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Old 01-09-2017, 12:30 AM   #1
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Double blind/Same line challenge

Time for another challenge but this time I'll give you a line to incorporate into your poem. I was going to make it the first line but have decided it can go in anywhere. Now since we haven't had anything as challenging since Nano Clams stretched us to the limits, I hope this line will have you going WTF! all over again
Same rules as always really, anything goes for what type of poem you write. Send to me by the 30th January (that always has a bit of leeway as long as you inform me it's on it's way)
I'll post poems anonymously for critiquing and guessing, the poets can then decide if they want to change their original submissions or not before the final posting for more guessing until the final reveal.
Show me some interest folks and I'll give you your line! You know you're good at this
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Old 01-09-2017, 05:02 AM   #2
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Old 01-09-2017, 08:50 AM   #3
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Okay your same line is .............................
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a headless wraith sashayed across the room
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Make something of that, as many as you want to submit. Any questions?
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 01-10-2017, 03:39 AM   #8
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Okay your same line is .............................
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a headless wraith sashayed across the room
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Make something of that, as many as you want to submit. Any questions?
Just for chuckles, could the words in the line be re-arranged at will?

I think that would allow for a more diverse response.
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Old 01-10-2017, 11:03 AM   #9
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Okay your same line is .............................
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a headless wraith sashayed across the room
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Make something of that, as many as you want to submit. Any questions?
Iambic pentameter. It's obvious that you want sonnets.
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Just for chuckles, could the words in the line be re-arranged at will?

I think that would allow for a more diverse response.
Wracking my brains as to how you could rearrange ........ across the room a headless wraith sashayed? across the wraith a headless room sashayed?
You've obviously got something in mind or you wouldn't have asked but I'll stick with my original line for this one.
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Iambic pentameter. It's obvious that you want sonnets.
Bring it on
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Wracking my brains as to how you could rearrange ........ across the room a headless wraith sashayed? across the wraith a headless room sashayed?
You've obviously got something in mind or you wouldn't have asked but I'll stick with my original line for this one.
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By the way, thanks for kicking off another Double Blind, Annie. I'd been thinking it was about time for another, but wasn't quite prepared to start one myself yet.
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The line popped into my head and I thought what can I do with it? Ah yes inflict it upon the Lit Brigade
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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We have until the 30th? Sure, I'll give it a shot.



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Great stuff, takes me that long to get my head together
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 01-19-2017, 03:14 PM   #17
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Any entries yet?

I'm having a terrible time getting mine written.
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Any entries yet?

I'm having a terrible time getting mine written.
A few, mine got put through the shredder by the one that calls himself my Husband!!
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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