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Old 09-24-2012, 02:16 AM   #2751
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From "The Changeling Baby":


The first creature spoke: "Hello William," it said.

"Bah-uh-buh-wha—?" William said.

"Hello William" said the female creature. "Can we come in?"

This was too much. He jumped up and ran for the door, but stopped himself. He was sure the monsters would be gone by the time he brought anyone else in. And besides, was this even really happening? Or was he losing it? He still couldn't be sure. He pressed his face against the cool wood of the door, feeling the texture of the paint, reassured by the tangibility of something solid against his skin. Just take a deep breath, he told himself, the world will start making sense again soon. I hope.

"It's all right, William," said the male creature. "I'm sorry I frightened you today."

"We wouldn't hurt you," said the woman. "We just want to talk."

William swallowed. "Okay," he said. "So talk."

They paused. "It would be easier if you would let us in..." said the male one. William wondered why they didn't just break in; they could fit through the window if they squeezed? Did they need to be invited in first, like vampires? Or maybe, he thought, they just don't want to scare me anymore than they already have...

He turned to face the window again, but shook his head and stayed on the opposite side of the room. "No," was all he said.

"Please William," said the male. "We need your help."

William almost laughed; what could they possibly need from him? Other than to be let in, and that sure as hell wasn't happening.

"We're desperate," said the woman, and William was surprised to hear her voice tremble. It almost looked like she had tears in her eyes.

"Find someone else to help you," William said. "Just go away and leave me alone."

"We can't do that," the woman said. "We need you, William."

"For what?" William said.

"We need your help," said the male creature, his voice so soft it was barely audible over the wind, "to get our son back."



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Old 09-26-2012, 11:33 PM   #2752
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Just released chapter 4 of New Life in a New World. For someone who used to HATE writing, I honestly did not think I would make it this far. I would love your feedback. Thanks!

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Old 09-27-2012, 05:54 AM   #2753
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Wow, much faster than last time. My new story is up. A little less plot heavy than my first story. Enjoy!

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Old 09-27-2012, 03:11 PM   #2754
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Old 09-27-2012, 04:34 PM   #2755
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You go to your profile and click on the "submissions" link. A form comes up and gives you everything you need to get your story uploaded. Good luck!
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Old 09-28-2012, 06:55 PM   #2756
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My latest is up.

Missy Pays the Rent.

The cute niece of a struggling couple discovers the landlords enjoy hiring young female escorts from time to time and decides to offer her body to pay the rent.

This is a fun story, no non-consent on behalf of Missy and a good time is had by all.

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Old 09-29-2012, 09:50 PM   #2757
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Coach King - New Chapter

The ninth chapter of my first series has been posted for about a week now, but this is the first time I've ever promoted anything in this thread. I've been going strong with steady updates since February of this year. Here's the link: http://www.literotica.com/s/coach-king-ch-09.

In a nut shell, this story is a romance (though it doesn't really start that way) between a high school teacher and two of his students (though it has been classified under the 'Mature' category). It would take too long to summarize all the chapters, but my main goal of the story was to establish characters that felt real in a situation that feels implausible, and that what eventually ensues feels inevitable. The first few chapters were a bit rough, my attempts at getting a feel for the characters and figuring out what exactly what I wanted to do, but I think I've started to hit my stride with it.


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Old 10-01-2012, 08:14 PM   #2758
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Hi all.

Cthasguahafgh is posted and is an entry in the Hallowe'en contest.
http://www.literotica.com/s/cthasguahafgh
It is a short story (for me) about a couple's encounter with a supernatural horror, set in northern Ontario. It's erotic horror.
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Old 10-05-2012, 08:02 AM   #2759
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Good day all! My Halloween contest entry just posted. This is my first ever contest entry, Enjoy!

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Old 10-06-2012, 10:04 AM   #2760
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Chapter 2 of Friendly Favours is up HERE

I'm not a fan of it but well, it was time to get it done and move on!
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Old 10-07-2012, 03:22 AM   #2761
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From "The Ballad of Tam Lin":

Tam Lin was disguised as a puddle on the side of the road when she arrived, but of course Janet recognized him right away. "Oh, hello," he said, sitting up and drying himself off. She kissed his cheek. He walked past without looking at her. It was a grey day, and the leaves on the trees were dying, and there was a chill in the air. Tam Lin looked grey around the edges himself.

"You don't seem well?" she said.

"I'm not well. I'm going to die. It's Hallo'ween, you know, and I still can't leave Carterhaugh."

"You can't?" said Janet, sitting down with the clover. "How very odd."

"I don't understand it. Once I have the love of a good woman that should break the curse and allow me to leave. Nothing about this makes sense." All of a sudden he grabbed Janet by the shoulders and shook her a little. "Janet, you do love me, don't you? Really?"

"Of course," she said, studying the grass blades under her feet. "Truly. With all my heart."

"Janet...I'm beginning to think that you've taken advantage of me."

"Are you upset?"

"No; impressed. Very impressed. But it doesn't help either of us with our problems. You're pregnant, aren't you?"

She nodded.

"And you wanted to help me so that I can get you out of an engagement, don't you?"

"Are you reading my mind?"

"No, just your behavior. You can't marry me if I'm dead, you know."

"I can't marry you anyway, not until you're a proper man."

"I haven't been a proper man in my entire life," said Tam Lin. "I can't believe it's going to end like this. I have so much to live for. There are songs, and wines, and women, and food, and women, and the forest, and women..."

Janet took her cloak off, laid it on the grass, and stretched out on it to think. "This Tithe," she said, "there's a ceremony?"

"Yes," said Tam Lin, his voice flat.

"What if we stopped it? She can't sacrifice you if we don't let the sacrifice happen, right?"

He laughed. "Oh, that's rich. You'll stop her, will you? She's the Queen of Fairies and you're—" He stopped. "You're...someone magic doesn't work on. I wonder...Janet, I'm having a thought."

"Well there's a first time for everything."

"As I've said to so many young women these seven years," he said. "But I think I know how we can save me. By which I mean us. But only if you're feeling very brave." He looked at her. "Are you very brave, Janet?"

She put both hands against her belly. "I hope so," she said.


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Old 10-08-2012, 02:24 PM   #2762
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From "Carnival & Masque":

“In truth, I often wonder what people look like under their masks."

“Well," said Father Marlowe, "there’s little enough sin in that."

“But isn’t it the same as lust?” said Portia. “The gods say that to want to see someone’s unmasked face is the same as actually trying to see it.”

“But the gods also say that to deny our human failings is to try to supplant them,” said Father Marlowe. His mask was a chubby, smiling face of gold, with curling hair at the temples. She noticed that, as he’d gained weight with age, he’d taken to masks that portrayed chubby cheeks and double chins to match his girth. The observation made her uncomfortable for some reason.

“The gods give us sin to remind us of our place," Father Marlowe continued. "When you wish to see your husband without his mask, that is a lesson to you from the gods, and you should heed it.”

Portia’s steps faltered. “How did you know it was my husband’s face I was thinking of?” she said.

Father Marlowe’s belly shook with laughter. “Because you are a woman, and any woman would wonder about her husband‘s face after so many years of marriage. In truth, when my beloved Helen was alive I sometimes found myself dreaming about what her unmasked face might look like. Quite wicked of me, but I am as human as anyone else.”

They were outside now, walking beside the statues of the masked gods in the courtyard, the spires and masked gargoyles of the cathedral behind them.

“All the same Father, I wish I could rid myself of these thoughts,” said Portia.

“Well, there are times when I think we are fortunate to have our human failings," said Father Marlowe. "Tomorrow is the Hallowmas carnival, after all, and what would we do at carnival time if not sin?” The priest’s voice was tinged with mischief.

“I suppose so,” said Portia.

The crowd on the street flowed in two directions around them. Father Marlowe’s grinning mask glittered in the late-noon sun. “I always enjoy our discussions, Portia. I look forward to seeing you again. Meanwhile, try to forget about your doubts tomorrow. And try to forget about your guilt too, if you can.”

“Yes, Father,” said Portia, bowing her head again.


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Old 10-09-2012, 07:17 AM   #2763
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My first story: That Bitch Renee

This is one that was fighting its way out of my head. Here you'll find a fairly unique body transformation (I don't think I've seen anything close in stories or artwork), as well as a reasonable premise for how it occurred, and, to my mind, a much more satisfying source of exposition.

It does feel less than whole, as some comments have noted, but that's do to the fact that I was just laying it down. It is, essentially a first draft, but complete enough. Maybe I'll flesh it out more down the road.

And if anyone is inspired to draw Renee, I'd love to see.

http://www.literotica.com/s/that-bitch-renee

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Old 10-10-2012, 08:02 PM   #2764
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Third Punishment from Indian Maid
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Old 10-11-2012, 06:51 PM   #2765
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From "Creature Features":

Valerie jumped in her seat and, suddenly guilty, fastened her pants, dropped the phone, and ran up the steps two at a time. She burst into Colin's room, dark except for the dull light of the TV. He sat in his pajamas, hugging his knees, staring in white-faced shock.

"What is it?" Valerie said. "What's wrong?"

"The monster!" Colin said. Valerie looked at the TV screen. The speakers blared:


"You look worried, is anything wrong?"

"No, no, forget my foolishness, there's nothing the matter..."

She rounded on her brother.

"Colin, that's not funny," she said. "You scared the shit out of me. If you go screaming your head off over nothing then sometime when you're really hurt—"

"Not there!" Colin said, "Not the monster on the TV, that one!"

He was pointing behind her.

A floorboard creaked. The back of Valerie's neck prickled.


"Henry, I'm afraid, terribly afraid! Something is going to happen, I feel it, I can't get it out of my mind!"

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Old 10-12-2012, 11:52 AM   #2766
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New stories up:

Would love some feedback:

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Old 10-13-2012, 09:22 AM   #2767
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For Lucy1970Harker, Marketing Thoughts

For whatever it's worth, I think one thing that your stories need is more readers. Any of the Literotica-specific techniques might be useful. I mean things like occasionally writing stories for the more popular contests such as the ones for Halloween and Earthday. Your entries would go up on the voting lists, which last longer than the exposure from the daily New Stories list that many Lit-followers use. I also notice that some authors include several links back to their stories in their forum signatures. I often take advantage of those to follow up on a writer whose comments on the forum catch my attention.

Finally, I would humbly suggest that your titles are overly modest. "Slow" is a great story, but I wouldn't have read it if I hadn't already been one of your fans. There has been some discussion on the Authors' Hangout forum recently on the subject of titles, with one entry (Oggbashan?) including a link to a lit article written some years back by Whispersecret. I'd make suggestions about writing a punchy blurb to accompany the title, but I just read somewhere here on the forum that Laurel does those herself.
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Old 10-13-2012, 11:17 PM   #2768
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t. I'd make suggestions about writing a punchy blurb to accompany the title, but I just read somewhere here on the forum that Laurel does those herself.
Actually I believe Laurel only writes them if you don't write on yourself. I have written the blurb for all three of my stories
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Old 10-15-2012, 05:52 PM   #2769
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new writer, feedback request

Hi everyone. I would like to humbly beg for feedback from you guys on my new story. I am kind of new here and want to write more, but I need to see what's working and what isn't. I am mostly interested in the first time genre, which reflects in my writing.

Thanks to all of you that time time to comment on mine or other stories. It makes the whole experience that much better!

I broke it into three chapters, but each one has a conclusion and natural stopping point. ch1 is more f/f, chapters 2 and 3 are mf and anal.

http://www.literotica.com/s/for-claudia-ch-01
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Old 10-16-2012, 08:33 AM   #2770
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For whatever it's worth, I think one thing that your stories need is more readers. Any of the Literotica-specific techniques might be useful. I mean things like occasionally writing stories for the more popular contests such as the ones for Halloween and Earthday. Your entries would go up on the voting lists, which last longer than the exposure from the daily New Stories list that many Lit-followers use. I also notice that some authors include several links back to their stories in their forum signatures. I often take advantage of those to follow up on a writer whose comments on the forum catch my attention.

Finally, I would humbly suggest that your titles are overly modest. "Slow" is a great story, but I wouldn't have read it if I hadn't already been one of your fans. There has been some discussion on the Authors' Hangout forum recently on the subject of titles, with one entry (Oggbashan?) including a link to a lit article written some years back by Whispersecret. I'd make suggestions about writing a punchy blurb to accompany the title, but I just read somewhere here on the forum that Laurel does those herself.
Those are great ideas. I appreciate all your generous feedback and ideas. I will try a specific contest and try to create better story titles.

I am trying something new with writing chapters in a longer story. I just posted a second chapter.

"Against the Law" - Ch 2 is now up. http://www.literotica.com/s/against-the-law-ch-02

Chapter 3 is already in the system to be posted. Please let me know if you have any feedback. Thanks again

Chapter 3 is posted.

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Old 10-22-2012, 01:04 AM   #2771
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My first Indian "Loving Wives" story is up:

Vidya and her husband decide to teach the boss a lesson. But when Vidya gives herself up to the boss willingly, the cuckolded husband wonders who is really learning the lesson?

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-***********-vidya-ch-01

I put a great deal into the build up and the sex scenes, but even the build up has great (in my opinion) erotic scenes.
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Old 10-22-2012, 01:05 AM   #2772
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Old 10-24-2012, 03:16 PM   #2773
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Hey guys. Give my new horror story a read. It's kind of long but it's well worth it. I need all the votes I can get for the 2012 Halloween Story Contest.
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Old 10-24-2012, 03:18 PM   #2774
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Old 10-26-2012, 05:58 PM   #2775
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