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Old 11-03-2005, 03:52 PM   #51
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Old 11-03-2005, 03:56 PM   #52
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Miss Communication

Lips mouth yes.
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Old 11-03-2005, 04:10 PM   #53
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Timeless

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Old 11-03-2005, 04:29 PM   #54
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tempis
fugit
Always fucking time

Sixty minutes: ours.
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Old 11-03-2005, 04:31 PM   #55
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Quickie

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Old 11-03-2005, 04:42 PM   #56
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undressing
needed
So Unlike Salad

Taste best
undressed
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Old 11-06-2005, 01:33 AM   #57
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creamy
dressing
ending?
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Old 11-08-2005, 03:52 PM   #58
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Old 11-08-2005, 05:21 PM   #59
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Old 11-08-2005, 08:39 PM   #60
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hands
too
big.
hold
just
right.
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Old 11-08-2005, 09:02 PM   #61
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Feets
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Old 11-08-2005, 09:06 PM   #62
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hold
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right.
and
turn
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Old 11-09-2005, 12:02 AM   #63
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Old 11-09-2005, 06:26 AM   #64
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Feets
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Joints
are
jumpin.



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Old 11-09-2005, 06:26 AM   #65
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No
Words
Spoken
Write
Them
Down

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Old 11-09-2005, 11:44 AM   #66
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Old 11-09-2005, 02:45 PM   #67
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Old 11-09-2005, 03:34 PM   #68
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Got
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heebiejeebies?



leopardskin
pillbox
hat!

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Old 11-09-2005, 04:11 PM   #69
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leopardskin
pillbox
hat!

Grab
your
partner!

lol
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Old 11-10-2005, 03:30 PM   #70
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Query

Ain't Misbehavin'?
Why?
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Old 11-10-2005, 03:44 PM   #71
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Query

Ain't Misbehavin'?
Why?
Honey,
suck
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nose.


ooops - too much words.
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Old 11-10-2005, 04:04 PM   #72
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Honey,
suck
my
nose.


ooops - too much words.
Honey,
suckle Rose.
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Old 11-10-2005, 04:06 PM   #73
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Old 11-10-2005, 04:06 PM   #74
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Old 11-10-2005, 04:29 PM   #75
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D.
H.
Lawrence.
Lady's
Chattering lover.
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