Old 08-23-2004, 01:11 AM   #1
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Howdy, ya'll.

This is where I store my thoughts...my wants...my desires. So if you wish to continue, please stroll on in...say howdy...partake of a glass of wine...meander around and feel free to leave a comment or two or even pm me if ya like.

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edited since i've been posting on here for awhile now....
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"Take her to the point where the flow of air in the room feels as a breeze, each aroma realized, separate from all others. To taste all the components of each drop of sweat as they roll down her cheek, licked from the corners of her mouth. To know the heat of my breath as I breathe upon her skin, my lips milimeters from her, caressing each curve. When her inhibitions are released, her desires craving, her senses pulsing, then I like to move her arms above her head..."---me, Bash

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"Just because I'm a romantic doesn't mean I won't fuck your brains out"

People are made to be loved and things are made to be used. There is much chaos in this world because things are being loved and people are being used.

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Old 08-23-2004, 01:14 AM   #2
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oops. just read Laurel's thread.
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"Take her to the point where the flow of air in the room feels as a breeze, each aroma realized, separate from all others. To taste all the components of each drop of sweat as they roll down her cheek, licked from the corners of her mouth. To know the heat of my breath as I breathe upon her skin, my lips milimeters from her, caressing each curve. When her inhibitions are released, her desires craving, her senses pulsing, then I like to move her arms above her head..."---me, Bash

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"Just because I'm a romantic doesn't mean I won't fuck your brains out"

People are made to be loved and things are made to be used. There is much chaos in this world because things are being loved and people are being used.

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Old 08-23-2004, 01:26 AM   #3
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Goodness!

You are the oldest Newbie I have ever seen.

Still, I feel certain that you could find many in the BDSM Café who would be happy to instruct you on how to submit.





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Old 08-23-2004, 02:11 AM   #4
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Goodness!

You are the oldest Newbie I have ever seen.

Still, I feel certain that you could find many in the BDSM Café who would be happy to instruct you on how to submit.





”Smile when you say that, pardner.”
Don't think I would take too well to that kind of instruction, darlin.

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"Just because I'm a romantic doesn't mean I won't fuck your brains out"

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Old 08-23-2004, 02:37 AM   #5
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Hello Bashfull Welcome to the wonderful world of writing I hope you enjoy making up your story The natives are a bit weird over here, but mainly docile and gentle enough *chuckles* again welcome, to the AH especially
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Old 08-23-2004, 02:48 AM   #6
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Hi Bashfull.

Welcome to the mayhem.

What genre do you write in? We're a mixed bunch in here, there's sure to be someone to help you if you need any help with anything.

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Old 08-23-2004, 02:19 PM   #11
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Hey, Bashful..welcome aboard..

Good luck with your writing ~ there are so many wonderful people here on Lit, which noting from your posts, I am sure you've been around ~

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Hi EL,

Long time no see. How are you doing?

Welcome Bashfull,

There is a newbie thread floating around somewhere as well. But you can ask anywhere.

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Old 08-23-2004, 04:13 PM   #13
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Thanks ya'll

I recognize a few of the names here too. I'm thinking about expounding on the following, if you don't mind a long post:


I prefer to get her all worked up, arousing each and every sense. Take her to the point where the flow of air in the room feels as a breeze, each aroma realized, separate from all others. To taste all the components of each drop of sweat as they roll down her cheek, licked from the corners of her mouth. To know the heat of my breath as I breathe upon her skin, my lips milimeters from her, caressing each curve. When her inhibitions are released, her desires craving, her senses pulsing, then I like to have her hold her arms above her head.

With her arms above her head and bound only by her word, I curve my fingers inside of her. My other hand holds a cube of ice above her body. Her eyes follow the movement of the cube as her hips meet and demand my thrusting fingers. She watches the drop begin to build. Larger it forms. She doesn't know when or where it will fall but anticipates the icy breath. My fingers have her wanting, wanting to close or roll her eyes but she dares not for she will not see the fall of the icy wetness. Bigger it becomes. Both my hands wet. Until it drops, her body flinches b/f it lands. Followed by the air from my lips.

Yes, it is watching the anticipation that seduces me to ice. To build the heat from the cold. Occassionally lowering to the nipples, the stomache, the thighs. Then holding aloft to watch the dripping begin anew.


Would appreciate feedback.

thx,

Bash
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(I'm very glad to see someone else here who says "y'all" besides me)
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Bashfull...well that sure as hell worked for me. I think you have a good way with words and i reckon you can easily pull a story form what you've got there
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Old 08-23-2004, 04:31 PM   #16
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Bashfull,

That was sexy to me. I like to read about a tease.



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(I'm very glad to see someone else here who says "y'all" besides me)
I say y'all too! lol

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With her arms above her head and bound only by her word, Bash
That is quite brilliant.

I think I know someone who would love your AV by the way.

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Old 08-23-2004, 05:11 PM   #19
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Now ya'll are making me blush. Thanks for the warm welcome and feedback.

English Lady and Black Tulip, thanks especially for those comments. Turning a lady on is second only to helping her enjoy the rapture of her beauty and enduring the experience of her enjoyment.

Not sure how to piece all of the different parts together. Just about everything I've written has been in the form of posts, as my feelings conveyed to words and as I responded to others. Here's another part of the ice train...


After all, it is the anticipation of the drip which cause one to flinch. And is not the anticipation merely a logic process in the mind? So, imagine, if you will laying naked, arms stretched above head (I love this pose on a woman. Definitely defines the feminine form), wrists overlapping, legs spread, as my callused hands rest millimeters from your skin. Tracing without touching your body. In my other hand rest a cube of ice, so innocently held aloft. Your eyes watch it melt, a single teardrop of cold moisture building, growing, developing into an almost frozen instance of freedom as you ponder exactly where it will land upon your heated skin...
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Old 08-23-2004, 05:33 PM   #22
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I agree with Pop.

Get writing, dammit.

If you have trouble making it into one story, you can always get help from an editor. I guess.
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I'm with Gauche, I like the line he quoted, but also the imagery created from these:

"... my callused hands rest millimeters from your skin. Tracing without touching your body."

Now I'm not really a fan of fiction written from the first person perspective, but I know some are. If it were me, I'd write it from third person, i.e.:

His callused hands rest milimeters from her skin, tracing without touching her body.

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... To know the heat of my breath as I breathe upon her skin ...
Hot damn! Heated breath!

Just what I needed today, but hold the ice cube.

I came down with a case of summer sniffilous, and there is positively nothing more difficult than trying to do a proper striptease with a red nose and wad of half-used tissues in your hand.


By the way, you were always one of my favorites in your old gang, Bashful.

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I recognize a few of the names here too. I'm thinking about expounding on the following, if you don't mind a long post:


I prefer to get her all worked up, arousing each and every sense. Take her to the point where the flow of air in the room feels as a breeze, each aroma realized, separate from all others. To taste all the components of each drop of sweat as they roll down her cheek, licked from the corners of her mouth. To know the heat of my breath as I breathe upon her skin, my lips milimeters from her, caressing each curve. When her inhibitions are released, her desires craving, her senses pulsing, then I like to have her hold her arms above her head.

With her arms above her head and bound only by her word, I curve my fingers inside of her. My other hand holds a cube of ice above her body. Her eyes follow the movement of the cube as her hips meet and demand my thrusting fingers. She watches the drop begin to build. Larger it forms. She doesn't know when or where it will fall but anticipates the icy breath. My fingers have her wanting, wanting to close or roll her eyes but she dares not for she will not see the fall of the icy wetness. Bigger it becomes. Both my hands wet. Until it drops, her body flinches b/f it lands. Followed by the air from my lips.

Yes, it is watching the anticipation that seduces me to ice. To build the heat from the cold. Occassionally lowering to the nipples, the stomache, the thighs. Then holding aloft to watch the dripping begin anew.


Would appreciate feedback.

thx,

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