New Story: Endowiar

[moonblack]

Endowiar - this is my first real attempt to write a good Chyoo story. So far there is no real story, only some details about the world have been given, but once I take care of a few real life things I'll start writing. Until then I'll only approve new threads (if any). I hope people will like the story and add to it.

P.S.: If you add a thread and there is no reaction from me in three days, assume that something has happened (either to me or my PC).

[moonblack]

A new addition by Imhotep - Vilea (the high class whore). The thread is the first addition to the story by another author, and it's good too.

I've also added two more threads with characters to select.

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Another new addition, this time in the males section - Theron by gunde.

Also, I added a thread that offers three more women to choose from.

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Another addition by gunde - River's flooded . It continues Theron's story.

Also another new thread by me - Ciara the Demonic Fairy - it starts Ciara's story, though I'm not sure when I'll be able to continue it.

[moonblack]

I've added a few more threads, continuing Ciara's story.

Also, Alexander3571 added a new thread recently - The Slave Traders

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Maila the Priestess added by Alexander3571.

[jakelyon]

Originally Posted by moonblack

Endowiar - this is my first real attempt to write a good Chyoo story. So far there is no real story, only some details about the world have been given, but once I take care of a few real life things I'll start writing. Until then I'll only approve new threads (if any). I hope people will like the story and add to it.

P.S.: If you add a thread and there is no reaction from me in three days, assume that something has happened (either to me or my PC).

This is a really good intro. I will try and find some time to add to it. Your intro is a very fun and imaginative starting that will be very easy to add to.

[moonblack]

The royal family of Eferia by Zingiber - great thread.

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Another addition by Zingiber: Eloise and Philippa out riding - it is a continuation of the story started with his previous thread. Again I found exactly one mistake in the entire thread. If only all authors were like that...

Also, I've added a couple of Character selection threads. The first one offers several more men to chose from, the second offers more groups to choose from.

[moonblack]

Several threads have been added to the story, most of which are new:

Swing quickly by the visitors' pavilions. by Zingiber

Telria by Carrot74

Dorian the Thief by AaronWebster

And a few by me:
Nicolas the Trader, followed by The bridge is no more
More unusual creatures

Hopefully I didn't miss anything.

[moonblack]

Well, after quite some time a few new threads were added to the story:
Imhotep has continued Vilea's story with three new threads, the first one of them is Jilleen's reply "I will come with you." followed by two more threads by him and then a new addition by Zingiber called Escape into the gathering dark.

Very nice threads, I must say. One of these days I must find the time to finish some of my own additions for this story

EDIT: And another new addition: "This IS an audience." by Zingiber continues the story of The royal family of Eferia.

[moonblack]

After I-don't-know-how-long I finally wrote and added a new thread to my own story : Rilla’s Maidens is the beginning of a new path in Vilea's story.

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A few new threads have been added to the story:
A few threads by Imhotep:
They move towards the source of the light. followed by They find shelter in the castle. and finally They are led to their bedchambers.

Also An early appointment with Princess Rilla. by Zingiber as well as a couple of threads by me:
An escort and At the inn. At the inn is my 100th approved thread. Hooray!!!

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They are witnesses to carnage. by Imhotep

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Resistance is futile, and they are abducted. by Zingiber - a follow-up to Imhotep's latest submission.

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And a smashing follow up it is!

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Ciara enjoys the princess.

It's been a long time since I've added to Ciara's story. It's not the best thread I've written (and neither is the other Ciara thread I have ready), but it's not too bad, I think.

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Two more additions:
FUN with Avelina by me and
Through the woods to an unknown destination. by Imhotep - a great follow-up to Zingiber's latest thread.

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Two more new additions (again):
one by me -> Vilea’s decision
and The opportunity is not immediately at hand. by Imhotep

[moonblack]

Another great addition by Imhotep -> Vilea chooses to take Jilleen with her. Much to Jilleen's delight.

And I added one more thread to Ciara's story line, which makes the story 12 threads deep: Ciara makes a decision. Again it's not exactly great, but it offers quite a few possibilities...

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Vilea introduces Jilleen to the Princess. by Imhotep. Need I say it's another great addition and that you should read it if you haven't done so already?

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Vilea displays her skills as a courtesan. - another great thread by Imhotep (why does this sound so familiar? )

Take the left path - I decided to add a thread to someone other than Vilea and Ciara, since they have gotten more than enough attention (especially the former).

Would anyone else like to give the story a try?

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Jilleen must "entertain" the Princess. by Imhotep - great stuff as usual

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Junis- The Seridan Soldier by RicoLouis - that's his first addition to the story, and it's a good one, with a lot of possible development paths.

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Coming Of Age by RicoLouis - continues his previous addition. This time I actually bothered correcting some of the spelling mistakes.