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Old 12-31-2007, 08:22 PM   #151
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I think I could have gotten Professor Puppetmaster higher on the list. I just got tired of writing threads for it just to keep it on the fresh list.

Oh well. I contributed to five of the top twenty.
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Old 12-31-2007, 11:18 PM   #152
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I think I could have gotten Professor Puppetmaster higher on the list. I just got tired of writing threads for it just to keep it on the fresh list.

Oh well. I contributed to five of the top twenty.
It's hard to keep it up, hehe, for a whole month.
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Old 01-06-2008, 12:30 AM   #153
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It's not often that I've contributed to so many of the top twenty -- Seven. It gratifies me that we're getting so many hits. I think readership is up lately. I know more threads are getting written. Yay!
'Tis true! many submissions for The Babysitter lately, keepin me busy with them all.. special thanx to Jeriah, if he reads here
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Old 02-01-2008, 06:35 AM   #154
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1. Summer With My Stepsisters by mememe621

Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 37 Rating/Votes: 0.5/45 Views: 6710 Added: Dec 28, 2007 Updated: Jan 30, 2008 09:37 PM

Hot stepsisters teach brother how to please a woman.


2. Absolute Power by Uncola Man

Category: Mind Control POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 21 Rating/Votes: 0.0/380 Views: 3993 Added: May 15, 2006 Updated: Jan 31, 2008 06:54 PM

When you wake up from a dream and find that you have complete control over everything in the world,


3. Sidekicks R us by thesub

Category: Fan Fiction POV: 2nd Person, Both Male and Female Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 24 Rating/Votes: 0.1/39 Views: 3437 Added: Apr 16, 2007 Updated: Jan 22, 2008 05:14 PM

You get a job as a sidekick to a busty hero.


4. Aaralon's Discoveries by Sixth

Category: SciFi/Fantasy POV: 3rd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 37 Rating/Votes: 0.0/744 Views: 3373 Added: Jul 19, 2007 Updated: Jan 28, 2008 09:17 AM

Kinky sex in a fantasy world; demon lovers, sex magic, horny princesses, gangbangs, tentacles, lust.


5. The Light by yes41414

Category: SciFi/Fantasy POV: 3rd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 17 Rating/Votes: 0.0/37 Views: 2857 Added: Feb 10, 2007 Updated: Jan 31, 2008 05:42 AM

As a boy falls into an unused well, he discovers that this could be the best accident of his life


6. Nancy Drew and the Summer Kamp Mystery by B1G_Bro

Category: Fan Fiction POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 12 Rating/Votes: 0.1/64 Views: 2795 Added: Jan 22, 2008 Updated: Jan 31, 2008 12:02 PM

Help the hot teen detective investigate the disappearance of Summer Kamp


7. Endowiar by moonblack

Category: SciFi/Fantasy POV: 3rd Person, Both Male and Female Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 19 Rating/Votes: 0.1/161 Views: 2638 Added: Feb 01, 2006 Updated: Jan 31, 2008 06:02 AM

A world full of magic, adventure and sex


8. A Day in the Life of a Schoolgirl by Renada

Category: SciFi/Fantasy POV: 2nd Person, Female Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 9 Rating/Votes: 0.3/33 Views: 2545 Added: Oct 10, 2007 Updated: Jan 31, 2008 10:01 AM

Turns out a schoolgirl uniform attracts all kinds of 'attention.'


9. A Boy at a Girls School by switch76

Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 36 Rating/Votes: 0.0/897 Views: 2498 Added: Feb 18, 2003 Updated: Jan 21, 2008 06:52 PM

A girls boarding school allows boys in for the first time. You are one of the lucky few to join.


10. Lawn Boy by Torg

Category: Cheating Wives POV: 3rd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 18 Rating/Votes: 0.3/139 Views: 2418 Added: Jan 07, 2006 Updated: Jan 15, 2008 02:12 PM

What adventures does Chuck have while mowing suburban grass

11. Ultimate Fanfiction by lilguy

Category: Fan Fiction POV: 2nd Person, Both Male and Female Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 101 Rating/Votes: 0.0/236 Views: 2361 Added: Sep 23, 2005 Updated: Jan 31, 2008 05:50 PM

The longest and most interactive Fanfiction ever. In the same vein of create a fembot. anything goes


12. A Gift From the Cosmos by Cretan_Bull14

Category: Mind Control POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 12 Rating/Votes: 0.0/10 Views: 2296 Added: Jan 22, 2008 Updated: Jan 28, 2008 10:15 PM

A space geek's discovery gives him a special gift


13. "3 Families" by RicoLouis

Category: Incest POV: 1st Person, Both Male and Female Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 52 Rating/Votes: 0.0/252 Views: 2265 Added: Jan 23, 2007 Updated: Jan 31, 2008 06:43 PM

The story of your family, your step family, and your best friends family.


14. "Molesting Mom" by RicoLouis

Category: Incest POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 5 Rating/Votes: 0.6/8 Views: 2166 Added: Dec 19, 2007 Updated: Jan 30, 2008 06:33 AM

Mom's Sound Asleep.


15. Sex at the Mall by switch76

Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 28 Rating/Votes: 0.1/208 Views: 2122 Added: Mar 03, 2006 Updated: Jan 19, 2008 05:19 PM

You spend the day meeting girls at the mall. What can you get up to?


16. "Yes" by remfan55

Category: Mind Control POV: 3rd Person, Female Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 12 Rating/Votes: 0.1/270 Views: 2069 Added: Mar 22, 2006 Updated: Jan 31, 2008 02:36 PM

A girl cannot refuse any request made of her


17. Payback (with panties!) by mistressrachel

Category: Fetish POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 16 Rating/Votes: 0.3/43 Views: 1805 Added: Dec 20, 2007 Updated: Jan 25, 2008 07:35 PM

A "little" rumor you started about your friend emasculated him...now it's his turn to feminize you


18. Dorm Life by Torg

Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 3rd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 18 Rating/Votes: 0.1/56 Views: 1785 Added: Sep 12, 2005 Updated: Jan 29, 2008 12:03 PM

A college student shows up in the dorm for the first day of dorm life.


19. Weekend In An All Girls Dorm by Imhotep

Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 33 Rating/Votes: 0.0/1049 Views: 1783 Added: Mar 01, 2003 Updated: Jan 31, 2008 10:06 AM

You visit Ellen, a sexy, blonde friend at her college dorm.


20. Brother with Family of Girls by CarterRyan

Category: Incest POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 8 Rating/Votes: 0.1/70 Views: 1767 Added: Dec 14, 2007 Updated: Jan 30, 2008 09:41 AM

4 sisters, 2 Aunts, 1 mother, 3 nieces, 5 cousins
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Old 02-02-2008, 09:45 AM   #155
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Nancy Drew...

Nancy Drew came in sixth!!! That is awesome..

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Old 02-02-2008, 11:31 PM   #156
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3 famalies got 13th, not bad for its one year anniversity.
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Old 02-03-2008, 02:13 AM   #157
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Aw man, I was really hoping to break Rico's record from a year ago! But I barely topped 2/3 of his views.

It's been a fun month, but I was really surprised that with all of those views, only 1 thread was written by someone else, and that just happened a few days ago. Any insight into why that was? Were people scared off by the number of my threads? Was the story hard to add to? Was it just boring?
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Old 02-03-2008, 02:28 AM   #158
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Aw man, I was really hoping to break Rico's record from a year ago! But I barely topped 2/3 of his views.

It's been a fun month, but I was really surprised that with all of those views, only 1 thread was written by someone else, and that just happened a few days ago. Any insight into why that was? Were people scared off by the number of my threads? Was the story hard to add to? Was it just boring?
It is hardly boring. You wouldn't have gotten all those views if it was. You've just been going on so well, I haven't felt the need to chop in and add something. I want to see where you're going.
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Old 02-03-2008, 02:39 AM   #159
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Personally, I tried to read the story, but just couldn't get into it. There's a lot of telling instead of showing. The first several threads have no conversation, no direct action, just lots of talking about the characters instead of actual scenes.

And even when it gets going, there's still very little of it. On page 5 we finally get a scene where someone talks. The quarterback starts saying mean things to Marisa. But when it's time for her to respond we get, "Marisa’s furious, and she fires off a string of curses at him." I'd much rather read what she actually said. Different people curse in different ways, so this doesnt give me a sense of her personality. It's like I'm watching a movie and someone fast-forwarded over one character's part of the conversation.
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Old 02-03-2008, 02:11 PM   #160
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That's a really good point, GB. The issue I was struggling with was how to introduce the reader to the characters before the real action starts in the apartment, without making the introduction so long it became the story itself.

I handled it differently with Jessica and with Marisa, the former by telling a brief annecdote and the latter by describing a lengthy scene with conversations. Pros and cons on both sides, I think--I'm not sure the story would be better if I made the Jessica miniskirt story into more of a scene, but I might try rewriting it just as an excercise to see how it turns out.

Oh, and I think the entire story after thread 5 or so is in scene form, with lots of conversation, (particularly from Ch. 2 on) so if you give it another try you might find you like it more than you think!

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Old 02-29-2008, 06:04 AM   #161
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February 2008

1. Nancy Drew and the Summer Kamp Mystery by B1G_Bro
Category: Fan Fiction POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 22 Rating/Votes: 0.1/179 Views: 6742 Added: Jan 22, 2008 Updated: Feb 29, 2008 04:32 AM
Help the hot teen detective investigate the disappearance of Summer Kamp

2. A Sexy Day in Suburbia by hematoma
Category: Exhibitionist & Voyeur POV: 2nd Person, Female Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 20 Rating/Votes: 0.0/22 Views: 4699 Added: Jan 26, 2008 Updated: Feb 29, 2008 01:53 AM
Joy just turned 18, her parents are away, and it's time for some summertime fun.

3. "3 Families" by RicoLouis
Category: Incest POV: 1st Person, Both Male and Female Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 52 Rating/Votes: 0.0/318 Views: 3934 Added: Jan 23, 2007 Updated: Feb 29, 2008 01:47 AM
The story of your family, your step family, and your best friends family.

4. Comforting the Roommate by tantrikenetic
Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 19 Rating/Votes: 0.0/308 Views: 3262 Added: Apr 18, 2007 Updated: Feb 24, 2008 08:42 PM
Your best friend and college roommate gets dumped by her boyfriend and she needs some comforting.

5. An Evening With Ashley by GoodBoy741
Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 7 Rating/Votes: 0.4/47 Views: 2683 Added: Jan 31, 2008 Updated: Feb 19, 2008 04:41 PM
A teen and his babysitter have an evening together that they'll never forget.

6. A Boy at a Girls School by switch76
Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 36 Rating/Votes: 0.0/905 Views: 2481 Added: Feb 18, 2003 Updated: Feb 19, 2008 04:48 PM
A girls boarding school allows boys in for the first time. You are one of the lucky few to join.

7. A Gift From the Cosmos by Cretan_Bull14
Category: Mind Control POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 12 Rating/Votes: 0.0/25 Views: 2255 Added: Jan 22, 2008 Updated: Feb 27, 2008 06:11 AM
A space geek's discovery gives him a special gift

8. Lemonade Stand by tommyd79
Category: Humor & Satire POV: 1st Person, Female Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 8 Rating/Votes: 3.6/64 Views: 2250 Added: Apr 13, 2007 Updated: Feb 25, 2008 08:38 AM
Play as the leading starlet, as she tries to pay off a debt by selling… LEMONADE?

9. A Wishbone Tale by SympatheticDevil
Category: Mind Control POV: 3rd Person, Both Male and Female Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 8 Rating/Votes: 0.7/7 Views: 2098 Added: Feb 24, 2008 Updated: Feb 28, 2008 06:47 PM
Satan's finger bone allows the holder to control and change any person, body and mind.

10. Summer With My Stepsisters by mememe621
Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 40 Rating/Votes: 0.0/51 Views: 2051 Added: Dec 28, 2007 Updated: Feb 23, 2008 01:51 PM
Hot stepsisters teach brother how to please a woman.

11. Aaralon's Discoveries by Sixth
Category: SciFi/Fantasy POV: 3rd Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 37 Rating/Votes: 0.0/751 Views: 2023 Added: Jul 19, 2007 Updated: Feb 18, 2008 02:23 AM
Kinky sex in a fantasy world; demon lovers, sex magic, horny princesses, gangbangs, tentacles, lust.

12. Absolute Power by Uncola Man
Category: Mind Control POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 21 Rating/Votes: 0.0/384 Views: 2008 Added: May 15, 2006 Updated: Feb 27, 2008 12:34 PM
When you wake up from a dream and find that you have complete control over everything in the world,

13. Apartment 3G by JonGrey
Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 18 Rating/Votes: 0.1/307 Views: 2008 Added: Apr 02, 2002 Updated: Feb 25, 2008 05:30 PM
You are *forced* into an apartment with three ladies.

14. A Dramatic Change by menoetes
Category: SciFi/Fantasy POV: 3rd Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 23 Rating/Votes: 0.0/9 Views: 1854 Added: Jan 12, 2008 Updated: Feb 27, 2008 02:56 AM
The women in your town are changing, becoming beautiful and horny. But what is happening to the men?

15. Sex at the Mall by switch76
Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 28 Rating/Votes: 0.1/220 Views: 1837 Added: Mar 03, 2006 Updated: Feb 22, 2008 09:11 AM
You spend the day meeting girls at the mall. What can you get up to?

16. Weekend In An All Girls Dorm by Imhotep
Category: Erotic Couplings POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 33 Rating/Votes: 0.0/1075 Views: 1712 Added: Mar 01, 2003 Updated: Feb 29, 2008 04:01 AM
You visit Ellen, a sexy, blonde friend at her college dorm.

17. An Open Mind by menoetes
Category: Mind Control POV: 2nd Person, Male Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 34 Rating/Votes: 0.1/200 Views: 1712 Added: Jun 01, 2006 Updated: Feb 29, 2008 01:14 AM
After dramatic surgery you discover that being in the hospital has had some powerful side effects!

18. Ultimate Fanfiction by lilguy
Category: Fan Fiction POV: 2nd Person, Both Male and Female Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 101 Rating/Votes: 0.0/243 Views: 1700 Added: Sep 23, 2005 Updated: Feb 22, 2008 07:22 PM
The longest and most interactive Fanfiction ever. In the same vein of create a fembot. anything goes

19. A tale of Tharros by gunde
Category: SciFi/Fantasy POV: 3rd Person, Both Male and Female Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 31 Rating/Votes: 0.0/162 Views: 1648 Added: Jul 09, 2007 Updated: Feb 28, 2008 07:04 PM
Busty sluts and well-hung studs go at it in a fantasy metropolis

20. "Yes" by remfan55
Category: Mind Control POV: 3rd Person, Female Mode: Open
Deepest Thread: 16 Rating/Votes: 0.1/273 Views: 1469 Added: Mar 22, 2006 Updated: Feb 28, 2008 06:32 PM
A girl cannot refuse any request made of her

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Old 02-29-2008, 06:10 AM   #162
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Hope you don't mind Switch.

This was done around 5am Eastern US time.

I'm pretty sure it is all correct.

For those stories with the same amount of views I just put whichever I saw first as the higher rank, sorry.

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Old 02-29-2008, 09:49 AM   #163
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Old 02-29-2008, 10:15 AM   #164
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Oh, by the way... Nancy Drew #1. Woo-Hoo!!!

I don't think anyone will ever top Rico's 9300 or whatever... but, I think we all should try!

anyway, adios.
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Old 03-03-2008, 12:41 AM   #165
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Woo, 3 families in third spot

Rico had 9300 hits? When was that?
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Old 03-03-2008, 07:34 AM   #166
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3rds not bad since I am not adding anything new myself to 3 families.

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1. "Cause and Effect" by RicoLouis

Category: Incest POV: 1st Person, Male Mode: Open

Deepest Thread: 17 Rating/Votes: 0.0/116 Views: 9383 Added: Dec 25, 2006 Updated: Jan 29, 2007 04:41 PM

It seemed like just another day. It wasn't.
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Old 03-03-2008, 09:45 AM   #167
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I got my only two stories in the top twenty - sweet! I have been writting more this month though and it sure helps when others contribute - thanks retroguy (wherever you might be). I'm pretty proud of that and congrats to everyone who got in there too.
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Old 03-03-2008, 12:15 PM   #168
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I can see A Wishbone Tale by SympatheticDevil doing really well this month.
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Old 03-03-2008, 12:30 PM   #169
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Old 03-04-2008, 11:32 PM   #170
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my last posts on puppetmaster and wishbone are waiting for offspring. Are they not pregnant with possibility?
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Old 03-05-2008, 01:06 AM   #171
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I've barely looked at Puppetmaster in awhile. Other stuff has been taking up most of my interest lately.

I'll look at your posts in Wishbone and see if anything strikes my interest.
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Here is what I don't understand. In Wishbone, why does Jake change Dave's mother if he says "I've been jonesing for your mom for years..."? It really doesn't make sense. It couldn't escape my mind. If he wanted her so bad, that would mean he accepted the good with the bad and wouldn't change her into a cartoon bimbo. Sorry, I guess I just sort of ragged all over the storyline but apparently it doesn't matter because the story is 1st in views right now. I also checked out your story GoodBoy741, and I have to say I love the intro. If a professor did something like that in real life, I would probably laugh my ass off as he got carried away in a cruiser. I'm going to look more into it and I'll probably contribute a couple threads if you don't mind.

adios.

-Just got done reading your 'Jenny McAllister' threads and I have to say, very HOT! Do you mind if I have a go at the 8th thread in the series? Promise I'll do her justice and keep her 'mostly' VIRGIN.

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Here is what I don't understand. In Wishbone, why does Jake change Dave's mother if he says "I've been jonesing for your mom for years..."? It really doesn't make sense. It couldn't escape my mind. If he wanted her so bad, that would mean he accepted the good with the bad and wouldn't change her into a cartoon bimbo.
You are applying logic to a sexual fantasy. That usually doesn't work.
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Here is what I don't understand. In Wishbone, why does Jake change Dave's mother if he says "I've been jonesing for your mom for years..."? It really doesn't make sense. It couldn't escape my mind. If he wanted her so bad, that would mean he accepted the good with the bad and wouldn't change her into a cartoon bimbo.
I think the idea was that he became attracted to her when she was younger and that's the picture he had in his head of her. Once she took her clothes off and he saw the full 46 year old version, it didn't match what was in his head. That's why he made her younger. After all, he only changed her age by ten years, so it's not like he rewound her back to a teenager. And just because he's attracted to her physically doesn't mean he can't think of anything to improve, so he changes the breasts. Turning her stupid was something Jake did accidentally.


There have been a few women that I thought about, but my fantasy was really an idealised version of her.
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-Just got done reading your 'Jenny McAllister' threads and I have to say, very HOT! Do you mind if I have a go at the 8th thread in the series? Promise I'll do her justice and keep her 'mostly' VIRGIN.
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