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Old 02-11-2006, 08:01 PM   #26
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How about a starship that can go faster than light but requires male sperms (which was discovered to contains baby universes within each sperm cell) and female eggs to power the ship. We could have a bunch of genertically enginnered male slaves strapped with their cocks and sack massage to produce copious sperm supply while the ship is crewed by hot women, wearing transparent smartsuits that allow their flesh to be seen and even to be fucked in. Their job is to both provide relaxing enviroment for the passagers and to arouse their male slaves with various sex acts they're trained in. The male sperms are shoot and they continuelly enter the sole female breeder slave who is the hear of the star drive. Her womb and pussy are wired to the ship's engins and her fertlized eggs are converted into unlimited energy. As they are bathed in shifting zones, they matured rapidily into nine month old babies within a 24 hours. The breeder then give birth and the babies are then drop off at each colony's School for the Special Children where the girls (all are girls of various races) grow up to become the super race of humans.
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Old 02-11-2006, 11:39 PM   #27
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I had a scifi idea... called "Planet of Women". It's 3000 something, and there's a shortage of men... they exist, but there's like less than a million on the planet. They leave at an increasing rate, and the guys left on the planet are mostly geeks and dorks. Only the richest women are allowed to marry, and due to the guys leaving the planet having to leave a sperm sample before they depart (by law) the need for men is mostly sexual. there is now Male prostitution isa much needed thing.. Ohhh but it's so hard to reinvent a world. But I truly want this story...
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Old 02-12-2006, 12:49 AM   #28
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I've written a rather legnthy end of the world tale (not yet on Lit) pitting a small select group of sex crazed individuals lead by some horny goddess diety vs a bunch of devil worshiping sexless people. Sort of Sci-Fi, mostly humor based with a cool twist ending.


A few of my Sci-Fi/Humorous tales..

4 Trekkies eyes only...
http://english.literotica.com:81/sto....php?id=168364

Hot chic tale...
http://english.literotica.com:81/sto....php?id=155314

Every guys worst fears...
http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=154572

Pornography Zone stuff...
http://english.literotica.com:81/sto....php?id=195208
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Old 02-12-2006, 10:38 AM   #29
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Another time-stopping story

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Originally Posted by THE_TRUE_GOD
Similar is The Best of Time - Man sees opportunity in faulty clock. Submitted by dr. wankenstein (Sci-Fi & Fantasy ) 11/29/03. (No connection with me).

On a more general point, SciFi and Erotica don't mix easily. Anne Mc Caffrey tried and, by her own admission, failed in Get Off The Unicorn; if she can't do it who among us mere mortals would dare?
Thanks for the referral to The Best of Time - it's a good story and is similar to the one I was looking for. I also found Cheating Time: A Little Fun. It also is a hot time-stopping story. Some of you good sci-fi writers should take on more of these.
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Old 02-12-2006, 01:11 PM   #30
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I was thinking recently of a story where somebody from our time is transported to a future earth. Not exactly time transport but the old hit on the head and wakes up type thing -- sort of like Rip Van Winkle. I'm not sure what he would find in this future but the mores and morals would be decidedly different. Perhaps a cad and horn dog bent on sexual conquests lands in a future earth where sex is as casual as it can get (a la "Brave New World" & "1984"). He goes on a carnal tear for a while but decides he misses the chase even more than the catch and starts to try and introduce romance or intrigue back to this future group. I don't know how that would work just something that came to me the other day.

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Old 02-12-2006, 02:03 PM   #31
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Fanfiction

Dose anybody else have fanfiction they would like to discuss here? Star wars, star trek, Battlestar Galactica, etc. For me, I wonder what it would be like if Natlie Portman and young Carrie Fisher are thrown into a different time and they have hot bi sex and only later did they realize that they were mother and daughter.
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Old 02-12-2006, 03:12 PM   #32
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Hey, I know! Have like a great big spaceship-washing bay in space and it has a female AI controlling it, and the spaceship is actually a male AI, and the ship (which is actually shaped like a big, fat penis) loves the feeling when he gets into the scrubber bay so he keeps hijacking control away from the crew when he gets horny and going through the girl-scrubbie-washbay back and forth and back and forth.. and they're actually supposed to be on a mission but they can't get more than a few light-years away before the ship gets horny again!!

I'm kidding by the way... :Þ

I'm going to be honest, and I hope nobody takes this the wrong way, but some of those ideas are just... um... not very good. Unless you managed to pull it off as a sci-fi spoof of some kind, and it was actually funny (and they are funny ideas), I just wouldn't be able to read it through.
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Old 02-12-2006, 04:02 PM   #33
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[QUOTE/]I'm going to be honest, and I hope nobody takes this the wrong way, but some of those ideas are just... um... not very good. Unless you managed to pull it off as a sci-fi spoof of some kind, and it was actually funny (and they are funny ideas), I just wouldn't be able to read it through.[/quote]

All the story ideas are good. What count is not the story idea but how to communicate them. I means writing about a horny guy wandering around Dublin all day don't sound very exciting unless it's by that Irish guy wearing a eye patch. Or talking about a dead rich guy through different people's conversation sound boring unless it was done by a fat guy named Wells.
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Old 02-12-2006, 05:33 PM   #34
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Science Fiction Erotica

Story ideas are exactly what the name implies -- ideas. It doesn't mean that the story is in final form or that it won't develop. What really matters is what is done with that story idea and how a writer plays with it and develops its full potential. So to say that story ideas are "not very good" and would only work as "spoofs" or humor is short sighted. And as sensualpilgrim points out many stories sound boring or uninteresting until somebody actually writes it down and takes it in a way that we couldn't ever imagine. So give sci-fi erotica a chance after all erotica has its own detractors that say nothing original or interesting can be done with it so why not discard it outright. We all know there is plenty of excellent stuff here.
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Old 02-12-2006, 07:11 PM   #35
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More on SF Erotica

I want to add that I see this trend as not only about story ideas but also as a place for people to share their own fantasies with SF elements or to discuss their favorite SF erotica stories or art here. This way, we can learn from other the better way to write or to find a hotter topic or an interesting insight too. After all this topic is about hot sex and ideas mixed together.

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Old 02-12-2006, 07:17 PM   #36
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Who are Your Favorite Authors?

I'm curious who are your favorite SF erotic authors?

My list:
Robert A. Heinlein
Dragonfly
Just Divine19

Who else?!
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Old 02-12-2006, 10:07 PM   #37
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Well, then. Consider it to be a friendly challenge...

ps: if you doubt their existance, ask any newspaper editor about bad story ideas
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I will admit that there can be bad story ideas. My main concern is what is done with a story idea. When I was working on my masters degree my advisor would always say to me "so what." It sounds harsh and at the time it was but he was trying to get me to come up with a hook for my research -- what and how does it contribute to the scholarship. I think that is no less true for any writing. At first the story idea might sound boring but its how we choose for the characters to interact and react to their surroundings, its the twist we put on the plot that gives the story its "so what" or reason to exist. For example writing a story about an alcoholic can be very boring since their lives can be just as tedious and mundane as anybody else but when that alcoholic is in "The Shining" things get a lot more interesting.

As for my favorite sf writers:

Robert Heinlein (is descriptions of many female characters are highly erotic and sexualized, plus his philosophic positions on free love and the such lend themselves to many erotic plots -- Stranger in a Strangeland, I Will Fear No Evil and to a lesser exten For Us the Living).

I think Robert Howard, the original author of Conan, deserves a mention. He always found wonderful words to describe his dark-haired exotic beauties that Conan always bedded. These words are just highly charged with sexuality and eroticism -- words like supple, lithe, lush. If my memory serves one story even describes a female pirate that hooks up with Conan as a tigress in bed.

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Old 02-14-2006, 02:07 AM   #39
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Originally Posted by GratefulFred
I've written a rather legnthy end of the world tale (not yet on Lit) pitting a small select group of sex crazed individuals lead by some horny goddess diety vs a bunch of devil worshiping sexless people. Sort of Sci-Fi, mostly humor based with a cool twist ending.


A few of my Sci-Fi/Humorous tales..

4 Trekkies eyes only...
http://english.literotica.com:81/sto....php?id=168364

Hot chic tale...
http://english.literotica.com:81/sto....php?id=155314

Every guys worst fears...
http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=154572

Pornography Zone stuff...
http://english.literotica.com:81/sto....php?id=195208

Fred... I think I wanna read a couple of those. I'm definitely a trekkie. Thanx!

My fav Sf writers include:

Jonathan Blish
Ray Bradbury
Robert Aspirin
Peter David
HP Lovecraft
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Old 02-14-2006, 08:06 AM   #40
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Thanks Rydia.

I am a devotee to Rod Sterling and Richard Matheson and all those great Twilight Zone authors. Somewhere along the line I read Douglas Adams and saw my calling in life to combine the 2 elements of humor and short sci-fantasy tales.

Hot off todays deep knee presses...
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I'd hate to see this thread die. I love the old Twilight Zones. Over New Year's I was hooked on a marathon on the SciFi channel. I know looking at the some attractive women they had in the various roles just inspired my mind with filthy story ideas. I haven't worked anything out but they were definitely in there.

Some more of my favorite scifi authors:
HP Lovecraft
Jules Verne
Ray Bradbury
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What I love about sci-fi is the chance to envision worlds where all of the assumptions and mores of our society are not relevant or are viewed more critically. A lot of possibilities.
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I'm particularly interested in futuristic scenarios lately. One idea that I had involves a world where the Y chromosome has become rare and harder to reproduce (though not impossible). This results in much fewer men, giving them the "Leverage of Scarcity" (they have more options than the women do).

Say, about 5% of the world's population is male, but certain men have foreseen this day and manipulated the course of events by forming a semi-secret society that eventually takes over the world. They form a ruling elite that appoints the political leaders of every nation and rules from communal temples (not exactly monasteries, however, if you get my drift).

This regime is called the United Human Patriarchy, and the elite order of men is the Brotherhood of Man. It is headed by a Patriarch, elected for life by a Zodiac Council (one member for each sign of the zodiac). Its members worship phallic gods and call each other "Brother John" or "Brother Carl", etc.

The priests are trained in martial-arts, combat, mysticism, astrology, science, government, etc. They are brought up in the temples from the end of their potty training until manhood (their earliest years handled by carefully selected female nurses, the only women allowed in any part of the temples for longer than 24 hours). If there is an acute shortage of men, they are cloned.

The only civil society that exists is female. With men focused on providing
philosophical and spiritual leadership, as well as basically dominating the affairs of state, the women concentrate on making money. They enter lesbian marriages (the only kind that still exists), but are required to service the "Brethren" whenever called upon to do so and bear them children. Female children are still brought up by their mothers, but males are turned over to the approved nurses of the temples' nursing staff.

Women are encouraged to be VERY feminine, in spite of their interest in careers, and take turns raising daughters with their mates. Government propaganda pushes non-violence, compassion, maternal instincts, and everything else that might make them docile subjects of the State. The only females who are armed are the police, and they are only permitted to carry batons. Mace and pepper spray are things of the past, as are "women's self-defense" classes.

Men, on the other hand, are taught to renounce sentimentality, mercy, romanticism, fashion, "excessive consumerism and greed", and the concepts of family and marriage. Logic, martial instincts, ruthless justice, and promiscuity are reinforced constantly. Only firm adherence to the principles of the Brotherhood and respect for a hierarchy based on seniority and merit give the regime the discipline necessary to hold onto power (which it has for 2,000 years at this point).

Its members are heavily armed and wear either long, red robes (for rituals) or plain black suits. They all have short hair and goatees. They also tend to be bisexual in practice, mating with each other when not requiring sexual services (quite frequently) from their subjects.

The year is 4300. This scenario sort of reminds me of Katherine Hepburn's suggestion that men and women shouldn't live together, but just visit each other. I am not endorsing this kind of world, but I thought it might fascinating to readers- a sort of Plato's Republic with a heavy misogynistic bent.
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Severusmax, I really like the way you want to try and turn the female society on its head. The brief outline you give sounds intriguing. I was wondering if its a story outline you'd develop over several stories or how you'd expand upon the world. There seems to be so much good stuff there that you couldn't do it justice in a short story. Let me know what you think.

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What's Your Favorite story?

Here is the story by Dragonfly which I really like. She gave me permission to try making a graphic novel out of this. - Pilgrim

The Brood
by Dragonfly (address withheld)

***

Alien abductions can be fun after the shock wears off...
(F/alien, reluc, mc, sci-fi, preg, insects)

***

She had heard the news several months earlier but didn’t
believe a word of it.

"Some newly discovered planet is going to hurtle down
and mess up the earth. Right. What a bunch of
bullshit!"

Carmen was soon proven to be quite wrong, however. NASA
scientists did indeed announce to the world that
following summer that a new planet, or asteroid, or
collection of space debris, or comet, or something was
coming quite close to earth and could cause all sorts
of problems, from reversing the magnetic poles to the
earth tearing itself to shreds from the gravitational
pull. What happened in the end was somewhere in
between.

***

Carmen and Amanda were on lunch break, and, as usual,
were making their way up Park Street to the little
place they always ate. They were trying to bring some
normalcy back, some security blanket to help them get
through the knowledge that their world could forever
change. The sky had a perpetual yellowish cast these
days, and the sunsets were blood red. The news was
reporting NASA accounts of pre-contact debris in the
atmosphere, the foreshadowing of the impending contact
with TF109, the asteroid on everyone’s mind.

The tabloids all screamed about an alien invasion in
the wake of the space debris or whatever it was, and
although Carmen laughed at them in the supermarket
check-out line, she and everyone around her was
secretly frightened out of their wits. No one could
really be sure what would happen when the asteroid
passed by Earth, and the entire event was so crazy that
aliens seemed just as likely as anything else that had
been happening within the past couple of months.

Strange storm clouds… earthquakes… the slight wobble in
the previously perfect orbit of the moon… it was all
anyone could do to try and keep a grip on their lives.

So Carmen and Amanda, like the others who still went to
work every day, were playing a game – a game of "let’s
pretend life is just the way it always was." The thin
veneer of sanity was getting thinner, however, as the
skies darkened and the news grew more dire.

The women had almost made it to the restaurant, the
place where they could turn away from the sky and
pretend everything was normal.

As soon as they heard the humming sound coming from
above them, they couldn’t help but look up. And then
they heard the screaming from everywhere around them as
other people in the busy downtown district heard the
humming and looked up as well. Silver ships were in the
skies. Silver ovals that hummed and sat still in the
sky like some kind of perverted hummingbird. But it
wasn’t nectar they wanted.

Suddenly, on the street before them and in seemingly
random places around them, creatures appeared within a
golden haze. They were like huge insects, their
multiple jointed limbs glistening metallic in the
weakened sunlight, their faceted eyes taking in the
slightest movement on the city streets around them,
their scaly bodies and winged backs looking much like
psychedelic praying mantises.

At some point Carmen snapped out of her stunned
observation and realized that she should probably run
away. She took a step backward, and the head of the
nearest creature swiveled around quickly to focus on
her.

The thing lunged toward the two women and before she
could think, Carmen saw Amanda grabbed and hoisted
aloft by four great segmented arms. She stood there
gaping and before she could recover, Carmen was
snatched away as well by one of the huge insects.

***

Carmen hadn’t remembered fainting, but the next thing
she knew, she came to herself in the arms of one of the
insect-like aliens. The air was hot, much hotter than
she had remembered it, and, her head still swimming and
threatening to go black again on her, Carmen looked
around. They were in the middle of nowhere – no, not
nowhere exactly. They were in the desert. The reddish-
tan sands shimmered in a mirage, and she could just
make out mountains in the distance, past the scraggly
sage brush and sparse rock outcroppings.

But that was the last of the outside world that Carmen
would ever see.

Still held in the creature’s arms, they entered a large
cave, with other creatures before and behind them, each
one carrying a human. She was reminded of a trail of
ants carrying food back to the nest… then she began to
panic. Struggling and crying out, she soon realized
that the tight grip of the alien was far too strong for
her to ever escape. Then her eyes became accustomed to
the darkness and she looked at her surroundings.

The hive was enormous, and looked much like a series of
lava tube tunnels. She could hear chitonous bodies rub
together in the darkness ahead of her, and, deeper in
the tunnels, the screams and moans of human beings. She
was being taken deeper.

The air grew cooler as they traveled, and it wasn’t
long before the "ant trail" ended at an immense
underground chamber. The creature quickly and neatly
sliced off all Carmen’s clothing, which was immediately
discarded, then carried her over to one of the walls
where a honeycomb-like structure was being constructed
to accommodate the human bodies. She was deposited
inside one of the cells and, before she could react,
was sealed inside by one of the aliens. Rather than a
solid wall, like inside a wax beehive, all the walls
were transparent, almost like glass.

Carmen was mortified to find herself trapped behind
completely transparent walls without clothing, then she
noted that all the other humans were just as naked as
she was. She squinted in the dim light, trying to find
a way out of her prison, but soon found that the clear
walls were just as slick as glass, too.

Looking out into the central chamber, Carmen tried to
make heads or tails of what was happening. The darkness
was alleviated by a few thin ventilation shafts in the
ceiling, and to her amazement, Carmen could just make
out her friend Amanda in the next section, sealed into
her own transparent cell just as she was.

After what seemed like hours, a medium-sized insect
came skittering down the passage and stopped at
Amanda’s cell. The alien creature sliced the door open
with its sharp mandibles and Amanda screamed, tears
rolling down her pale cheeks.

The great creature grasped her gently, however. It
considered her with its compound eyes, and stroked
Amanda’s head with one of its legs while thrumming
deeply as if to calm her. It actually worked – she
simply looked up at her captor with fear instead of
terror. The insect gingerly removed her from her cell
and brought Amanda into the center of the room under a
shaft of sunlight.

It continued stroking and caressing the young woman and
it looked to Carmen like she had stopped trembling and
was starting to actually enjoy the gentle attention the
monster was giving her. Carmen also noticed that the
end of the insect’s body had been lengthening slightly
as it stroked Amanda, and it began to curve around
toward the woman. She wracked her brain frantically…
where had she seen something like this before?

Amanda was now happily cuddling inside the tender
embrace of the huge alien, her eyes closed. Suddenly
Carmen remembered.

"Amanda!! Oh my god!" She pounded on the transparent
door of her cell but the girl didn’t seem to hear her.
"Amanda!!!"

The insect had somehow mollified her friend and laid
her on her stomach, still holding her naked body gently
with two of its legs. Its front two legs steadied its
stance, and the final two legs closest to the curved
abdomen were parting Amanda’s legs, revealing her
moist, ready opening.

"Amanda!!!!"

Amanda, however, could not hear Carmen and appeared
quite happy with the situation. The creature’s abdomen
slowly, gently, tenderly touched to Amanda’s waiting
slit. She jumped and gasped, but it was not in pain or
horror – Amanda was obviously loving it. She pushed
backward to meet the huge curving abdomen, groaning
with ecstasy.

The insect pushed further into her, opening her pussy
quite wide as it did, with Amanda beginning to moan
louder, adding an occasional "Yes!" or "Oh God, fuck
me!". She pumped back into the creature’s parts and the
thing obliged until the girl shuddered and screamed
with pleasure, her neck bent back, her breasts on the
floor, and her stretched cunt as high in the air as she
could get it.

All Carmen could do was watch in a mixture of horror
and fascination. Could Amanda actually be making love
with this thing? Just after Amanda’s obvious orgasm,
Carmen noticed that her friend’s belly began to
gradually swell up as if she were a water balloon being
filled with a hose until she looked about five months
pregnant, the insect vibrating above her and making a
pleasant thrumming noise.

She barely had time to think about what had happened
before her view was blocked by one of the alien
creatures. It sliced open the door of her cell neatly
as the other one had done to Amanda’s door but it did
not attack her. To the contrary, she heard the thing
make a very quiet thrumming as it very tenderly grasped
her naked body.

Carmen realized in an instant what was about to happen
and she screamed. The insect, however, was unfazed and
simply continued to thrum and stroke her gently. The
thrumming noise was almost more of a feeling than a
sound, and Carmen found herself relaxing despite her
fear. She looked up at her captor and found that it was
somewhat iridescent, like a butterfly’s wing or a
tropical beetle. It was green, her favorite color, and
she suddenly began to feel a fondness for this strange
creature three times her size.

It continued to thrum and vibrate, stroking her hair
and body lovingly. She almost didn’t notice that she’d
been carried out into the shaft of sunlight and turned
onto her stomach.

The thrumming sensation increased as she began to feel
stimulated, the pair of legs on the insides of her
thighs adding to the vibrating pleasure. She was
transfixed and soothed by the creature, and when a cool
breath of air from the shaft above brushed her pussy,
she twitched with pleasure.

Carmen spasmed at the moment she felt the cool abdomen
of the insect touch her slit, and shuddered with
pleasure as it gently pushed inside her. She felt
herself being stretched open, wide open, wider than she
had ever been opened up before, and it felt incredible.
She felt the creature’s cool body parts working their
way deeper inside her cunt, and she pushed back to meet
her lover, forcing herself wider still.

She was on the edge of orgasm when she felt a smaller,
somewhat cold organ slip out from the tip of the
abdomen inside her, the new sensation causing a brief
pause in her blind lust. She felt it exploring her
completely, writhing inside her pussy like a mad snake,
the alien coolness of the thing turning her on even
more.

Carmen gave in and began to orgasm, her muscles
contracting on whatever was inside her – she didn’t
care what it was any longer, only that it was giving
her the best sex of her life. She kept spasming,
unknowingly in the same position that Amanda had
attained at her moment of release, her body slamming
into the insect’s curved projection as hard as
possible. She began to subside slightly, but a new
sensation brought her to a second climax.

Her belly began to enlarge and become heavy, a cool
sensation filling her and becoming her existence as she
screamed for more. Her swollen body began to scrape the
earthen floor of the hive as she rocked back and forth,
milking everything the creature could give. Tears
rolled down her cheeks as the organs slid out of her
and the insect returned her to her cell – she wanted to
do it forever with her new lover. Carmen was sealed
back inside with the transparent material and left to
watch as another young woman screamed her way out of
her cell
.

She could see Amanda across the chamber in her cell,
rubbing her full belly and fingering her clit. Carmen
looked down at her own swollen body, wondering what had
just happened. Was it insect cum? Why was there so
much? Why did it make her swell up? Why didn’t it just
run out of her pussy?

She stuck three of her fingers up inside her stretched
pussy, causing a shudder of pleasure, and found that
her cervix had been sealed over so that it was now
smooth and formless. The creature had impregnated her.
Or was the second organ an ovipositor? Was she full of
alien creature eggs or was it trapped sperm that would
fertilize her own eggs? With a strange sensation of
pleasure, she curled up and rubbed her pregnant belly
until she fell asleep with a smile on her face.

Carmen awoke because she was uncomfortable. She was
accustomed to sleeping on her belly, but it would not
oblige her. Jerking awake as she felt the pressure of
her swollen womb and remembering what had happened
earlier, she began to tremble. She looked down at
herself, her mind rebelling against the situation, and
vomited. Immediately, one of the tremendous insect-like
creatures was there, cutting open the door to her cell,
and cleaned up the mess, replacing it with a sweet-
smelling substance.

Another creature appeared behind the first, this one
smaller in size and somewhat duller in color than her
lover had been. She began to back away in horror, but
Carmen soon relaxed as the insect began to thrum and
caress her. She was taken outside of the cell once
again, cradled and stroked until she began to rub her
belly lovingly and smile. She also felt a warmth from
within, almost drug-like, and the woman began to become
aroused once again.

This creature placed her on her stomach as before, and
she whimpered and reached toward it in anticipation,
her wet pussy red and open. The smaller alien beast
curved its body around as the other one had, and gently
entered her slit. Slowly Carmen felt the cool tip of
the abdomen enter her tunnel, and shivered with the
pleasure of it. She felt the smaller organs curve and
work inside her, and just before she came, she sensed
that the seal had been removed from her cervix.

She exploded into orgasm again, and the insect thrust
itself into her eagerly. The moaning woman could feel a
new coolness inside her as she rocked hard against the
alien’s rough, sectioned abdomen, searching for more.
Her womb swelled to greater proportions, the internal
pressures of her strange new shape stimulating her to a
second small orgasm.

She could feel something cool and thick and muscular
writhing and churning within her, some sort of tentacle
that she could sometimes feel just underneath the
surface of her belly. After several minutes of
vibrating pleasure and exploration, the beast withdrew
despite her protests, a few drops of iridescent silver
fluid dripping from her cunt. Her lover carried her
back to her cell as she was unable to walk, and she
fell asleep instantly with a smile on her face, no
longer caring about the screams around her.

When next Carmen awoke, no light came from the shafts
in the roof, but around her the softly bioluminescent
cells glowed. She could see how huge her belly had
become, like that of a woman at least seven months
pregnant, and she rubbed it with her hands lovingly as
if her own child was within.

She felt as if she had just been making love, a warm,
sleepy, happy feeling washing through her. Her pregnant
womb was quite warm and tingled, and she guessed that
the alien’s sperm had some sort of endorphin-
stimulating drug in it. She felt up inside herself
again, shivered with the delightful sensation, and
found the cervical cap in place again.

Over the next few weeks she slept often, her belly
slowly getting even larger. She sometimes felt movement
from inside herself, the fertilized eggs growing and
starting to wriggle with foreign life, giving her
pleasure. Eventually, she could barely sit up and
couldn’t stand from the weight, the movement of the
young larvae inside her now constant and intensely
pleasurable, and she sometimes orgasmed spontaneously
from their delicious writhing motions inside her.

One day when she was wondering how much larger she
could possibly become, the cap came loose and the
moist, writhing larval eggs began to slide forth. She
pushed them out as her birth muscles gently contracted,
and one of the alien creatures appeared at her side. It
took the white, glistening forms gently in its jaws one
at a time as they were born, each roughly cylindrical
form measuring about two inches in diameter and about
eight inches in length.

She soon missed the moving, shifting fullness that had
brought her so much satisfaction and pleasure. But she
didn’t have too long to wait – only a few days later
the same green insect creature came to her cell and
began to thrum, reaching out for Amanda. She went with
it gladly, relaxing completely in the hard jointed
arms, feeling the thrumming waves of pleasure come over
her as she was turned onto her stomach.

Again the alien’s cool ovipositor gently touched her
wet, waiting slit. She trembled with anticipation as
she felt its scaly protrusion enter her and go deeper,
deeper, and deeper still. This time, even through her
incredible climax, she could clearly feel the smooth
tube push through her cervix and enter her ready womb,
more and more of the white eggs filling her until she
thought she would burst.

She cradled her pregnant belly and fell fast asleep
after the creature was done with her, waiting for what
would happen the next day. And like clockwork, the
smaller male beast took her up in its arms the next
morning. It thrummed as it carried her out into the
room, and through the pleasant haze of pleasure she
felt, Carmen looked around her at the other cells.

Some had women in various stages of swollen pregnancy,
others were empty, some had what must be new women that
screamed and pounded on their transparent doors, and
some had men in them. She felt herself being turned
onto her stomach, her distended belly just touching the
ground, and smiled reassuringly at the women who looked
the most afraid. They looked back at her as if she were
insane, but she wasn’t surprised by this. She
determined to give them and everyone else who could see
a good show.

Carmen just felt the cool tip of the creature’s organ
touch her cunt, and she moaned loudly as she pushed
back into it, rocking back and forth, in and out. The
insect-like alien seemed pleased by this, and rocked in
and out as well, thrumming even more. She cried out
with pleasure, then began to scream, "Oh fuck me! Yes!
Pump your fucking bug sperm into me! Make the larvae
grow inside my belly!!" The somewhat surprised creature
responded with even more vigorous pumping, extending
its tip deeper and deeper into the woman.

She felt the inner extension working at the plug on her
cervix and came violently, then felt the cool liquid
filling her belly as the tube found its way inside and
the alien shuddered with release. As before, she felt
it writhing muscularly inside her womb, completely
mixing the sperm with the eggs, and felt the heavy
tentacle snake along the front of her belly from the
inside. After several minutes, the organ was withdrawn,
spilling a little of the beautiful semen onto the
ground.


She wondered what her eventual fate would be… a warm
womb for these creatures to plant their seeds in
forever? Carmen’s question was answered the next
morning. Several men were brought in to the center
area, each naked and held by thrumming gold-colored
aliens. They looked quite happy to be cradled there,
some with their eyes closed and some occasionally
giving little moans of pleasure.

She then noticed that each of them was grasped gently
by the balls, a special structure unique to the gold
beasts extending to each man’s scrotum. She could see
what looked like scaly ovipositors surrounding their
sacks, thrumming and vibrating pleasantly. One of the
other women was brought out and stimulated as usual,
but she was placed on her back instead and the man was
carried over to her by his golden creature.

He was suspended over her and they were brought
together as a botanist might use tools to pollinate a
flower. The two instant lovers were brought to orgasm
quickly, the man twitching, shuddering, and moaning as
the alien thing worked his sack gently. This happened
several more times during the day, then Carmen didn’t
see the human men return for several months.

In the next nine months, the women who had been
inseminated by the enslaved men all bore female
children, and Carmen then understood what had happened
– the aliens somehow were able to generate only female
sperm from the men with that special organ only the
gold creatures possessed.

She guessed correctly that they were breeding more
females to take on her role and increase the brood.
Once the girls reached an age where they could be
stimulated to orgasm and penetrated without harm, they
too would be filled up with hundreds of the white,
writhing eggs of the insect beasts.

Carmen smiled. What in the world had she been afraid
of? That damn asteroid was the best thing that had ever
happened to her, she thought to herself as she lovingly
caressed her belly and fingered her cunt, waiting for
the male to come and fertilize the huge batch of
strange alien eggs shoved into her womb. She could
hardly stand the wait!
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Wow - that was really great!
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Wow - that was really great!
Glad you thought so too! Now the art will be tricky part, especially when I do the interior shots of the womb being filled up.
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Old 02-24-2006, 11:18 AM   #49
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Severusmax, I really like the way you want to try and turn the female society on its head. The brief outline you give sounds intriguing. I was wondering if its a story outline you'd develop over several stories or how you'd expand upon the world. There seems to be so much good stuff there that you couldn't do it justice in a short story. Let me know what you think.

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Oh, it would HAVE to be a series. There is NO way that I could cover this in one story, any more than oggbashan could have done his "Shelacta Tales" (quite chilling with its predatory, trap thing, but fascinating in a non-sexual way) in one chapter. Thanks for the feedback. I was beginning that people were IGNORING my post.
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Glad you thought so too! Now the art will be tricky part, especially when I do the interior shots of the womb being filled up.
Heh..it could be interesting..
I must say I really liked the writing a lot. is there more of that story somewhere?
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