Old 08-09-2014, 01:31 AM   #1
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Old 08-09-2014, 01:40 AM   #2
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I agree that it's an interesting read. But it's not right for LW This is about a woman helping a husband cheat on his wife. But LW is 99% stories of cheating wives. For this to be right for LW, it would have to be titled "How to be the other man..."
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Old 08-09-2014, 01:56 AM   #3
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I agree that it's an interesting read. But it's not right for LW This is about a woman helping a husband cheat on his wife. But LW is 99% stories of cheating wives. For this to be right for LW, it would have to be titled "How to be the other man..."
The woman in this monologue is herself married, right?
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The woman in this monologue is herself married, right?
Yes:
. . . you feel wet and your breasts swell but you donít know who is making you wet: the lover you donít care for on top of you or the faraway husband he is making you see anew.
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. . . you feel wet and your breasts swell but you donít know who is making you wet: the lover you donít care for on top of you or the faraway husband he is making you see anew.
It reads overly glamorized to me.
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