It took me a while to get around to reading this, but I kept it in mind because I've been curious about the unique qualities of a well-written South Asian story and have been looking for them here (and trying to write a few myself). This is the first one I've read that I thought was done well and showed me some distinct South Asian story qualities. It's not a story, mind you. It's a sex scene only. But I thought it was very well done and I'll look for more submissions by you.
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