Old 03-03-2013, 02:11 AM   #1
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Hello

A follow up to my first poem. Be nice!

I posted this poem last night and well I hope you find this contribution enjoyable.

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A Girl Like Me

The sun's rays, kiss me
They massage me with melanin
Deep into my skin
Dipped in buttery oils

I have something rich
Bitter to the fearful
Yet so arousing

You want to try
You want to explore my regions
You've been scared to give in
But you want to be with me

You know how sweet I must taste
You cringe at the thought of licking me
My blackberry is glistening
Raining fresh juices from it's core

You think about cleaning up
With me on your platter
Maybe without a napkin
Maybe without a rubber---whoa

You want me raw
No extra spices or seasoning
You just want to know
You just want to try
You want to experience

You want to be with a girl like me
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:13 AM   #2
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A follow up to my first poem. Be nice!

http://forum.literotica.com/attachme...0&d=1362250675
Very nice. Would love to see the sensual contrast of pink ;-)


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Old 03-03-2013, 02:17 AM   #3
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Very nice. Would love to see the sensual contrast of pink ;-)


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Thanks. I do have some pink areas on me though
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:19 AM   #4
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mm, sounds like i want a peek
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:21 AM   #5
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mm, sounds like i want a peek
Did you not see the peek?
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:23 AM   #6
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:25 AM   #7
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Hey Coco, beautiful photo and a beautiful body
thank you
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:28 AM   #8
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What a beautiful body you've got there.

Helloooooo indeed!
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:28 AM   #9
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I'll second that - absolutely stunning!
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:29 AM   #10
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Wet dark skin. So lovely!
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:29 AM   #11
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Thanks. I do have some pink areas on me though
I know, those are the areas we'd love to see
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:39 AM   #12
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i meant at the pink >.< lol
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:43 AM   #13
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beautiful skin, sexy body, and an even sexier mind.

thanks for sharing both. looking forward to seeing more of both.
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Old 03-03-2013, 02:56 AM   #14
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I'll second that - absolutely stunning!
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Wet dark skin. So lovely!
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i meant at the pink >.< lol
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beautiful skin, sexy body, and an even sexier mind.

thanks for sharing both. looking forward to seeing more of both.
Thank you lovely gents!
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Old 03-03-2013, 03:02 AM   #15
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Oh my. You're so beautiful.
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Old 03-03-2013, 07:20 AM   #16
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Thats a nice looking ass
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Old 03-03-2013, 07:50 AM   #17
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Hi coco,

I loved the poem. Thank you for sharing it. I think you're gorgeous, too! You have a beautiful body!

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Old 03-03-2013, 08:20 AM   #18
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I peaked.

Lovely photo.

Your poem was fun and intriguing.

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Old 03-03-2013, 11:16 AM   #19
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I loved the poem. Thank you for sharing it. I think you're gorgeous, too! You have a beautiful body!

Take care
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I peaked.

Lovely photo.

Your poem was fun and intriguing.

Thanks, hopefully it reflects me, hint hint*.
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Old 03-03-2013, 11:25 AM   #20
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Lovely poem and pic!
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Wonderful poem and pic combination!!! Welcome to you!!! Can't wait to see and read more of your work!
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Old 03-03-2013, 12:27 PM   #22
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Old 03-03-2013, 12:52 PM   #24
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Absolutely incredible body. One of my great regrets in life is never having been with a woman of color. So, you are right. I want to be with a girl like you.



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A follow up to my first poem. Be nice!

I posted this poem last night and well I hope you find this contribution enjoyable.


You want to be with a girl like me

http://forum.literotica.com/attachme...0&d=1362250675
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Old 03-03-2013, 08:38 PM   #25
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A follow up to my first poem. Be nice!

I posted this poem last night and well I hope you find this contribution enjoyable.

(Photo at the bottom in the link)


A Girl Like Me

The sun's rays, kiss me
They massage me with melanin
Deep into my skin
Dipped in buttery oils

I have something rich
Bitter to the fearful
Yet so arousing

You want to try
You want to explore my regions
You've been scared to give in
But you want to be with me

You know how sweet I must taste
You cringe at the thought of licking me
My blackberry is glistening
Raining fresh juices from it's core

You think about cleaning up
With me on your platter
Maybe without a napkin
Maybe without a rubber---whoa

You want me raw
No extra spices or seasoning
You just want to know
You just want to try
You want to experience

You want to be with a girl like me

http://forum.literotica.com/attachme...0&d=1362250675
Well written, nice touch with photo, you are very sexy!
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