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Old 06-15-2016, 06:47 PM   #1
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"I Don't Need" - no critiques needed, but discussion welcome

Youíd be surprised what I donít need.

I donít need your pity. I donít need your lust or your cock.

I can do without malicious games. I can do without ignorance and negligence. I can do without your brown eyes and soft touch.

I donít need to be toyed with. Fucked with. Railroaded. I donít need to be told what I want.

I donít need your love. Your veiled kindnesses. Your allusions to care.

I donít need a daddy. A dominant. A protector.

And I certainly donít need this pain. So take it, and go. I donít need you any more.
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Old 06-15-2016, 09:54 PM   #2
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What discussions do you want if not critique?
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Old 06-16-2016, 07:46 AM   #3
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What discussions do you want if not critique?
Was simply hoping it might spark others to share heartbreak. To share their own poems. Discussion without thought to structure or form. Something like this isn't a poem so much as my innermost thoughts. I thought perhaps someone would identify and feel like opening themselves.
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Old 06-19-2016, 07:42 PM   #4
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Things I always felt I don't need: a liar, a thief, to be told what I need to do, and I don't need to be exploited by people that take my kindness as a sign of weakness. 👠👠👠Kant

Despite what I don't need, you'd be surprised at how many people who are willing to challenge those boundaries I have set for myself.
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Old 06-19-2016, 07:48 PM   #5
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Things I always felt I don't need: a liar, a thief, to be told what I need to do, and I don't need to be exploited by people that take my kindness as a sign of weakness. 👠👠👠Kant

Despite what I don't need, you'd be surprised at how many people who are willing to challenge those boundaries I have set for myself.
Thank you, Kant. I identify with you on all those points, especially the exploited kindness.

It wouldn't surprise me at all! I have a life time of that very thing behind me. Standing up and voicing what we don't need can be paramount to climbing Everest for some of us. For me, setting boundaries is easy. But protecting those boundaries I find very difficult.
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