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Old 07-13-2005, 07:51 AM   #51
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WaterFalls

pure beauty ... unleashed
white rapids run .. showing off
rapid rocks dance .. colliding
smoothness ... beauty unanswerable
breath taking ... heart stopped

wonderful surprises .... waterfalls

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Old 07-14-2005, 10:32 PM   #52
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I wrote this on the other thread
but when I saw this thread I knew I
had to drop by and drop it off...grinin

a gift for you....too

Here I stand with a bow on my head
holding a box
wrapped shiney paper 'red'
and a card in an envelope
if you ask if it's hallmark
I will say, "Nope!"

You sit down and I sit too
I hand you the box
my present to you.

You unwrap it with a delicate touch
I say, "Tear it, be rough!" <grin>
You reach into this box
and pull out a letter 'N' from the alphabet.
You look at me with a patronizing smile.
Please continue, just for a little while.
So you reach back into the box
pulling out the letters 'D' and 'E'!

"Den? or End?" I look at you and say,
"Continue to dig inn."
You reach into the box
and pull out the letters "F" "R" and "I"
I place them in order and look you in the eye.

'FRIEND'

But that's not all, "No sir ma'am!"
I hand you the envelope
'how forgetfull I am.'
You open it and pull out the letters
"M" and "Y" "Why?" Because they go before friend!

'MY FRIEND'

But thats not all 'no sir ma'am,'
Here is my gift to you
I pull out a post card
that is mostly ocean blue
and hand it to you.
You have a puzled look on your face?
There is a boat on the post card.
No, I am not giving you a boat, silly.
the ...'SHIP'

Dreamers and Dreams~


started slow ... easy going
talking ... notes back and forth
slow smiles leading to more telling
of tails ... whoppers they be

two people ... lost in a world
forging together, a bond quiet unique
telling dreams, life's' lil secrets
souls swapping scandalous thoughts

a poem ... a dream
life's lil ... funny things
did you hear ... other such stuff

one day ... passes
another ... takes its place
dreams ... reality
its all the same here

an acquaintance, turns to friendship
a dreamer .... a dream
friend .... friendship
as dreamers .... dream

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Old 07-17-2005, 05:39 PM   #53
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love love love

i see so well
the love shining from his eyes
showing me the inner heart
taking my breath
spinning far and wide
capturing the *me* inside

take this heart
beating for you
form in it
a new ... happy home
windows of light
sunshine so radiant
matching the pink curtains
cheeks ... lips

waltz around this room
of music, beating tempos
of everlastings complete

tap dance to the
stilettos heel, bowing
to the grace of a smile
hearts clapping with
the oceans breeze


~~ work in progress me thinks~
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Old 07-17-2005, 05:59 PM   #54
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Dream

Everyone knows
and no one knows
to dream of you
is swallowing glass
clear faces shattered
pieces of smiles
and echoes of voices
that aren't the same
anymore

since the Wendy bird
flew away to grow up.
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Old 07-18-2005, 01:20 AM   #55
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Smile

growing up is hard to do
do this an that
not what you want to

go to the market
get a nice big one
not tha lil puny one
all can see

touch the glass
do not look
for all is revealed
within the glimpse of time

wrinkles of ole age
catching up with me
taking of what
used to be

no more time
to do what we want
all must follow the sound
of the beating hooves

carry all you can
a journey long ... strenuous
take only what you must

shadows dance
to the musical beat
of what is
what used
to be ...
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Old 07-18-2005, 02:22 AM   #56
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Head Lice Maybe, But Not Cooties

Mom was my hero,
fish and turkey were what you smoked,
and getting high was climbing trees.
Bones could (and did) get broken
and so did my heart.
I cried because I wasn't hardened to evil
and to grief
and to babies dying without food
in their bellies.
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Old 07-18-2005, 11:33 AM   #57
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he whispers in my ear
telling me naughty
things, what he wants
my desire
zingssss

whole night of love
taking our time
lighting the path
all is mine

to be ... have
take command
my muse tells me
mmmmm what a man

he is the light
my tunnel he
dives into, ears ring
from all he does do

champion of all
taking what he
wants
telling me
what I can do

showing the path
all that is a physical
desire surges

whispering tales
of sin ...
contemplation's hand

grabbing his head
pouty mouth that locks
bonding him there
where it all clicks

moist wet center
alighting
the gloom
as passion explodes
baby ... shoot
for the moon~

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Old 07-19-2005, 01:00 PM   #58
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Cracking poem RF

HOT as ever, I love your erotic poetry
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Old 07-19-2005, 05:50 PM   #59
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Thumbs up

skinny dipppps
coffee
windy breeze
off da ocean

candles
whipped cream
n berries (yeah i see you there)
my love

inspire
inspiration
is all the same
with him ... near~

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Old 07-19-2005, 06:38 PM   #60
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skinny dipppps
coffee
windy breeze
off da ocean

candles
whipped cream
n berries (yeah i see you there)
my love

inspire
inspiration
is all the same
with him ... near~

mmmmmmmmmm very nice
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Old 07-20-2005, 03:05 AM   #61
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Lightbulb Paradise~

pooling the surface,
of lost love. skimming,
my world of chanting echoes.
reverberating, across the land.
colossal chaos, consuming within.
the fires bosom, of nothingness.

windy howls, singeing
the land. transporting ashes,
crude ... desolate. tip the ocean
on its side. fusing the mountains,
rocky imbalance. shining embers,
soaked. scaling down the hill
to what was.

show me. what I want
to see. fill all the holes,
of loves broken dam. patching
up this worrisome heart.

pure mystical band-aide,
seals the ache. loves waterfall
spewing forth ...
what is ...
what shall be ...
paradise
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Old 07-20-2005, 09:27 AM   #62
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Paradise

I'm sick of the city
the pace is too fast,
phones always ringing
people hurrying past.

Take me to a place
where I can relax,
where computers don't beep
and no noise from the fax.

I'm tired of the memories
which hide in my dreams,
the false people I meet
who don't say what they mean.

Take me away
so I can escape,
get out of the fast lane
drop out of the race.

Life is a gamble
a roll of the dice,
so take me away
I crave paradise.

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Old 07-20-2005, 07:51 PM   #63
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I'm sick of the city
the pace is too fast,
phones always ringing
people hurrying past.

Take me to a place
where I can relax,
where computers don't beep
and no noise from the fax.

I'm tired of the memories
which hide in my dreams,
the false people I meet
who don't say what they mean.

Take me away
so I can escape,
get out of the fast lane
drop out of the race.

Life is a gamble
a roll of the dice,
so take me away
I crave paradise.


some place nice
like paradise
where waves crash
and the sand is soft.

Tropical breeze
over sunny seas
where the sunset grows
and the day is lost.
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Old 07-20-2005, 10:45 PM   #64
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love to bounce
from one to the next
sweet words of promise
dark an dreary, scary even

a pony on a ride
lil daughter who
is heaven sent
woman and her smile
garden of love

show me a picture
paint the sun
give me a few words
or maybe just one

i write for the thrill
the chase
and love

of all the things i see
even a few i do not

show me a poem
a sonnet
a rhyme

give me time
hide n watch
out i spring

color the winds
spritz the sun
howl at the moon

i tell you my friend
i love to write
tell a tale
show all of them
what i can do

maybe i am not the best
or even the top 100
yet i promise to you

you ...
shall remember
me ...

if not me

then, my words
remember
the words ~
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Old 07-21-2005, 04:22 AM   #65
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some place nice
like paradise
where waves crash
and the sand is soft.

Tropical breeze
over sunny seas
where the sunset grows
and the day is lost.
Oh good one Art, that's lovely
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Old 07-21-2005, 06:11 AM   #66
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Temptation~

Strawberries in cream
Drizzling in chocolate delight
Sprinkled with flakes of coconut whispers.

Yearning lips smeared with cherry glaze.
Sensual tongues meeting with a hypnotic craving.
Sultry mouths suckling every drop.

Slippery heated skin tingling with hurried kisses.
Unrestrained fingers caressing, trailing past.
Intertwine with our rhythmic union.
Melting souls delighting, taking flight.

Sweaty bodies draped in a silken steam.
Swollen hardness meeting willing hot flesh.
Sprinkles of stardust afloat in the air.
Pleasures tweaking fervent stimuli.

Shaking assault burning into a feverish explosion.
Weakness fluttering calming into sensual exhaustion.
Tormented longings laid to bed.
Till the temptation of tantalizing loving begins again~




had to re-post this one.

Temptation~

is on the mind~
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Old 07-21-2005, 06:26 AM   #67
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Wink

I can resist
anything
except
temptation
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Old 07-21-2005, 09:58 PM   #68
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Fishing For Your Love~

Fishing for your love, is all I want to do.
Baiting my hook, with sweet things for you.
Casting all my love, into the sea of eternity.
Waiting patiently, for you to see my allure.

I shall shimmy ... shake,
my body in your direction.
Hoping like hell, you are paying attention.
Slowly, seductively I will dance around.
Can you smell ... all of me?
Taste me ... yet?

Running my fingers,
through my short golden hair.
A my breast lift, get perky for you.
Licking my lips, now.
I can taste you so well.
Fluttering my lashes,
as I watch you,
from desire filled eyes.

Oh now I'm really ... wet.
Sinking so ... low.
Teasing you, as I taste.
Honey ... you make
my pudding drip.

I have to swim away ... just a lil.
Mmm yes Baby, I see
I do have your attention now.
Come on Big Boy ... Come and get me.
Swim with me, make me yours,
completely.

If you do not know, by now.
Let me tell ya a lil secret.

I started out,
fishing for your love,
in this lil poem of mine.
But now Darling,
I am truly ... caught.
For as it turns out,
It is you ... who has caught
me.

Now, whatcha
gonna do about it?
Hmmmm?~~~~

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Old 07-23-2005, 12:44 PM   #69
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Fishing for your love, is all I want to do.
Baiting my hook, with sweet things for you.
Casting all my love, into the sea of eternity.
Waiting patiently, for you to see my allure.

I shall shimmy ... shake,
my body in your direction.
Hoping like hell, you are paying attention.
Slowly, seductively I will dance around.
Can you smell ... all of me?
Taste me ... yet?

Running my fingers,
through my short golden hair.
A my breast lift, get perky for you.
Licking my lips, now.
I can taste you so well.
Fluttering my lashes,
as I watch you,
from desire filled eyes.

Oh now I'm really ... wet.
Sinking so ... low.
Teasing you, as I taste.
Honey ... you make
my pudding drip.

I have to swim away ... just a lil.
Mmm yes Baby, I see
I do have your attention now.
Come on Big Boy ... Come and get me.
Swim with me, make me yours,
completely.

If you do not know, by now.
Let me tell ya a lil secret.

I started out,
fishing for your love,
in this lil poem of mine.
But now Darling,
I am truly ... caught.
For as it turns out,
It is you ... who has caught
me.

Now, whatcha
gonna do about it?
Hmmmm?~~~~

I cast words out like a lure on a line.
Wait for a nibble to come in time.

My worm wiggles with anticipation,
hoping to catch a loves relation.

Holding the pole like awaiting a call,
or sipping ale along a meet market wall.

There is still the standard requirements.
To cast back those which reach not the limits.

When fishing for bass and you catch a crappie,
revel in the catch but not a mounted trophy.

But the fact is fishing takes a lil time,
eventually a catch will tug on the line.
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Old 07-23-2005, 05:13 PM   #70
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I cast words out like a lure on a line.
Wait for a nibble to come in time.

My worm wiggles with anticipation,
hoping to catch a loves relation.

Holding the pole like awaiting a call,
or sipping ale along a meet market wall.

There is still the standard requirements.
To cast back those which reach not the limits.

When fishing for bass and you catch a crappie,
revel in the catch but not a mounted trophy.

But the fact is fishing takes a lil time,
eventually a catch will tug on the line.


*Super Slopppy Grins*

Ya had to know I would love this one.
Thank you for da *bounce* I am honored~
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Old 07-23-2005, 11:26 PM   #71
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Tribute To My Love~


All I want to do, is love you.
You are my Hot Lovin' Lover.
Your Voice, carries me away
into another time.
From our slow sweet love.
To the naughty perfection.
I forever feel in your arms.

I am your Lil Vixen.
Whispering into your ear
"Come Love Me Now."
Hurry back my love.
I want just a lil taste of you,
upon my lips.

I want to have my desire,
fulfilled with you.
On the beach, as I go
fishing for your love.
I want to give you
timeless kisses.
As we give into the temptation
of another night of loving.
As only we can share
with each other.

I long for the day,
when I am waiting
for you no more.
I have all the faith
in the world that we
shall soon be together.

I need you with me.
Throughout it all.
I want you Baby.
Feeding my soul
and loving the me,
that only you know
and feel deep inside.

Only you My Love,
loving me as I love you.
Eternally as One~


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I took some of my titles and made a poem.
Had to post it. A lil tricky, but so fun~!!

Happy Writing~
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Old 07-24-2005, 08:48 PM   #72
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When~


how can we do this
stay the way things are.
take time ... when its all
we can do, to stay apart.

whispering images fill my soul
times we oft spent together
now it seems so long ago
dreams derailed, forever pales

riding through the mountains
pulling over on the curb
for a quick kiss ... or two
remember the truckers,
still think they were placing bets

golden castle sitting on the mountain
so hot out, sun beating down
riding the glass elevator
glass smudges, when we got off

you wanted to take me,
against the plaid wall
daring lil giggles, wondering hands
bodies pressed, grinding hips

gazing upon rows, of gingerbread houses
two as one, fingers sliding down
ass wiggles, granite groin
prolific union, houses disappear

pina coloda in hand, cherry ... cream
cuddling on the couch, roaring fire flames
dizzy with delight, holding hands
head thrown back, shoulders relaxed
sun shining through chandler glitters

naked jay birds, sliding into bubbly hot tub
do you think they see us, who really cares
bodies merging, gliding ... sliding
skin to skin, hot ... wet
Jack and Jill rhymes, laughter erupting

lunch at a lil spot in town
eyes never leaving the others
fingertips touch, hand in hand
halving the meal, sharing it all
feeling as if two, is yet again, one
two people could never feel closer,
as we did those few moments, in time

pulling in the parking lot
hating like hell to leave
watching as you sleep, in my arms
gently playing with your curls
listening to soft lil snores
wondering, how can I ever leave you
slow tears sliding down hot cheeks

taking the time to dream of us
all day, you are all I think of
when will it be our time
when will forever, finally find us ...

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Old 07-25-2005, 06:48 AM   #73
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Thumbs up

I'm lovin your new av RF, you go girl lol, love the whip ~ Very naughty!
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Old 07-25-2005, 06:17 PM   #74
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yep, I agree with JC

Thats a cool AV,
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Old 07-25-2005, 06:20 PM   #75
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yep, I agree with JC

Thats a cool AV,

I love it, it's sooooo naughty lol
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