>> Gary was consumed with hate. His soul was black with seething anger and hatred. His mind, once rational, had been eaten away by the all-consuming vileness of his obsession. Daily, he experienced the intensity of a black hatred that could have only been spawned in the depths of Hell.<<
*giggles * Oh man, this is fun to read. I'm reading it over again right now.
In my mind's eye, I picture him! Oh, it's very vivid! Bravo!
Ahhh...it's a shame the site doesn't have better safeguards, but it is a free site. If it were pay-per, they could hire more mods and such. They are doing the best they can.