Old 10-19-2006, 02:05 PM   #1
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Tricked Into Incest

I was just thinking about an idea, but maybe someone else should cover it. My plate is full at the moment. It's a 50 year old man who gets divorced from his wife, after years of mutual loathing due to mutual adultery (that is, they both cheated on each other, every chance that they got). No sooner than he meets a fine girl at work that he wants to screw, but she proves VERY interested. So, he balls her and then wakes up to find a note, telling him that she was his daughter, that he screwed her on her most fertile day, and that she is now carrying his child. She leaves a number too. She also says that she wants more of him and so does her twin sister (also his daughter, of course).
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Old 10-19-2006, 06:12 PM   #2
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Interesting. I'd like to see where others take this.
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Old 10-20-2006, 01:31 AM   #3
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I was just thinking about an idea, but maybe someone else should cover it. My plate is full at the moment. It's a 50 year old man who gets divorced from his wife, after years of mutual loathing due to mutual adultery (that is, they both cheated on each other, every chance that they got). No sooner than he meets a fine girl at work that he wants to screw, but she proves VERY interested. So, he balls her and then wakes up to find a note, telling him that she was his daughter, that he screwed her on her most fertile day, and that she is now carrying his child. She leaves a number too. She also says that she wants more of him and so does her twin sister (also his daughter, of course).
I guess what I find a bit hard to believe is that the guy doesn't know about the daughter for 18+ years, especially if the divorce was as bitter as you say. Also what is the daughter's motivation? Also, how can the daughter possibly know after one night that the fucking took?

This actually reminds me a bit of a movie plot. It was a really screwed up Japanese movie. Anyway, what if it were both the father and the daughter who are tricked into having the affair? Maybe the mother hates the daughter for some screwed up reason, and gets a friend (who is also friends with the daughter) to set the daughter up on a blind date with her father.
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Old 10-20-2006, 10:48 AM   #4
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I while back I started a chain story from which the other author dropped out about a daughter who was working as a high class escort in Boston. Every year the escort company threw a big soiree to hook new clients. It was a masquerade ball. The father attends, gets hooked on this hot young woman who carries on intelligent conversation to go with the great body. He makes some untoward and aggressive moves, but his daughter (which he doesn't know and she doesn't know) refuses to work with him.

Father is wealthy and high powered and starts having her tailed, spied on, recorded, etc. Ultimately it does come up that she is his daughter but he is too hookd on her.
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Old 10-20-2006, 11:19 AM   #5
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I guess what I find a bit hard to believe is that the guy doesn't know about the daughter for 18+ years, especially if the divorce was as bitter as you say. Also what is the daughter's motivation? Also, how can the daughter possibly know after one night that the fucking took?

This actually reminds me a bit of a movie plot. It was a really screwed up Japanese movie. Anyway, what if it were both the father and the daughter who are tricked into having the affair? Maybe the mother hates the daughter for some screwed up reason, and gets a friend (who is also friends with the daughter) to set the daughter up on a blind date with her father.
This wasn't a daughter from the ex. This was a daughter from some other woman, born out of wedlock. And she's guessing about the pregnancy, because she is fertile and there was no protection.
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An odd "revenge"?

Does anyone remember the movie First Wives' Club? In it, the daughter of Annie (throwing out a guess on the character's name!) takes on a job at her father's law firm (yes, he knows the girl is his daughter though) so she can be a mole for Mom and the other women of the "club".

What if, in some twisted way, mother and daughter conspire to fuck up dad's life when the "unknown" to him young woman seduces him...has unprotected sex...becomes pregnant...and then ?????????
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Added thought.

I suppose blackmail money could be a great way for mom to seek back child support the father never paid. (Of course, this wouldn't be a "bitter divorce" couple, unless he had no idea she was pregnant when the divorce was final.)
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I suppose blackmail money could be a great way for mom to seek back child support the father never paid. (Of course, this wouldn't be a "bitter divorce" couple, unless he had no idea she was pregnant when the divorce was final.)
I appreciate the suggestions (though I'm no fan of the First Wives' Club). However, this is NOT his ex's daughter. This girl is his daughter from a fling. He didn't know that her mother, one of his old lovers, was pregnant. She just wants to know the man who brought her into this world. The only twist is that she wants to get to know him in the biblical sense, as does her twin.

To clarify, he is not a scumbag. He's a flawed man who was unfaithful during his marriage, as was his ex-wife. He's not a deadbeat. That's not the angle that I am going for. Of course, the other angle is certainly possible, but I was presenting a different slant or twist on things. Just a suggestion.
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I appreciate the suggestions (though I'm no fan of the First Wives' Club). However, this is NOT his ex's daughter. This girl is his daughter from a fling. He didn't know that her mother, one of his old lovers, was pregnant. She just wants to know the man who brought her into this world. The only twist is that she wants to get to know him in the biblical sense, as does her twin.

To clarify, he is not a scumbag. He's a flawed man who was unfaithful during his marriage, as was his ex-wife. He's not a deadbeat. That's not the angle that I am going for. Of course, the other angle is certainly possible, but I was presenting a different slant or twist on things. Just a suggestion.
It makes more sense that this is a daughter from a fling rather than fom his bitter wife's loins. But the question still remains why does the daughter want to get to know her father biblically? Just some strange obsession?

I'm not shooting this down altogether, since the story line is already more creative than most of the incest stories. But I really want to know why the daughter wants this?
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It makes more sense that this is a daughter from a fling rather than fom his bitter wife's loins. But the question still remains why does the daughter want to get to know her father biblically? Just some strange obsession?

I'm not shooting this down altogether, since the story line is already more creative than most of the incest stories. But I really want to know why the daughter wants this?
Could be an Electra complex. Could be just plain kinkiness. Who knows? Any number of reasons. Maybe she wants to know what all of the fuss is about, once she finds out what a lover her dad is. Or maybe it's a cry for attention. I don't know. I'll figure it out, or someone else will, depending upon who writes it.

I think that it would work better if the mother of his daughter married someone else. Maybe the girl has a vicious stepfather that she can't stand.

Oh, and I think that it's quite possible that, due to his wife's infidelity, his "own" kids from the marriage are really another man's. In which case, his discovery that he has some biological issue would be more significant to him.
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Could be an Electra complex. Could be just plain kinkiness. Who knows? Any number of reasons. Maybe she wants to know what all of the fuss is about, once she finds out what a lover her dad is. Or maybe it's a cry for attention. I don't know. I'll figure it out, or someone else will, depending upon who writes it.

I think that it would work better if the mother of his daughter married someone else. Maybe the girl has a vicious stepfather that she can't stand.

Oh, and I think that it's quite possible that, due to his wife's infidelity, his "own" kids from the marriage are really another man's. In which case, his discovery that he has some biological issue would be more significant to him.
I think the vicious step-father is a great idea. That could definately explain why she has this total hang-up on her real father. Especially if her mother always talked well about him, and regrets not holding on to him.
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I think the vicious step-father is a great idea. That could definately explain why she has this total hang-up on her real father. Especially if her mother always talked well about him, and regrets not holding on to him.
Indeed. That would lend itself to some infatuation with her father, or at least the idea of him.
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Old 10-20-2006, 10:30 PM   #13
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I really like your idea SEVERUSMAX, daughters exploiting their father, I don't know if you agree but I think it'd be really good if the story went on and the father got more and more entangled, the daughters would keep building up their hold on him and their ability to expose him. To be honest I don't like the pregnancy aspect, maybe the Dad could be a public figure and the daughters just threaten that

When I was little my Dad died, ever since I kind of developed I've always thought of my Dad sexually, I always fantasize about him, I don't know what he looked like or anything, he died of a drug overdose so it felt much worse as I got older, like he had a choice and could've lived and looked after me, I suppose I've gone for one extreme of not having a Dad at all to having this really, unusually loving relationship with him, it's kind of pathetic, there's always like this element where he's exploiting me though, when I imagine such things, you know? I don't want to sound like I'm whining or anything, but I think you can make it good story from two girls who've never had a relationship with their father wanting to create one. Maybe a sexual one just takes far less time and imagination, and you want it so bad you can't wait, but it's difficult not to let some negative's enter and influence you, like when I fantasize about my Dad he's always doing something with me he so obviously shouldn't, it's not like we're in this dream world together.

Have you seen the film 'The Ballad of Jack and Rose'? It's about a father and daughter who live in isolation and obviously develop sexual feelings for each other, so the father moves a family between them and the daughter gets so desperate to be alone with him again, she goes kind of crazy, it's so beautiful though, it has a tragic ending though. But I thought of this when I read your idea, except the daughter wouldn't be as mental as Rose was...

Anyway, whatever comes of it I'd be really interested in the story, I didn't mean to ruin it or anything
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