I humbly request feedback and/or constructive criticism for my first submission on Lit.
It's the first real story I've ever written and, considering that english isn't my first language, I'd like to get some opinions on it (grammar, word choices, content, etc.).
The story is in Incest/Taboo and about brother-sister romance, 16,000 words long.
Link here: http://www.literotica.com/s/all-fun-and-games
Thank you very much.