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Old 09-25-2015, 01:01 AM   #1
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Red face Seeking Editor for Non-Con story

I have a non-con story with a female lead and a male aggressor.

The first 3 chapters are written and I am looking for someone to help with the grammar and formatting. It is my first story on here and I plan to continue to add to it.
The chapters are 1-3000 words each.

Send me a message if you are interested and I can give you more details.


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Old 09-25-2015, 06:00 AM   #2
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Originally Posted by TheClayDragon View Post
I have a non-con story with themes of BDSM, control and punishment. Male dominant with an unwilling female slave/sub.
Not an editor, but I can start at an important point.

See the word in bold? That means it is a non con story, which you say it is, but not BDSM themed. BDSM only has one hard non negotiable rule: Consent.

You're writing non con so keep it to its proper category and don't drag BDSM into it as a way to claim you are not writing pure rape porn. Calling your rapist "master" does not translate it into BDSM.

Also if the 'slave' stays unwilling too long you're violating the sites rules that in non con the 'victim' has to enjoy it at some point.
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Old 09-25-2015, 10:21 AM   #3
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I fixed it.
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