Old 10-18-2012, 09:51 PM   #104901
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TY Hopefully just my sleep deprivation making a mountain out of a molehill. I really do like the story.
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Old 10-19-2012, 10:12 AM   #104902
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Well, that was an utterly dispiriting writer's group. It was that moment when you show someone your shiny new baby of a story and they say, "Eh, it's a story. The ears are a little big, and the nose is a bit mashed." Thought I had a thicker hide than that. Just wanted someone to love it the way I do, even if they have constructive criticisms for it.
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Old 10-19-2012, 08:03 PM   #104903
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Old 10-19-2012, 08:04 PM   #104904
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Old 10-19-2012, 08:14 PM   #104906
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Old 10-20-2012, 10:04 AM   #104907
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Old 10-20-2012, 10:07 AM   #104908
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It's a lot more fun, though, when you're the one holding the hoops.
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Old 10-20-2012, 10:11 AM   #104909
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Old 10-20-2012, 05:19 PM   #104910
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Old 10-20-2012, 11:00 PM   #104912
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Old 10-21-2012, 02:25 PM   #104917
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How about walking into your toddler's room and finding that she stuck her hands down her diaper and is now having the time of her life smearing her own poop everywhere? That didn't happen until 8, but . . . ew.
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How about walking into your toddler's room and finding that she stuck her hands down her diaper and is now having the time of her life smearing her own poop everywhere? That didn't happen until 8, but . . . ew.
Has she been talking to my grandson?

We have switched him into all-in-ones for overnight so he can't get his hands at the poop...
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We have switched him into all-in-ones for overnight so he can't get his hands at the poop...
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