Originally Posted by TheClayDragon
I have a non-con story with themes of BDSM, control and punishment. Male dominant with an unwilling female slave/sub.
Not an editor, but I can start at an important point.
See the word in bold? That means it is a non con story, which you say it is, but not BDSM themed. BDSM only has one hard non negotiable rule: Consent.
You're writing non con so keep it to its proper category and don't drag BDSM into it as a way to claim you are not writing pure rape porn. Calling your rapist "master" does not translate it into BDSM.
Also if the 'slave' stays unwilling too long you're violating the sites rules that in non con the 'victim' has to enjoy it at some point.