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08-26-2006, 04:38 AM
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Professional Dreamer
Aurora Black is offline
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: State of Euphoria
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Aurora Black
Dark, Passionate & Evil Erotica
(and the occasional sweet romance)
The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine.
~ George Sand (1804 - 1876)
Every action we take, everything we do, is either a victory or defeat
in the struggle to become what we want to be. ~ Ninon de L'Enclos
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08-26-2006, 06:32 AM
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Dirty Old Man
TxRad is offline
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Texas
Posts: 27,398
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Two new stories up.....
Memories of Box Sex......One wife, One husband, One hot day, .... shake well
The Commodore's Wife......Naval Sex.... From her fantail to her staff...
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08-26-2006, 08:58 AM
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Riding to the Rescue
sirhugs is offline
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Thunder Bay, Ontario, Canada
Posts: 32,878
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08-26-2006, 09:00 AM
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Professional Dreamer
Aurora Black is offline
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: State of Euphoria
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Originally Posted by sirhugs
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And has been replied to. 
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Aurora Black
Dark, Passionate & Evil Erotica
(and the occasional sweet romance)
The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine.
~ George Sand (1804 - 1876)
Every action we take, everything we do, is either a victory or defeat
in the struggle to become what we want to be. ~ Ninon de L'Enclos
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08-26-2006, 09:18 AM
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Riding to the Rescue
sirhugs is offline
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Thunder Bay, Ontario, Canada
Posts: 32,878
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Originally Posted by Aurora Black
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08-27-2006, 11:05 AM
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Really Really Experienced
janiexx is offline
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 390
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New Chapter out today...
Chapter 5 of Staring At The Sun has appeared today.
I'd really appreciate any feedback or comments. As always, I will reply to anyone who takes the time to leave a few words for me, whether good or bad.
I'm currently working on Chapter 6 and a new story "A Man and A Woman" is pending and waiting approval. The new story is very romantic and is based on my two week holiday in Majorca.
Thanks to everyone who has read, voted and left comments so far.
janiexx 
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"Janie you are the best keep up the writing and you are the sexiest woman I know in the UK as well! You are super awesome!"
Thanks Seth! 
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08-27-2006, 11:05 AM
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Riding to the Rescue
sirhugs is offline
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Thunder Bay, Ontario, Canada
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Originally Posted by janiexx
Chapter 5 of Staring At The Sun has appeared today.
I'd really appreciate any feedback or comments. As always, I will reply to anyone who takes the time to leave a few words for me, whether good or bad.
I'm currently working on Chapter 6 and a new story "A Man and A Woman" is pending and waiting approval. The new story is very romantic and is based on my two week holiday in Majorca.
Thanks to everyone who has read, voted and left comments so far.
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janie girl..where ya been?
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08-27-2006, 11:08 AM
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Really Really Experienced
janiexx is offline
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 390
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Hi sirhugs!
I've been on vacation and busy writing - I would love to hear from you with your thoughts.
Your opinion is, as always, of real value to me.
janiexx
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"Janie you are the best keep up the writing and you are the sexiest woman I know in the UK as well! You are super awesome!"
Thanks Seth!
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08-29-2006, 02:53 AM
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Really Experienced
cawastedyouth is offline
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: California
Posts: 102
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A little background
Background story about Lauren and Julia has just gone up...
http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=272023
If you would like to read more about this story line, please keep your comments coming.
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CA Wasted Youth
"They've got a file on me and it's a mile long, they say that they've got all the proof that I'm just another case of arrested development and just another wasted youth..."
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08-29-2006, 06:55 AM
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Virgin
tipofyourtongue is offline
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: US
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3rd story
My third submission, "Can't Help Myself" is pending but I'm already looking forward to receiving feedback. As a writer, I invite all comments and/or criticism. I initially became a member of Literotica as a means to give my husband something to look forward to while I was out of state. He enjoys the saucy read and has been a longtime fan of this site. My last submissions were written several months ago and I felt the creative bug begin to stir again. Should you find the stories below interesting, I hope the 3rd satisfies you as well. Here's to looking forward to a good read.
Category: Anal
One Week- Sex-starved woman recalls the last time.
http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=260538
Category: Toys and Masturbation
Goldilocks- Modern day Goldie defiling a residence.
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08-29-2006, 08:33 AM
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Literotica Guru
jeninflorida is offline
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Florida
Posts: 20,570
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my new story
I'm looking for feedback on my newest story
http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=271683
the story posted on sunday, but been a little busy getting ready for this latest hurricane....
any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
thanks
Jen
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life is fun, too bad we only get one dance.
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08-29-2006, 11:16 AM
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Riding to the Rescue
sirhugs is offline
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Thunder Bay, Ontario, Canada
Posts: 32,878
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I gave it a "5" for heat, but thought it would be even better with more dialogue, especially to open the story. The beginning was very 'tell' ratherthan 'show'. Then during the sex scene, I wasn't sure if it was silent on purpose ( dramatic effect) or that you forgot that most of us talk during sex. The sex scene could have been hotter with more detail. don't be afraid to expand to longer formats. |
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08-30-2006, 09:50 AM
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Experienced
Jen24 is offline
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 36
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Journal of a Proper Young Lady II is up
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08-31-2006, 02:20 PM
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Really Experienced
Ravlicious is offline
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: So Cal
Posts: 192
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I just had my first story on Literotica posted. It's called The Hat. It's about a strange hat that a guy's friend wears, letting him get as lucky as could be with the ladies. I hope everyone enjoys it! |
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09-01-2006, 09:02 AM
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Green Goddess
SweetWitch is offline
Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 19,118
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Heartless
My newest little story of romance is now posted. It's a story about healing a broken heart. Enjoy and I hope to hear from you!
SW
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09-01-2006, 09:27 AM
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Loves Spam
pieretto is offline
Join Date: Aug 2006
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[spam/advertising prohibited per our forum guidelines]
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09-01-2006, 03:31 PM
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Green Goddess
SweetWitch is offline
Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 19,118
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Chapter 3
To all of you who have been writing and asking when it will be done, Chapter 3 of Frustration is now posted.
http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=272338
Enjoy, and as always, don't forget to vote and leave feedback.
Thank you!
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09-01-2006, 03:36 PM
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Master of My pet Goddess
TheGreatRaja is offline
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: West Central IL
Posts: 8,999
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here's my 1st story
Office Story
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09-02-2006, 05:26 AM
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Really Really Experienced
janiexx is offline
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 390
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Romance Story
"A Man and A Woman" appeared yesterday and I would appreciate all feedback and comments.
The story was inspired by two recent events and is unashamedly romantic, but I hope the sex is hot... 
Thanks and enjoy,
janiexx
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"Janie you are the best keep up the writing and you are the sexiest woman I know in the UK as well! You are super awesome!"
Thanks Seth!
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09-02-2006, 10:19 AM
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Green Goddess
SweetWitch is offline
Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 19,118
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The Break-up
Lust, betrayal and revenge--this is the subject matter of this story of a husband and wife on the road to a shattered marriage.
Enjoy and, please, let me know what you think.
http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=272564
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09-02-2006, 01:16 PM
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Really Experienced
cawastedyouth is offline
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: California
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More Lauren and Julia
http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=272456
The surprise of meeting Julia at her new job causes Lauren to open her thinking.
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CA Wasted Youth
"They've got a file on me and it's a mile long, they say that they've got all the proof that I'm just another case of arrested development and just another wasted youth..."
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09-02-2006, 01:54 PM
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Experienced
duddle146 is offline
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: USA
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New Story Approved.
This morning I received an always pleasant surprise. My latest submission has been approved and posted.
I would love for anyone who has the time, to read it. It's a short one! Clicking the link below will take you there. This story is for any Writer that's ever had a Troll on their Tale. *LOL*
http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=272572
Thank you all, for your kindness,
Duddle146
Last edited by duddle146 : 09-02-2006 at 01:58 PM.
Reason: slight change.
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09-03-2006, 11:58 AM
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Really Experienced
cawastedyouth is offline
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: California
Posts: 102
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Different story
For those who like a little fantasy, a little BDSM, and a little romance, Because The Night is up at: http://english.literotica.com/storie....php?id=272751
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CA Wasted Youth
"They've got a file on me and it's a mile long, they say that they've got all the proof that I'm just another case of arrested development and just another wasted youth..."
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09-03-2006, 05:59 PM
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Loves Spam
ringle is offline
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 538
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Seeking feedback.
Last edited by ringle : 09-05-2006 at 04:29 PM.
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09-04-2006, 05:00 AM
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Lech Master
AchtungNight is offline
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Austin, Texas
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Passion Ch. 3 is up now, depicting our heroine's first lesbian experiences. The previous reports of BDSM and a villain being in this part did not work out, I'm afraid. Events outside Lit's sphere of influence have damaged my inspiration for the series, so it will not be continuing. I did enjoy writing it, though, I must say. I hope you all enjoy the reading too.
I will be back, probably with something outside the Celebrity category. For now, later, y'all.
Last edited by AchtungNight : 09-04-2006 at 05:06 AM.
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