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Old 01-06-2017, 11:17 PM   #1
joshprim
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Writing Improvement Wanted

I think I'm already a pretty decent writer, however I'd like to improve in the areas of characterization and the situational environment (e.g. environmental sounds and smells, weather and the like) and the mood of the story. If anyone would like to read one of my stories and make suggestions along those lines, I'd love to hear them.

Try one of these two:
Mounted By a Cowboy (10/8/2013)
A young ranch hand is initiated to gay sex.
https://www.literotica.com/s/mounted-by-a-cowboy

Bolero
https://www.literotica.com/s/bolero-1?page=1
A college sophomore finds someone to take his virginity
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