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I was warned ahead of time about Loving Wives so was forearmed. All in all the the comments were constructive and accurate. It was a fluff piece for sure, crafted only for the sex in the end. I rushed it (and isn't patience always the golden rule?) to the detriment of development. But hey! I liked it when I was finished, and it made the boards. It was a victory for me in that regard. I am looking forward to getting something else up soon - and yes, it will be a Loving Wife piece. Damn the torpedoes, full steam ahead!
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Old 02-18-2013, 07:12 AM   #77752
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Thank goodness for that. The coffee here in this wifi cafe is awful today. They're very variable here.
I think that may depend upon the quantity of Chicory used in the drink.
They using CAMP coffee not the real thing ?
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I think that may depend upon the quantity of Chicory used in the drink.
They using CAMP coffee not the real thing ?
Oh no, it's the mood of the barista. They're unfortunately not a bit camp, and make sturdy macho coffee. Sometimes the barista has been properly trained, it comes with a heart shape floating on the top, and is delicious. Sometimes it comes with just a pile of fluff and has obviously been made with water that was too hot or something.

UnwantedLaszlo - you are going to put a link to your story in your signature, aren't you? We are much too lazy to step out of the cafe and look for it, y'know.

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I was warned ahead of time about Loving Wives so was forearmed. All in all the the comments were constructive and accurate. It was a fluff piece for sure, crafted only for the sex in the end. I rushed it (and isn't patience always the golden rule?) to the detriment of development. But hey! I liked it when I was finished, and it made the boards. It was a victory for me in that regard. I am looking forward to getting something else up soon - and yes, it will be a Loving Wife piece. Damn the torpedoes, full steam ahead!
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Thanks Naoko - you got me off my ass- been meaning to do that but have been lazy.
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Old 02-18-2013, 08:58 AM   #77756
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Thanks Naoko - you got me off my ass- been meaning to do that but have been lazy.
Oh then you can hang here with me! I was so lazy I couldn't be bothered to sort out the piccie of the biscuits in my last post, but I suppose I better had now.

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Oh then you can hang here with me! I was so lazy I couldn't be bothered to sort out the piccie of the biscuits in my last post, but I suppose I better had now.
All we need now is a decent cup of tea to go with 'em.
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Rolf, get me one too.
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Now you're talkin'.
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Ignition sequence starts. . . .
And a cup of coffee shortly (with half a spoon of sugar )

I'm just asking Rolf to put on this lovely song you posted in Free Association:

Avenues and Alleyways.
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I'm just asking Rolf to put on this lovely song you posted in Free Association:

Avenues and Alleyways.
Ha ha ha! I just listened to it earlier, I was playing it again while doing the washing up and I caught sight of the video that goes with it! That's hilarious! I especially love the way the sound doesn't match the lip movements as he's leaning dangerously out of the car driving along. ROFL!

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I'm just asking Rolf to put on this lovely song you posted in Free Association:

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I don't recall seeing a Programme called that. I thought is was the theme tune to a different TV programme, but I cannot remember which one.

Well, I have found it. It's the opening theme from "The Protectors". Robert Vaughn and Nyree Dawn Porter.
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Oh you must watch it again! Please, Rolf, put the video up on the screen in here. It's too hilarious! ROFLOL!


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Oh you must watch it again! Please, Rolf, put the video up on the screen in here. It's too hilarious! ROFLOL!


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Did someone mention spurting coffee via moi’s nose? Is that a new fetish that you've started Dr. Naoko Smith?
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Oh, so sorry to hear about her unfortunate mishap. . . explosives, you say? Since you said they were small, I guess she wasn't using any C4? Eh, what?
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Some weird damn winter weather here. It snowed on Saturday, letting us enjoy a sunny walk in a whitened wonderland yesterday. This morning? Freezing rain, turning it all into a slushy, icy mess. I'm glad I don't have to drive anywhere.
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Anna, you haven't seen any evidence of unregulated nasal ordnance have you ?.
I wondered if it got lost in the slush.
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"Unregulated nasal ordnance?" Nope, but I'd be willing to try some out. I've been having problems in that department.

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Some years back HM started complaining that I snored horribly. And when I tried to surface dive, my sinuses about killed me. So I went to an EENT specialist who informed me that I had: sleep apnea, a deviated septum, undersized passages to my supraorbital sinuses, grossly enlarged tonsils and adenoids and a lot of fat in my throat (common among middle-aged males, she said). So four hours of surgery later (and three weeks recovery) I no longer snore, can dive if I choose and haven't had a cold or sinus infection since! And that was four years ago . . .

So for anyone with chronic sinus problems, may I recommend a trip to a specialist?
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Some years back HM started complaining that I snored horribly. And when I tried to surface dive, my sinuses about killed me. So I went to an EENT specialist who informed me that I had: sleep apnea, a deviated septum, undersized passages to my supraorbital sinuses, grossly enlarged tonsils and adenoids and a lot of fat in my throat (common among middle-aged males, she said). So four hours of surgery later (and three weeks recovery) I no longer snore, can dive if I choose and haven't had a cold or sinus infection since! And that was four years ago . . .

So for anyone with chronic sinus problems, may I recommend a trip to a specialist?
Actually, Bear, I'm so glad to hear you say that. I have had years of trouble with my sinuses, I just put up with a continual small pain in my ears now. I did once find a cure but I fear that even in Wales, where we all have free prescriptions, they won't be willing to give me a holiday in the Greek islands where the salt sea water and hot dry air can clear my sinuses.

I'm on the list to see a consultant. Hopeful sign: I got a letter the other day from the Waiting List Management Unit saying Did I still want the appointment.

I wasn't sure if I'd accept it if they offered me an operation, I understand that it's hideously painful, but I think now I will.

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