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Old 11-07-2010, 04:22 PM   #726
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yea, always assume anything can go any direction. kind of the point of the place, i mean.

and yea, giving Becky a reason besides her tits to hate Karen was fun, but in all my writing I'm a backstory dork, so why not. of course, it was still Becky's jealousy that made her hate her rather than anything Karen really did, so still sort of a bitch anyway...

and yea, big reason I've been lacking on CHYOO lately; been doing comission stories for surprisingly good money online (some of it even fun, but I'm a mercenary/whore so I've written some worse stuff) and working on a long-term project with a friend that we hope to get published if we can get an artist (related to women combat, at that). that plus one or two of any of my ten unfinished stories at any given time...
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Old 11-07-2010, 07:52 PM   #727
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yea Commisions surprisinly lucractive
That why it been taking me longer to add

For websites
and just single guys

It hard sometimes though cause they expect you to read their mind.

Oh by the way guys..anyone on Deviant Art
made a new group

http://mixedfighting.deviantart.com/

And thinking of doing a calender..with some commision art work
my Deviant page have people voting on the theme

Luffy if you need a an artist...lot of people who do art commisions there...i can tossed you a line depending on how little or how much you want to pay
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Old 11-07-2010, 08:14 PM   #728
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oh totally on the commissions. freakier the more they pay, it seems. short, less horrific version: 5 pages of pokemon porn got me Left 4 Dead 2 when it first came out

as for the artist, we're looking for someone who can mimic manga style to a degree since we're doing it as a magical girl series parody, mostly. revolves around a girl who turns into a 300lb female sumo wrestler, and we're looking to have a fairly lengthy series so looking for someone who'd be relatively consistent and are definitely willing to pay to maintain that (negotiable). we're going to legit story, but definitely sexy overtones and little actual nudity (mostly comical, or handful of fanservice type), so should be willing/capable of dealing with that as well as draw a number of body types. comical manga-style reaction faces a real plus. so if you know a guy, definitely send em my way. pm or email's luffy316@hotmail.com
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Old 11-09-2010, 09:12 AM   #729
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he sometime can draw in other styles

http://karmagik.deviantart.com/


These two might do commisions..and would be perfect if they do

http://mikazuki-dono.deviantart.com/

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He can do anime styles and does commisios

http://jebriodo.deviantart.com/


This guy does Anime style do..and does commisons..but only through western union. Be warn...bit of a language barrier. Tried to cancel an order and he did it anyway. He let me off the hook with paying..but still feel bad about it.

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Old 11-09-2010, 09:20 AM   #730
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also love the new additions to the Luv Clan

but it be a good idea not to add tons more

dont want 25 percent of the leauge to be people who ounce was in a luv family members womb

loving see characters give various conflicting views of the same character

I mean when Jack said the girls havent don anything that didnt benifit them..I was thinking I COULD argue this (after all one of the reasons tanya hate her..is mama love help other girls and guys not get ripped off in there contracts(..but you know what, I like to see Jack twisted outlook

plus Casey cant argue back..be rude to talk with her mouth full


could lead into the storyline I did where Casey and Rochelle when to humpalot for VR counsiling. And decided to let Rochelle where the strap and not be as controlling

this could be the reason why they went to her

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Old 11-09-2010, 09:49 AM   #731
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Yeah when I made Jack I had no clue what his background was I wasn't even planning on him having a sister. As I wrote more of about him and the story line got deeper especially when writing when Jack showed the world his memories, him being kicked out of inheritance, him being a twin (which he just put himself into different people's stories to confuse every one) plus how Cat's story about Jake seem so related to Jack that really fit with him. I thought it would be a lot more interesting if Jack was a Luv and Zoe was half a one. I still have no clue why Zoe was kept hiding but I'm pretty sure it has do with Mcvan


In the part where Jack claimed that none of the faces were faces. I was kinda worried about that one since I didn't want the faces to turn on him. But it funny when you look at the storylines that most writers put these ladies in you none of them really doing anything heroic except sucking up to the fans. They aren't really saving the jobbers from the heels or any of that but fighting each other to see who is gonna to be on top tonight. I found that was a interesting thing to point out about them and he's kinda dead on about Casey she is a bully on to herself the way she treats her siblings and Rochelle as second class citizens.

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Old 11-09-2010, 11:58 AM   #732
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Well they help jobbers sometimes. But i always say it is as it is after all a sport where you are trying to see who best. So just happens the fights won by rape. Only difference is heels sore loser and will try to kidnap and brainwash you. Also if a face beats you they wont enslave you unless you want it. They may even offer u a beer. Ounce the fight in the ring is done it done in their eyes.

While it was odds the girls kept quiet during his speech mama might not say anything cause she might of heard this speech from jack a 100 times. Same reason she rarely say "you know what becky goes fuck yourself u cunt". She a bit more well motherly then that and lets him blow of some steam. Which might ofg more. Tara though save jobbers all the time thats her thing the anti bully. She traines some jobbers into non jobbers including petty in obe story. Timmy she let been able to but hey thats timmy. Val to nice to tell anyone to fuck off. Rochell did quite get what was revealed to her with zoe. Jada a real life porn star i juat added in one scene so no resl connection with her
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Old 11-09-2010, 08:09 PM   #733
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I think what Jack meant was when he said that was, "What have you really change?" Has any of the wrestlers change from being jobbers to superstars? Has men's right change by any of your heroic deeds? Look at me they have change because I wanted them too." Basically saying that what you ladies doing right now isn't working and something needs to change
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Old 11-10-2010, 12:16 AM   #734
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well maybe..depending on who writing them

Sometimes..
The girls like most heroes in stories like...arent the most proactive. They normaly react to the bad guys, kidnapping or attacking and dont do premptive strikes

Tara and Jack was I think the few that activlly went at people. Super Valley at some parts. Where they decided to give them a taste of their own medicine. And actully drag the baddies to their place when attack.

But for the most part they mind their own business till someone start shit with them or someone they know
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Old 11-11-2010, 10:11 PM   #735
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One question about the thread that you wrote about Mama having a intervention with Casey. Great job by the way with what Mama said, "I actually agree with her about Jack but the same time I don't agree. This is gonna to be hard to fight back with this one." When I look at my old work Jack never went after anybody Tanya was the one keep going after him. In fact she kept dragging him into it. But I have to agree Jack does used people but I think he has more of "The end justifies the means." approach and the reason he pushes people back because he knows what the heels he messes with would do to the people he cares about.

But anyway when she said, "Zoe was back here tied up with the other ladies does that mean she watching with Mama and her friends or she and the other ladies in another room and it just Mama watching.

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Old 11-12-2010, 12:11 AM   #736
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left that last part open ended



my guess sense she with Jack..the girls keeping and eye on her..so she wont hit them with a lead pipe or something. But for the most part unharm. Mama probally sent to out of the room to watch TV and hang out..while she does some family BIZNESS

Yea I get the end justify the means thing. But I imagine that would be a pain in people asses as well. We as a reader privy to stuff character not. So it no reason NOT to think Jack is an asshole if your a character. Really only some much shit his love ones going to put up with before they go "Fuck this guy"

Nor is there much reason for Jack to think some of the girls aren't bitches..sense he not privy to all the things they do. For all he know his family could been watching his back all this time.

If you think of it that way...perfect way to get around conflicting stories in the Create a wrestler universe.

If you read comics..I view him as Justice Leauge Batman. Bit more proactive then the super heroes tend to be right..but other heroes think he an ahole..and sometime he can be overly machavellian to the point he is an ahole. With some social skills issues

Mama more like superman..leader..call on to help people. Lot of weight on her a shoulder..bit more REACTIVE. Better sociial skills not as big a planner.
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Old 11-15-2010, 11:28 PM   #737
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Know this whole with Jack, Casey, and Mama dishing each other a new one. I kept thinking what does Zoe think about this whole situation. She seems to me as the great equalizer to this whole situation since she seems to now more about Jack then anyone else does.

Plus it amazing that she stills stays loyal to him despite all the crap he put her through so there got be something there in him that she sees that they don't.

I'm still trying to figure out why Zoe had to be hidden for so long. I have a few ideas why that is like Zoe is the daughter of Mama and one of Ms. Mcvan's husbands who was born out of wedlock and the only threat to her fortune. Or it could be simple as racism that Mama kept her out since she the only child isn't white. I don't personally don't think that but I could see a angry young Jack seeing that as the cause for abandoning Zoe especially when the whole family is bunch of rednecks which may explain why he sees Rochelle and Casey's relationship as some sort of slavery. Also since Mama could easily protect her from Mcvan's goons which is why Jack only want Mama to tell Casey who she is as some sort of confessing

Also how they keep mentioning relationships maybe it time for Jack to finally get one. Like you said, seeing Jack as batman maybe it's time for him get a catwoman in a sort of way. As some sort of opposite attract thing like catwoman is a thief and batman is a superhero but both are anti heroes. Now the question is who would be able to stand him

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Old 11-15-2010, 11:54 PM   #738
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Hmmm always assumed you knew Zoe's backstory.


Well dont want them to be to racist. Mama character has dated black guys and women. Actully in the CRIBS storyline when you see people homes..mama talked about their a black side to the family where the men a bit more tougher..and one of the luvs were part of the underground railroad

Then there casey rap career she had back in the day.

that said..I think I also mention there an angry red neck side to. So I can see Jack falsly thinking that

Always took it..as ounce their adults Mama basicly let them make their own decesions till they really get out of hand


By The way guys...


http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main....mary/madmaniac

added a bunch of stuff do create a wrestler..the cammy vs Amazon storyline

LordXorph added some stuff as well

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Old 11-16-2010, 12:04 AM   #739
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With Zoe's backstory I did in a way but like Jack's mysterious past it's a work in progress. You just make it as I go. I was just putting that question out as to what you guys think Zoe true story is.

But amazing stuff these guys put on.

I also just found a site that shows you all the sex moves with 3d animations for those like me who are visual type of people which may help improve the quality of the wrestling part

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Old 11-24-2010, 04:31 AM   #740
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I posted something.

Happy Thanksgiving.

Might post something else too.
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Old 11-25-2010, 08:40 PM   #741
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by the way Cat how Daz treating you
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Old 12-02-2010, 04:33 AM   #742
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Too hard. Lost interest in it.

Like, so many months ago that I'd actually forgotten I'd decided to try and learn it.
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Old 12-09-2010, 12:55 AM   #743
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Found another thread where Chichi is still under age:

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/90742
Still quite a few more.
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Old 12-17-2010, 01:07 AM   #744
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fixed everything.


Added some Xmas thread to the payperview section. Its the HAPPY HOLIDAYS storyline

One with a with Miss Klaws and Tess celebrating after a match
One with Dolly Vs Chichi
One with Humilatrix Vs Ashley
Cammy Vs April in a polar bear match (Great idea for a match by the way Cat)

Add to the jack story. Tried to make Mama Luv less villaness in that storyline. So the story was KIND of pulled out of my ass. Cause I couldn't think of any reason for to turn Jack into the Animal..thats not her being a complete bitch.

But thinked it worked out well. Kind of like the storyline, and connecting all the threads.

It was hard at first. Cause CHOOSE YOUR OWN ADVENTURE storylines kind of hard to connect..in a liner story..sense its connecting plots and mentions stories with contradictory endings and continuty. But got the hang of it now

And dont worry TO MUCH that it makes a 100 percent sense


speaking of mama Luv

here a nice little picture

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Old 12-17-2010, 01:09 AM   #745
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I like the what you did with mama's explanation why she did to Jack and it will add nicely to the tag team story since Super Vallery mention that Tanya was creating super wrestlers and I been trying to think how to get rid of shadow Ape and Becky since they are not part of the pay per view

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Old 12-25-2010, 01:49 PM   #746
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Old 01-23-2011, 05:48 PM   #747
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Went batshit yesterday and wrote three threads. Continuation of the Amber/Allison sexfight, of the Tara/Victoria Wen match, and the Tara/Amber sexfight.
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Old 01-24-2011, 05:05 PM   #748
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cool

will read them

Added to the Draft thread, following Casey in Japan
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Old 01-24-2011, 10:15 PM   #749
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Yeah I saw that. I'm trying to think what wrestlers besides Casey should go to Japan
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Old 02-05-2011, 12:32 PM   #750
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updated the Japan story
going to update it again soon
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