Old 05-19-2009, 12:39 AM   #51751
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hmm, so you have a lot of filler so far then? lol
No, it's just that my characters are wondering through life, having problems and solving some. I don't have any problem with the flow of the story but I don't know how it's going to end. I guess I'll just keep writing until I find out.
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Old 05-19-2009, 12:40 AM   #51752
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Old 05-19-2009, 12:43 AM   #51753
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You have the basic idea, a good grasp of the characters, and a destination point for the story, right? yeah, I do that, too. I can't write outlines. I feel like I've already written the story if I do that, and therefore, I can't surprise myself.
I don't do outlines either...too restrictive IMO. I have 10k+ words of a story written and I don't know where the hell it's going...I keep getting ideas for the characters adventures, so I may never finish it.
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I don't do outlines either...too restrictive IMO. I have 10k+ words of a story written and I don't know where the hell it's going...I keep getting ideas for the characters adventures, so I may never finish it.
So you've got a never ending story on your hands lol
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I don't do outlines either...too restrictive IMO. I have 10k+ words of a story written and I don't know where the hell it's going...I keep getting ideas for the characters adventures, so I may never finish it.
Yeah, I keep wanting to add new things to the story as well, but I think it's nicely complex enough. the first four chapters have gotten good reviews for the most part.

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Old 05-19-2009, 12:56 AM   #51757
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So you've got a never ending story on your hands lol
Just about...it's set in a land of fantasy where anything can and does happen...where the laws of physics are but a stepping stone to weird adventures...no wonder I can't finish it.
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Just about...it's set in a land of fantasy where anything can and does happen...where the laws of physics are but a stepping stone to weird adventures...no wonder I can't finish it.
You writing the next Baron Munchausen, Tom?
 

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You writing the next Baron Munchausen, Tom?
Actually, it's about a fire inspector who falls in love with a fire elemental...she's half human...they return to the Fire Realm and have adventures there...they have wild sex as well...it's fun thinking up new situations to place them in.
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What, no tentacles?
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Old 05-19-2009, 01:16 AM   #51762
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What, no tentacles?
Nah...I leave that stuff to Thee Goat Pig.

I do have some lizard-like characters tho...they're the good guys...the villains are creatures made of cooled lava that breathe nitrogen.
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Old 05-19-2009, 01:18 AM   #51764
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Got a link there, Anne? For us lazy types.
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Actually, it's about a fire inspector who falls in love with a fire elemental...she's half human...they return to the Fire Realm and have adventures there...they have wild sex as well...it's fun thinking up new situations to place them in.
Sounds pretty interesting. Reminds me of some plans I have for my sci-fi series.

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That's usually when I decide to kill one of the main characters.
 

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That's the first chapter...

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Old 05-19-2009, 01:23 AM   #51767
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Old 05-19-2009, 01:29 AM   #51769
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I'll take a better look when I have some more time . . . but the writing bug's got me and I have a couple of hours to kill before bed time.

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Old 05-19-2009, 01:50 AM   #51772
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