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Old 06-05-2005, 11:37 PM   #1
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13 o'clock ( dark-er poetry)

it is that time, the minute after midnight, the minute before the

first hour past midnight, and you are still up, online, why arent you somewhere
writing? Right here is a good place to start. Or not. But if you have the devilish

urge, to cook something up, some 13 o'clock poetry stew, be my guest and post

here, I might post some two


I saw some sites, looking for dark poetry, without light? horror? narrow, wmpty shoe box poetry? shoe poetry? eeeekkkk!! I hate shoes...
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Old 06-06-2005, 12:58 AM   #2
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Nothing in the thirteenth hour
is without passion.

Spotlight disappears into the corner
seeps under the cellar door
followed by black shell insects that craw
from this scene

This is the anti-interrogation room
sucking light from your eyes,
we are not interested in your confession
nor your price

have you ever heard the pitch change,
as the circular saw moves
from flesh into bone
motor strains, hesitates,
frequency rises to that
high screech
arm trembles and falls easily
through the other side
motor slows, purrs, sputters...

this is the sound
you will remember
as you wipe the marrow
from the blade,
as the light seeps back under the door
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Old 06-06-2005, 10:37 AM   #3
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quickie in dim light

Daria, darling, how I adore
yoru subcutaneous wit, however
exposing it has been a chore,
there is ample skin for sewing
your wit is hidden no more
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Old 06-06-2005, 11:43 AM   #4
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Ghost Dance

At the thirteenth hour
we bleed,
to a silent witness
no one can see.

Shadowed leftovers
uncover
unkind trickery of
of our mind
and our head hurts,
and our heart weeps
while shadows waltz
in symphony and
sympathy is just
another ghost dance
in our witching hour
of weakness.
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Old 06-06-2005, 12:15 PM   #5
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Last night
horny husband tired wife
fight.
.........don't bother me!
Bother?
Flip ass end up split beaver tail slap more like it.
Slippery slam and bam and
No Thank You
Thirteen o'clock TV couch potato friend understands,
BBC news and callers from Seattle
say OK
go worldwide but delete delete delete
the evidence

Beating frog in throat croaks
She's here!
Oh my.
Oh my!

Cursor paws av skin
to see
more, want
more
Fingers tug button snap
to knees and ankles and flung-away
........................................corner
Bare bronze belly lift
hem to hair to flung-away
...........................corner
Hard attention eyes
on prize can't blink
or think just
feel
and feel it grow long, longing
for her underneath
To feel under
her would feel
like this
I'm sure

Stretch and strain in trembling
attention, the snake
that tempts with swollen plum
coils in my fist and spits
his promise in glistening arcs
that splash
on bare bronze belly skin

Beneath fluttering
lashes the rise
and fall of breath
returns to present
tense and turns
to the creaking stair.
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Old 06-06-2005, 12:47 PM   #6
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In the midnight hour all my jealous tongues
will flower into angry serpents, bite into the skin
of your lies, pulse my hot venom to your cold veins,
awaken you and pin myself to your inadequate replies.

I'll shred your child's game on the edge of my wrath.
Hell hath no fury like the scorn of my contempt.
When we have spent the last centime of my abuse,
when we have parsed each sin, taxed each excuse,

what will remain but dust within an empty room?
What will remain but footprints, silence, and the moon?
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Old 06-06-2005, 02:19 PM   #7
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succulent

Channel locked, he guides with fist
knotted hair in hand, he is Man
intent upon his intentions, let me
be your canvas to splatter

wound me from the inside out
with weapons of your massive
consumption, I want you
to take me places, she would
never go, let me bleed and love it

let me be the razor's edge
upon the bloodied snow
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Old 06-06-2005, 03:24 PM   #8
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The Pollock pornographer spreads
his lover wide, stretched drum-skin
tight and singing a single
low note. Beneath his brushes

she flushes ruby
red, scarlet lips smeared
with the pad of his thumb
to outline the crescendo
building in her loins.

With practiced abandon
he scoops color
in handfuls, slaps
crimson and coral
in streaks that pucker
the fabric, pull it tight
against the frame.

He strokes
and smears
and with massive
convulsion, splatters
the canvas with his art.
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Old 06-06-2005, 04:28 PM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by flyguy69
The Pollock pornographer spreads
his lover wide, stretched drum-skin
tight and singing a single
low note. Beneath his brushes

she flushes ruby
red, scarlet lips smeared
with the pad of his thumb
to outline the crescendo
building in her loins.

With practiced abandon
he scoops color
in handfuls, slaps
crimson and coral
in streaks that pucker
the fabric, pull it tight
against the frame.

He strokes
and smears
and with massive
convulsion, splatters
the canvas with his art.
OMG, flyguy, thatis unbearbly HOT!!!! I think I cant breathe, erotic asphyxiation? yummmmy
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Old 06-06-2005, 04:59 PM   #10
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OMG, flyguy, thatis unbearbly HOT!!!! I think I cant breathe, erotic asphyxiation? yummmmy
It's OK, I'm CPR certified. I'll just press my lips to yours for breathing while I feel for proper placement of the AED electrodes. Ooh, nice bra!
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Old 06-06-2005, 05:06 PM   #11
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In darkened galleries of lust
we lie in waiting framed
in guilt and dusty absence
be wary after dark
for we are patient knowing
every need desiring only
swift satisfaction
pale arms entwine the incautious
lifting inhibitions off stiff backs
and singing sweet sonnets
to weaken all resistence
the flesh is weak in our reins
each has his priapic preference
his seductive skill to bend
and take his prize.
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Old 06-06-2005, 05:48 PM   #12
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omg

some of these poems are so hot...they inspired my fruity muse...

bodies swaying as cat eyes
penetrate each nuance
of her painted Aurora Borealis
candle lit skin
rose magenta nipples against
her raven strands of hair
warm currents in his delirium

flowing from her glowing womb
pink buds expanding wanting
touched and probed with
hot lips and bated breath

thirteenth hour engulfs
thirsty kisses
as the moments
escape into a witches
brew and the maven
drinks her prey...
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Old 06-06-2005, 06:00 PM   #13
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Quote:
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Channel locked, he guides with fist
knotted hair in hand, he is Man
intent upon his intentions, let me
be your canvas to splatter

wound me from the inside out
with weapons of your massive
consumption, I want you
to take me places, she would
never go, let me bleed and love it

let me be the razor's edge
upon the bloodied snow


oh damn maria. yeah.
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Old 06-06-2005, 09:48 PM   #14
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Some of you have some dark demons stalking you at night!

O-dark-thirty's come and gone
and Dad says there's no monster
under my bed.
But what about the closet?

There's always something
hidden in that midnight light
in the hall.
I think I saw it move!

Black fingers creep along
beneath the dust ruffle
while gasping breath echoes
in the silent room.

Brilliant tooth-fairy glimmer
sparks behind wide open eyes
until at last the lung explosion
comes and tears leak out.

Now ya did it,
they know you're here.
Whaddya hafta breathe for?

Feet fly across the floor.

Out the door, down the hall,
safety waits in a snoring mound
on the bed.
Can I sleep with you?

edited to point out that this is the 13th reply . I'm just sayin'.
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Old 06-06-2005, 10:01 PM   #15
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absolutely some HOT poetry here. I am honored to just be here lurking, and learning from each and every one of you
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Old 06-06-2005, 10:33 PM   #16
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I lie awake in the grey half-light
with an ache and tell-tale wetness
there, on the softest skin.

Fingerpainting I-love-you
in the slippery guache of my lust;
a dream spending leaving
pearlescent pools on my thighs.

Wanton sighs murmured
across a hundred hills,
bringing your fingers
to cover mine and draw Cupid's
arrow pointing upward
at the target of g-spot
clit and womb.

Give me this
now, tonight.
Don't leave me
without sliding
in and out and over
again against those places.

Don't leave me
without giving my mind
a loving caress
to make the dream real.
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Old 06-07-2005, 01:06 PM   #17
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That was no monster in your closet, Carrie-- it was me groaning over your midnight show!

P.S. Love the satin baby-doll pj's!
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I lie awake in the grey half-light
with an ache and tell-tale wetness
there, on the softest skin.

Fingerpainting I-love-you
in the slippery guache of my lust;
a dream spending leaving
pearlescent pools on my thighs.

Wanton sighs murmured
across a hundred hills,
bringing your fingers
to cover mine and draw Cupid's
arrow pointing upward
at the target of g-spot
clit and womb.

Give me this
now, tonight.
Don't leave me
without sliding
in and out and over
again against those places.

Don't leave me
without giving my mind
a loving caress
to make the dream real.
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Old 06-07-2005, 02:13 PM   #18
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13 O'clock

the last call of a forgotten day
time to rehash or invent the past
time to plan a tomorrow
a chance to see without being seen
the possibilties are endless
the solitude will make or break
plan well and leave the nightlite on
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Old 06-07-2005, 04:10 PM   #19
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a digital glow says
one zero zero squarely
whispering insomnia into
the thick darkness
the days detritis drips
constantly nagging
like the Chinese torture
of a loosely washered
faucet worrying the hollow sink
cats are wakeful now
I sense their silent hunt
and the fearless flight of owls
as they eye the same quarry
and still sleep escapes me
turning to the starless window
the pale wedge of lighter dark
I wait for dawn.
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Old 06-07-2005, 05:21 PM   #20
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Dark Interlude

Ever the emperor of enticement,
I the diva by the sea,
want only to drown in the swells
of your virility to loosen my pride
and vanity .

Maybe an interlude in the thirteenth hour
will suspend me in time thrills
as I watch you bend my will into a willow
tree of submission...
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Old 06-07-2005, 05:41 PM   #21
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damn good and smooth

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Ever the emperor of enticement,
I the diva by the sea,
want only to drown in the swells
of your virility to loosen my pride
and vanity .

Maybe an interlude in the thirteenth hour
will suspend me in time thrills
as I watch you bend my will into a willow
tree of submission...

This is good. Great location and a message every guy and some girls
on this board will think is written to them.
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Old 06-07-2005, 06:21 PM   #22
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geez

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This is good. Great location and a message every guy and some girls
on this board will think is written to them.
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U R too kind...am just a little critter of the sea playing in the harbor of destiny...ooppps...U Rock...
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Old 06-09-2005, 08:02 PM   #23
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thanks maria

this thread is an all inspiring sensual blessing... wrote a new one erotica bliss ...you all
quicken the muse ...

Charming Words

You roll off my mind
like buttered rum,
melting inside
this auric dreamscape.

Words soft and
smooth ,
pressed from
dreamy lips soothe
ravening nymph within.

You tussle a slick
tongue warmed
from a hearth of winter.

Embers warm me
till the moments sizzle
and substance drizzles
in fluency.
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That was no monster in your closet, Carrie-- it was me groaning over your midnight show!

P.S. Love the satin baby-doll pj's!
Whose closet were you in? There are no pj's here
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Old 06-10-2005, 09:17 AM   #25
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Blue is a new HOT color!

Blue, This 13 O'clock thing has you writing RED. I don't know if its velvet or
silk, I just know this feels smooth going down.




Quote:
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this thread is an all inspiring sensual blessing... wrote a new one erotica bliss ...you all
quicken the muse ...

Charming Words

You roll off my mind
like buttered rum,
melting inside
this auric dreamscape.

Words soft and
smooth ,
pressed from
dreamy lips soothe
ravening nymph within.

You tussle a slick
tongue warmed
from a hearth of winter.

Embers warm me
till the moments sizzle
and substance drizzles
in fluency.
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