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Old 08-06-2005, 12:11 PM   #126
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Lol, how much coffee have you had today? Are you on a caffein high?...

Nah .. Just a few
Naughty Thoughts
keep showing their pearly teeth
at me. Winkin ... Flirtin
in my minds eye ..
Grrr

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Old 08-06-2005, 12:16 PM   #127
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Nah .. Just a few
Naughty Thoughts
keep showing their pearly teeth
at me. Winkin ... Flirtin
in my minds eye ..
Grrr

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Sometimes a gurls just gotta
go with tha flow ... ya know ~

I certainly do...
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Old 08-06-2005, 12:25 PM   #128
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smutty smut
sizzles, as it cuts
through the fabric

times roving hands
slicing snippets
puddling down
leave nothing,
air

ever glistening skin
warm ... slick
mouth pressing in
little lick ...

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Old 08-06-2005, 12:29 PM   #129
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smutty smut
sizzles, as it cuts
through the fabric

times roving hands
slicing snippets
puddling down
leave nothing,
air

ever glistening skin
warm ... slick
mouth pressing in
little lick ...

mmmmm yum ~ love your style my smut buddy...
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Old 08-06-2005, 12:37 PM   #130
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mmmmm yum ~ love your style my smut buddy...
smutty muddy buddy,
the two of us, thinkin
they're gonna holler an fuss
at this big ole muckity muck
mess we did make ...



who cares its a lottta fun.
My writing is way off, but
it does stimulate ones mind.
Hmm wonderin if'n thats
what it really stimulated? * weg*

I gotta be good, I am gonna get in trouble.
Stckin my feet/nose in messy messes like this.

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Old 08-06-2005, 12:39 PM   #131
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smutty muddy buddy,
the two of us, thinkin
they're gonna holler an fuss
at this big ole muckity muck
mess we did make ...



who cares its a lottta fun.
My writing is way off, but
it does stimulate ones mind.
Hmm wonderin if'n thats
what it really stimulated? * weg*

I gotta be good, I am gonna get in trouble.
Stckin my feet/nose in messy messes like this.

Grins*

LMAO oh you do amuse me my smutty muddy friend! ~ I havent had this much fun on here for ages!...

Now where's the fun in being good? come on don't abandon me now ~ we're just getting to the good stuff...
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Old 08-06-2005, 12:48 PM   #132
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LMAO oh you do amuse me my smutty muddy friend! ~ I havent had this much fun on here for ages!...

Now where's the fun in being good? come on don't abandon me now ~ we're just getting to the good stuff...
ok, but we need a lil back up.

goin to that * secret hidin place*

opens closet door. gets out jello balsters ...
water guns ... and a whip, cuffs (thinkin, just in case)

lmao ... passes them to Jenn.

Thinkin that about covers it ...

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Old 08-06-2005, 12:51 PM   #133
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ok, but we need a lil back up.

goin to that * secret hidin place*

opens closet door. gets out jello balsters ...
water guns ... and a whip, cuffs (thinkin, just in case)

lmao ... passes them to Jenn.

Thinkin that about covers it ...

LMAO oh I do love your style... I got the cuffs and i'm not affraid to use em...

I got your back gurl...

You ready???...
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Old 08-06-2005, 01:02 PM   #134
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LMAO oh I do love your style... I got the cuffs and i'm not affraid to use em...

I got your back gurl...

You ready???...

Hey, we better hurry.
Art is almost through with the reviews ~!!!


We sure do not want him joinin in,
before we get Rummi all Goo'd up.

grins n giggles*

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Old 08-06-2005, 01:05 PM   #135
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Hey, we better hurry.
Art is almost through with the reviews ~!!!


We sure do not want him joinin in,
before we get Rummi all Goo'd up.

grins n giggles*

good point ~

I'm ready when you are...
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Old 08-06-2005, 01:15 PM   #136
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good point ~

I'm ready when you are...

ok ready gurl ...

grrrrrrrrrrrrr Art is done ..
better shoot for da moon
b4 he appears and splats us all~


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Old 08-06-2005, 01:17 PM   #137
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ok ready gurl ...

grrrrrrrrrrrrr Art is done ..
better shoot for da moon
b4 he appears and splats us all~


ok lets go for it ~
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Old 08-06-2005, 01:31 PM   #138
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pooling the surface
of lost love, skimming
my world of chanting echoes.
reverberating across the land,
colossal chaos. consuming within
the fires bosom, of nothingness.

windy howls singing
the land. transporting
ashes, crude ... desolate.
tip the ocean on its side.
fusing the mountains, rocky
imbalance. shining embers,
soaked. scaling down
the hill, to what was.

show me, what I want
to see. fill all the holes,
of loves broken dam.
patching up, this worrisome
heart.

pure mystical band-aide,
seals the ache. loves waterfall
spewing forth ... what is ...
what shall be ... paradise ~


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Old 08-06-2005, 06:02 PM   #139
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Oh my a sticky situation brewing...hehehe
from the GOO girls <grin>
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Old 08-06-2005, 10:51 PM   #140
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Holding wishes, dreams alike.
Pampering those, to whom I cherish.
Carrying around, heartfelt passion.
Giving unto the one, I love.

Wishes come, on pillows rest.
Transforming the minds want, to need.
Embers of life, taking the crossroads.
Appearing only, when its shown the light.

Dreams spinning, afloat in the air.
Touching all, with a magical glow.
Giving to each, special treasures.
Fingertips touch, bubbles of delight.

Wishes, dreams are worth the wait.
Hold out your hand, time will come.
Giving strength, to accomplish everything.
Glorious accomplishment, in the end.


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Old 08-06-2005, 10:59 PM   #141
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We fit together ... Perfectly
Pefect is the goal to ... Reach
Reach in, take all you ... Want
Want me, like I want .... You
You teach me, so much about ... Happiness
Hapiness within my heart ... Sizzles
Sizzles, on the hot pavement, of ... Time

Time to capture, my dreams of ... Us
Us, you and I, one ... Together
Together we will be ... Always
Always, you are on my mind,
filling my heart with ... Love

Love to watch you ... Sleep
Sleep in my arms, awake with a kiss from my ... Lips
Lips red as wine, licking those same
wine tasted lips with my ... Tongue

Tongue upon ... me
Me tasting ... You
You tasting ... Perfect

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Old 08-06-2005, 11:09 PM   #142
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*whew*

That's some fine goo'd imagery you've created.

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Old 08-07-2005, 06:17 AM   #143
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Oh my a sticky situation brewing...hehehe
from the GOO girls <grin>
The GOO girls.........I like that....<grins>...
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Old 08-07-2005, 11:22 AM   #144
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ya'll have a goooooooooooo......d time <grin> drip
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We fit together ... Perfectly
Pefect is the goal to ... Reach
Reach in, take all you ... Want
Want me, like I want .... You
You teach me, so much about ... Happiness
Hapiness within my heart ... Sizzles
Sizzles, on the hot pavement, of ... Time

Time to capture, my dreams of ... Us
Us, you and I, one ... Together
Together we will be ... Always
Always, you are on my mind,
filling my heart with ... Love

Love to watch you ... Sleep
Sleep in my arms, awake with a kiss from my ... Lips
Lips red as wine, licking those same
wine tasted lips with my ... Tongue

Tongue upon ... me
Me tasting ... You
You tasting ... Perfect


tasting ...goooooooooo....d <grin>
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Old 08-07-2005, 11:28 AM   #146
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ya'll have a goooooooooooo......d time <grin> drip
we always do, lol...
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we always do, lol...
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Old 08-07-2005, 12:03 PM   #148
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lol, why do you ask?
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Old 08-07-2005, 08:11 PM   #149
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Mr. Right exist,
take a walk, meet
at the crossroads.

He is the one, smiling
with life. Handsome,
strong, your everything

Watching covertly,
sashay on by. Wiggle
your booty, he'll come.

Kind, courteous
eyes that sizzle.
he is, Your One

Wishing you happiness,
beyond belief. Courage
to withstand. Love that
is eternal.

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Mr. Right exist,
take a walk, meet
at the crossroads.

He is the one, smiling
with life. Handsome,
strong, your everything

Watching covertly,
sashay on by. Wiggle
your booty, he'll come.

Kind, courteous
eyes that sizzle.
he is, Your One

Wishing you happiness,
beyond belief. Courage
to withstand. Love that
is eternal.

Your Friend ~



That's beautiful hun ~ thank you so much....

You are a wonderful friend and an inspirational poet....
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