I posted a story here
. I thought it was a decent story, but the ending could have been stronger. A couple of reader's comments were to that effect, so I decided to modify the ending. The topic was the same, there was nothing inappropriate as far as I could tell, but it was rejected, even though it was in every way no different than the original story (other than the plot). When I clicked on REASON, it said to check for names, emails or phone numbers (there weren't any), and to revise it or run it by a volunteer editor. I'm wondering if anyone here is willing to read it and see if they can determine what's wrong with it? If so, I'll email or PM the revised story to you. Thanks in advance.