-12-2008, 05:55 PM   #4
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It makes me wanting to go dancing in a spring shower.. too bad it's March and bloody cold at that.

All the things I hate
Could fill up the Bering Strait.
Dare you to debate.
I love that. My sentiments, exactly.


Distant wailing sounds.
Must be the baby next door.
Laugh, and shut the drapes.
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Old 03-12-2008, 07:36 PM   #5
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Distant wailing sounds.
Must be the baby next door.
Laugh, and shut the drapes.
A problem I am so glad I do not have to deal with.

When the doors open
Time springs forth, with joyful sounds
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Old 03-12-2008, 08:16 PM   #6
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Beautiful...


When Night's air is clear
The Moon dances on her axis
And I lie, waiting.
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Old 03-12-2008, 08:29 PM   #7
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Beautiful...


When Night's air is clear
The Moon dances on her axis
And I lie, waiting.
that is also beautiful dear


his lips on my clit
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Old 03-12-2008, 10:55 PM   #8
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his lips on my clit
squirming uncontrollably
ecstasy is mine
Well, I can't speak to being on the receiving end... but I do so enjoy being at the giving end...


Motion flickers, where?
Eyes, glowing in the darkness.
Evil lies in wait.
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Old 03-12-2008, 11:24 PM   #9
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Darkly seductive... I like.

Will you come to me?
Tread softly into the night
I will be waiting....
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Old 03-12-2008, 11:34 PM   #10
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Will you come to me?
Tread softly into the night
I will be waiting....

I like the feel of that. Very nice.

Though she moves unseen
Her voice softly calls to me.
I cannot resist.
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Old 03-12-2008, 11:47 PM   #11
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Oh, delicate but not...


The unseen calling
To taste the sweet temptations
Why should you resist?
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Old 03-13-2008, 12:00 AM   #12
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The unseen calling
To taste the sweet temptations
Why should you resist?

I like the way you did that.


Following her call,
I fall prey to seduction.
My resistance melts.
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Old 03-13-2008, 12:11 AM   #13
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Oh... smooth.


Listen and heed the
Tantalising seduction
Melt with the unknown.
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Old 03-13-2008, 12:27 AM   #14
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Listen and heed the
Tantalising seduction
Melt with the unknown.

Why thank you. You're not doing too bad there, yourself.

I let myself melt,
Sumbit to her desires,
Lost, in her mystery.
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Old 03-13-2008, 12:52 AM   #15
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Why thank you. You're not doing too bad there, yourself.

I let myself melt,
Sumbit to her desires,
Lost, in her mystery.
Why, thank you. Such richness

Gasping for his kiss
Swimming into the unknown
Of such dark desires.
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Old 03-13-2008, 01:00 AM   #16
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Why, thank you. Such richness

Gasping for his kiss
Swimming into the unknown
Of such dark desires.
What can I say? You are being a most wondeful muse this evening.
It's been a while since I gave thought to things poetically.

Falling as one, each
enraptured by the Other.
Alone. Together.
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Old 03-13-2008, 01:17 AM   #17
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What can I say? You are being a most wondeful muse this evening.
It's been a while since I gave thought to things poetically.

Falling as one, each
enraptured by the Other.
Alone. Together.

Thank you. And for the inspiration. It feels good to finally able to write again...

In that one moment
Sands of time has flowed into
an Eternity.
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Old 03-13-2008, 01:20 AM   #18
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Old 03-13-2008, 01:30 AM   #19
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Thank you. And for the inspiration. It feels good to finally able to write again...

In that one moment
Sands of time has flowed into
an Eternity.
You are welcome. And thank you. It is long since I wrote, as well.

Two lives pulse as one.
In that forever moment,
The universe sings.
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Old 03-13-2008, 01:55 AM   #20
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That one is nice and romantic. A lot more serious than the crap I'm about to churn out!

I'm very hungry.
The bag of Doritos calls.
I will eat them now.

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Old 03-13-2008, 06:39 PM   #21
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~ That wasn't crap.

~ Unless you meant what you would churn out after the Doritos

A tip from sadist.
The next time when having sex
Call out sister's name.
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Old 03-13-2008, 06:59 PM   #22
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btw.. someone in this thread needs to learn how to count. otherwise it's just poetry, not a haiku.
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Depressed as of late.
Here, without you by my side.
I need a tissue.
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In the dead of night
limping in the rain, by you
i see no remourse
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"limping in the rain"...haunting. Thank you so much for shaing

Missing you, like air.
Like phantom limbs, you linger.
Never forgotten.
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