new story!
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Dr. Tentakelliebe
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You're not Marooned or just Another brick in the wall
so Breathe
We're just Comfortably Numbed
so Breathe
We're just Comfortably Numbed
Dr. Tentakelliebe
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wicker said:
Alright here is the straight sooth.
I think you have given just enough info for people not want take too much liberty but not enough for them to feel comfortable what you want where you want them to go.
Also, while I can't speak for everyone, I am a little tired of people who are controlled with no way to resist, black mail gives them choice but mind control is just too much like rape (if not being so).
sorry
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wicker said:
Prime the pump. Add some interesting threads with teaser hooks at the end.
I recall it's been discussed how to promote a story:
-- add enough threads to get a feel of progress in a couple of directions
-- add a new thread every day or two to keep the story in the recent list
-- talk about updates on the Chyoo forum.
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wicker said:
I too was intrigued by your story but was waiting to see how you developed a little first. I agree that you're direction is specific (in terms of naming specific characters) so that you seem to have a plan, but too general (in terms of leaving it wide open otherwise) that I'm not sure which direction to take it. After all, a dangling tangential submission is no good to anyone.
In "White Slavery", for example (PLUG!), I started the same way, identifying characters, and I had to put in a lot of follow-up threads before others took the initiative...
well, I left an "others" thread for people who didn't like the three characters I started with or who want to develop their own characters in the depth they see fit or be more specific.
But the threads are taking lives of their own. For example in one thread with the perky cheerleader, the video put her in a trance, but on the Victoria thread the video had no physical effects.
I decided to put the idea forth and let others take it in directions I may not have thought of.
But the threads are taking lives of their own. For example in one thread with the perky cheerleader, the video put her in a trance, but on the Victoria thread the video had no physical effects.
I decided to put the idea forth and let others take it in directions I may not have thought of.
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Jenny.
Well, I just added a new thread, my first in a few years, I think. I tried not to make it too long to read, and yet make the characters distinctive.
Well, I just added a new thread, my first in a few years, I think. I tried not to make it too long to read, and yet make the characters distinctive.
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I thought your thread was a good start, Uncola Man. Jenny seems stuck up, but not the complete, unrelenting bitch that I seem to always turn unpleasant characters into.
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Why thank you. I also tried to make Karla timid enough that they wouldn't instantly degenerate into a master-slave relationship.
I hope.
I hope.
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Hardly eerie. I have stories that haven't new contributions in years.
Besides, this is Finals week going into overtime right now, so people might be putting their best writing skills elsewhere. I know I am.
Besides, this is Finals week going into overtime right now, so people might be putting their best writing skills elsewhere. I know I am.
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Good luck with Finals.
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