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Old 11-28-2008, 06:20 AM   #276
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on top of it. edited all i could
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Old 12-01-2008, 10:08 PM   #277
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I'm heading back to classes this week, so my contributions are probably gonna slack off again. I'll try to write some stuff tonight, but you know how it goes trying to write this stuff. You open up Chyoo, look for something to contribute, and a few seconds later you're out of the mood.
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Old 12-02-2008, 11:03 PM   #278
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well, it didn't go so well. I had the idea that Elizabeth's method of making Lisa McVan a better wrestler involved some electric stuff and orgasm denial, but I've never tried to write a bdsm thread before and I'm kind of dead in the water. maybe tomorrow I'll just skip ahead to the new Lisa, and try to add a couple threads to some fights.

also if this story starts getting m/m stuff in it i'll probably quit contributing. just saying that.
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Old 12-04-2008, 06:08 AM   #279
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hell, I barely even acknowledged the straight/mixed stuff to begin with. Not a homophobe or anything, for a dick to be around when you could just as easily have a second woman around instead.

besides, heterosexuality is totally achievable for me. lesbians are something I'm more curious about
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Old 12-05-2008, 04:25 PM   #280
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Well like Girl on guy more sometime cause I can put my mind in the guys body

I can tell myself, If I had some Viagra, and pure LACK OF SHAME the required to star in some of the movies, I can do those girls

Always figure real HOT lezbians dont want guy. Cause how do you compete with someone who has the HOME FIELD ADVANTAGE

Plus some of the girls in my stories are IMPOSSIBLE to be the way they are



Added to the TIFA VS TANYA. So they have an even number of wrestles in that fight. Figured I make them outrageous in skill

Going to be away this weekend. So you guys on your own till then
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Old 12-05-2008, 04:40 PM   #281
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I will leave you with an IDEAS

We have some seemly unstoppable BOSS character

Cassy the sex fighter
Tulip Luv (aka Granny Luv)
Thressa- Although have an idea how to stop her same way Captain America beats the TASK MASTER for your comic book fans
The two I just added
Harvey

Etc

how about a PPV where they fight each other

call in WHEN MONSTERS ATTACK pay perview


Or maybe one when tanya staff member like HUMPALOT, THE LAWYER, Clara all fight for a bonus


Also feel free to make a bio for TIFFANY ARMSTRONG. The sorroty girl character in the Yasmine vs Rochell topic

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/94329

If not I make it when I come back


also got an idea for a payperview with JUST title fights. This way we can move the titles around a bit
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Old 12-06-2008, 12:32 AM   #282
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like the idea of moving the titles, though to some fresh faces. That is, the title matches are usually either the holder demolishing some challenger or a somehow expected (but no less enjoyed) upset. Like to see title fights that don't involve a Luv or whatever regular to the title.


And while I think I understand the Taskmaster simile, I didn't read that one myself. I assume it was one of two endings: 1. physically better, or 2. how Deadpool beat him. He had no defenitive style to read, and so made up moves on the fly second by second. Think I once recommended Wendy doing that to overcome her by using her genius to create new moves as they come and blow Theresa's mind


As for the boss fights, i do think they're all beatable. got to come at them from the right angle though, and not everyone can do it. Cassie, I mostly just designed to be Mama Luv's better just because nobody seems to be. That's why you might note that most of the Cassie vs Mama posts with her winning were me. Wanted to set her up so Cassie's eventual defeat would be all the more impressive, or at least force anyone who fights her to have a real uphill challenge. Notice how Becky didn't seem to have any trouble with her when she interfered. She'll fight dirtier and more viciously than Cassie's probably used to, and more than Mama will ordinarily
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Old 12-06-2008, 02:05 AM   #283
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About the titles... that's partly why I made the Lisa McVan's stable (Lisa, Chichi, Dolly, Melissa, Alison, Wendy) trying to own all the belts. Chichi's gotten a few title shots, but the others haven't. There's a Melissa title shot against El Diabla that no one's ever written anything for, and that's it for them. Wendy's one of my favorite characters, and I've still got a fond spot for Melissa, even though it's more fun to write about her getting dominated and never quite understanding why it happened. That's partly why I started the Melissa/Alison vs Hamptons match, to give her someone to play around with.

I always thought that the boss fights in this story were basically like boss fights from any fighting game or fighting game based anime (not that I watch any anime or read comic books anymore... never really got into the anime and comic books got too expensive after I got hooked on Everquest 2). They're all beatable, but not "normally". Someone beating them would have to have a super-good strategy or achieve personal insight or learn from the master or fight with strength granted to them by their loved ones. Or the fans. Hi, Hogan.

I'd also figured something for the bodyguards is that Tanya selected them so they could neutralize each other in case of emergency. Theresa has the skill to break down even Harvey's muscle, Ninjette has the speed to go through Theresa's skill, Alice is just immune to Ninjette's tricks, and Harvey can throw Alice 50 feet through the air if she starts with him.

Juan and Elizabeth I always pictured more as the advisor types, probably good enough to win by themselves but there's nothing superhuman about their skills, they're important for other reasons. If I'd gotten to Juan's biography first I was going to have his backstory be that he was just a normal Luchador who got such a reputation from the "ring rats" that Tanya got wind of his reputation, imported him and had him formally trained. The best girls in the league could probably beat him just by refusing to sexfight him. As for Elizabeth, I figured her weakness is that she's so scientific she never accounts for things like determination, fan support, or anything that can't be broken down into easily definable numbers.
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Old 12-06-2008, 02:12 AM   #284
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always imagined that Tanya recruited her guards with stricter standards than her wrestlers. Mama's a crowd pleaser and a pro, but a bit rebelious. She has her group fairly specialized, but without glaring weaknesses, expertly trained and funded, and probably most of all, loyal. nobody's going to pay them more than her, so they're either mercenary or just somehow in her debt. they're not all pro wrestlers, they're just pros.

part of why I originally never even wrote details for these characters. they were just supposed to be that Tanya knows better than random bouncers acting as her real bodyguards, using the real fighters and killers for bigger things than stage fighting (regardless of how real it is, apparently...)
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Old 12-09-2008, 04:19 AM   #285
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well i just realized something about the world this league exists in: there are no ugly people
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Old 12-11-2008, 12:22 AM   #286
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that and NO ONE uses condoms

NO ONE!!!!


but that the same for all chyoo stories accept a few

Hell where the few that gave an explantion....SUPER SCI FI BIRTH CONTROL

Bosses yea imagine that all beatble. Hell thinking if by fighting game standard. CHUN LI can beat the HULK in a fighting game by kicking him in the face. Just takes a while and should be a rather big deal when it happens


The taskmaster thing was Cap just did moves off the fly, that taskmaster didnt learn let

Batman also did something similar with a character calle prometous. He just started fighting real dirty and cheap. Cause no one expect a member of a the JUSTICE LEAUGE to try to kick you in the nuts

added to the champion pay perview

tried to do FLASHY entracnes
will add the to the santa character, sense it IZ the season

May add to to the Jack character

ohh seem we got a new writer who justed added SECONDS before I wrote this

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Old 12-11-2008, 12:25 AM   #287
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Oh by the way

here the XMAS thing Luffy made

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/95273
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Old 12-11-2008, 12:40 AM   #288
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also anyone remeber that EXTRA slot trick

want to add an interview for MS klaw in the interview section
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Old 12-11-2008, 03:10 AM   #289
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i want to apologize in advance lilguy if i stole a few lines from some of characters of the new threads you put up for my character they were too good that I couldn't pass up since it was basically in the same situation with the same characters such letting you know
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Old 12-11-2008, 08:50 AM   #290
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its ok

I like how you keeping the fights pretty well match

When I first read the Jack story. Thought it would be just Jack totaly destroying chicks, raping them with his MONSTER cock and beating them, to show these bitches thier place

It wouldnt be the first male character like that in the story actully. Which I have nothing against actully, sense say the more variety the better, sense you can always just ignore a thread


But Monica put up a pretty good fight. Tanya got some good shots in as well. Jack always seem to win but with a some bruise, Kind of like Bruce willise die hard character
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Old 12-11-2008, 09:38 AM   #291
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yeah i notice that i just didn't want him to go down easily without a fight besides the one with Tanya he to win since it was a do or die and Jessie match might be one to since it a twisted way of saving her by showing he dosnt care. but i try my best not to godmodeling where he unstoppable just that he had great teachers like Dr.Humpalot where she probably physically and mentally train him to handle a lot situations

Like if you get hit with some strange chemical and you feel weak keep going
If you get smother by tits or pussy slow your breathing and meditate
Or if you get fuck by a strap-on don't worry about being humiliated try to think of a way out instead.

That sort of thing and the reasons that he didn't fuck people like Lisa was just me showing how much she hates her mother that she would pass a good fuck from a man like Jack and try to destroy her mother but I like how she tries to make him lick her pussy I should make that as a underlying joke between them. I wanted to surprise readers on who send that note to Lisa with attacking Kim since Tanya said to use whatever means possible to get their attention and also to surprise them on what type of match Jack had plan like he was controlling the strings But damn Lilguy you ruined it all ^-^ but hey it was worth it. With Monica I just try to create a sexual tension between the two where he had the chance twice to fuck her but didn't. Also to show how unpredictable he his where he helps someone and then he turns around and attacks them. You also forgot about short match with Tanya Stevens in the gym I added that to the biker bar thread to make the training session longer.

Sorry if i get too analytical with my writing English was a good subject of mine so stop me if go on like this.

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Old 12-11-2008, 04:14 PM   #292
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aye. English: Writing major, and this' where it gets me -,-
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Old 12-11-2008, 04:21 PM   #293
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not to get off topic but what do u mean by that
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Old 12-13-2008, 12:00 AM   #294
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I finally got started on writing a little. Did a bit of Melissa/Delisha. Gonna see what else I can do, I'm looking at Dixie Bitches/Loot&Plunder and Ales/Cammy.
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Old 12-14-2008, 01:24 AM   #295
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not to get off topic but what do u mean by that
majoring in writing. just that this' probably the only stuff I've have read outside of friends or classes, since I haven't got a writing career yet. Partly explains my aforementioned love of character development and such


I'm also really liking how Scott and Debbie are being applied a lot more lately.

also, gents, in case you haven't noticed... we have a rival
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Old 12-14-2008, 09:50 AM   #296
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yeah never went for a writing major just was always as good making stories since i was a kids with plots and character development helped keep me entertain. but yeah I saw the competition its good i don't like how they make it seem less real like create a wrestler seem to be
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Old 12-14-2008, 12:01 PM   #297
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hey I added to them

so I dont mind it.

something about Jack that historic. He the only wrestler that actully got arrested when they commited various crimes. Well least before their introduction. So least thier SOME JUSTICE IN THIS WORLD

April the felon Bio..she got an arrest in her Bio. But you havent seen her get arrested
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Old 12-14-2008, 05:50 PM   #298
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yeah i notice you did that i didn't say traitors help wrote it since hey if the guys who created a wrestler wrote it. It must not be that bad besides like i said i like it it just not my type of tea for some reason
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Old 12-16-2008, 12:38 AM   #299
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it does have a different tone to it. sounds more like actual wrestling, with characters visibly having conscious gimmicks (the African girl from Detroit who pretends to be an African amazon), while most of ours are just remotely insane

as for the prison thing, I've gotten a kind of understanding of the Create a Wrestler world being largely centered around the wrestling league. It's one of the most successful businesses out there, apparently, its stars are rich and successful, and apparently laws in our own world don't apply to a lot of these matches. In other words, the world in general seems to be obsessed with this league one way or another, and Tanya probably runs a good part of the world on technicalities alone
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Yeah that true besides Jack probably went to jail because he a male talk about equal rights for all
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