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Old 10-30-2005, 04:35 PM   #26
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Pain
Pleasure
Pain

OR

touch
leaving
emptyness
 

Old 10-30-2005, 04:44 PM   #27
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Adding a title since the VB format won't let me post just
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Now?
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Old 10-30-2005, 04:48 PM   #28
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hate
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hate
 

Old 10-30-2005, 05:00 PM   #29
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An Uncle Pervey Thanksgiving

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FUCK YOU

turkey

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What's another word for thesaurus? . . .for synonym?
What's another word for cliché? . . .that isn't trite or hackneyed?
What if there weren't any hypothetical questions?
 

Old 10-30-2005, 05:03 PM   #30
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Old 10-30-2005, 08:27 PM   #31
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re this challenge

A
title's
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Old 10-30-2005, 09:02 PM   #32
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Trumpeter Swan

Trumpeter Swan

grace fowl



(An alternative title, for a different poem: Turkey)
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Old 10-30-2005, 09:06 PM   #33
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O!
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Old 10-30-2005, 09:11 PM   #34
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Old 10-30-2005, 09:13 PM   #35
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Old 10-30-2005, 09:14 PM   #36
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mitosis

divide
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Old 10-30-2005, 09:48 PM   #37
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Fab Brain Fart?

Ask Me Why
I Want You
I Need You
I'll Get You
Across the Universe

Wait! Slow Down!

It's Only Love
In My Life
Two of Us

Tell Me Why
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Old 10-30-2005, 11:29 PM   #38
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change,
minus quarters.

(i never have been able to get that out of my head, ghost girl.)

those 3 words are maria's, folks.



thanks for
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Old 10-31-2005, 12:01 AM   #39
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Braille

Words like fingers.
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Old 10-31-2005, 01:26 PM   #40
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Fall

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time
 

Old 10-31-2005, 01:35 PM   #41
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Work one up.
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Old 10-31-2005, 01:52 PM   #43
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Old 10-31-2005, 04:20 PM   #44
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Revelations chapter one, verse one.

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Sweater
Work one up.
Surprise!
no
bra!
 

Old 10-31-2005, 06:50 PM   #45
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Surprise!
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Nipples
yarn snarled!
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What's another word for thesaurus? . . .for synonym?
What's another word for cliché? . . .that isn't trite or hackneyed?
What if there weren't any hypothetical questions?
 

Old 10-31-2005, 11:50 PM   #46
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Static Surprise

Sliding fabric shock
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Uinitiated
erect
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Physiology Lesson; or, "Thinking" of Tess's Current AV

Reflex skips brain.
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Physiology Lesson; or, "Thinking" of Tess's Current AV (version 2)

Local circuit.

Boinnnggg!
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Old 11-02-2005, 10:15 PM   #50
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Foot Job

Tete-a- toe.
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