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Old 08-31-2003, 06:41 PM   #101
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this here
this is
no need
no reason for rewrite
so tight and wholesome
so cool below no moon
dim lit

welcome the place
the inner
the lip kisser
no plan for poem or agenda

lash smack position
writen on spot
no substitutions
flounder like a fish
I want my lover floppy
 

Old 08-31-2003, 07:15 PM   #102
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No floppy lover I.
Hard body needs hard body,
Softness welcomes steel.

Hard! Yea, hard!
Lie loose, legs sprawl.
arms angled and easy.

Breathe laboured,
muscles strain......
yes, yes, yes!
 

Old 08-31-2003, 10:57 PM   #103
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wine

taste
lips to mouth

starts sweet with dry finish

subtle oak after taste
full bodied with legs

intrigued

swallow
stock the cellar
the relationship begins
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Old 08-31-2003, 11:05 PM   #104
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drive hard
soft
soft
oh so soft
sprawled and angled
easy hard easy
quickened breath and beat
yes
of course
obvious yes
easy hard easy
yes
soft easy hard
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Old 09-01-2003, 12:33 AM   #105
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late
shut up
put a fire on
lick me, kiss me
hold me late
do a trick
make me laugh like
you did last year
darling

it's not over not matter how much you pray
same prey
same bird each time we give toe the little
girls and boys with sad such faces
and boney excuse for need

it's not over in the night with brass
with matches to light of no purpose
little length and sputter
so shut up
put a fire on, up, along side
shut up and roll face at us
we will do it too or roll away
away
 

Old 09-01-2003, 12:59 AM   #106
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plugged with want
need an outlet
a cold one with ground
scratchy voiced, poised
stance with ready chuckle
for my mine
stepping off plane
there are sunflowers growing
against the terminal
we guess that is the sign
they meant to turn to
for the photos
all us beauty queens
and dapper clad poets
dark in drab pin stripe
kahki hacki
smack my fanny

just once do a thing
asked for, begged
pleaded, engraved
tatooed on all one knuckle
 

Old 09-02-2003, 02:15 PM   #107
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silly

I had stephen hawkins gawking
and gasping for air
He was so stunned by knowledge he fell from his chair

and here's one for the funnies
I wrapped Pharohs in bandages
and had them calling for their mummies

upon my arrival they called me a disciple
Drank of king James Cup
and Spat Verses from the bible


Made fun of teen Virgins just for the hell of it
Although since birth I've called myself celibate


I have the masses screaming for more
I'm so rich in word power
I make Bill gates feel poor


Had voices from every walk and Persuasion
Sayin how Amazin'
is that Rasin in the sun

So If anyone should come through and ask for my descrpition
Tell them I'm a black Queen who Walks like an eygyptian
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Old 09-03-2003, 12:46 PM   #108
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Sorry Affair

in opposite directions
we come
around the corner
and brush against each other
we turn without slowing
mutter sorry
and for a second
eat each other
with our eyes
before the building
comes between us
and the affair is over.
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Old 09-05-2003, 11:52 AM   #110
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sidewalk café
we dine al fresco
amid the noise and diesel.
we sip and
we are seen.
you blow kisses
to tanned and skin tight friends
words drip from your mouth
but I wash them down
unheard
as they melt
my ice cubes crack
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Old 09-12-2003, 02:58 PM   #111
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She was bred from dust of Africa,
blown by Spanish winds to Martinique,
levened with the blood of Bourbon France,
and when she said she shared
the blood of Josephine,
he couldn’t understand.
He knew no history.
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Old 09-12-2003, 05:01 PM   #112
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banished from the top
of the bottle
begging to wait to be
drunk by you
like backwash
from a shared bottle
of cheap wine

while you remember
the fresh clean taste
of your virgin's neck
sensual
open mouth
and smile
because you
were first
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Old 09-12-2003, 08:43 PM   #113
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Tengo un flaco
que me tiene loca
y quando me mira
me pongo nerviosa

Tengo un chulo
que me tiene fuego
y quando quierme
me pongo amo

Tengo un amor
que me tiene ceilo
y quando me toca
me pongo biscocho
 

Old 09-13-2003, 05:11 PM   #114
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Your wingtips tickle my clouds
and the sun shines
and the rain feels like a sprinkler
on a hot day.

Your flight makes meaning of me
and my winds have stopped
roaming the world for you
and we soar as you fly
on this beautiful day.
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Old 09-13-2003, 11:13 PM   #115
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unencumbered along the way
deaf boy Billy Joe learned to play
without the jeers and boos
and "put that guitar away"
Boy
ain't ya listening?

but he learned how to ignore
ignorance and abhor
intolerance

He never had to go to church
and hear the preacher roar
that he was a sinner
Yes, Lord!

and so he sat
on his gramma's front porch
pickin' out tunes that he'd never hear
but he could feel
and somehow that seemed
so right, so just,so real
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Old 09-14-2003, 11:22 AM   #116
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Sitting open
tears cupped in my palms
knowing truth
hurt
life dying
and not him
me
and still he works
to save me
 

Old 09-15-2003, 09:55 AM   #117
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Yes, I felt something when
your offline message appeared
a catch in my throat
somehow connecting my heart
with my toes
and further up
between
what my husband calls his

and yes, I want to see
is your web cam up
I mean, on, right now?
faceless brazen boy
with the body of a man
and lust enough
for ten

curiosity consumes
this cat that you have made
and spits out passion
coating my face and thoughts
of you in the early
still foggy oustide
morning


(for raven)
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Old 09-27-2003, 11:40 PM   #118
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faded grandeur

one
a celebration

twenty-one
a milestone

forty-one
a reminder

aged by the passing of
another
autumnal equinox
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Old 09-28-2003, 03:47 PM   #119
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stopper's lament

never before
this fast

never before
this far

elation dampened by
accomplishment's shadow
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Old 10-03-2003, 09:45 AM   #120
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neos sexy ribbons do so inspire

wrangle me in your red,
red ribbons and let me writhe
in the chokehold
of your suffering blue
tease me with the yellows
and greens
with which you paint my mind
delicious rainbows of lust
you inspire

tie me with the tangles of color
left over from the wash
of your palettes
and let me bathe
in the pools of your eyes
so you can watch as I
suffer with abandon
pulled into the whirlpool
of your mind
let me die with 3-D color
rushing over my head


********** love your Ribbons, Neo
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Old 10-03-2003, 06:42 PM   #121
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If I asked you
would you
tell me lies?

And if I begged you
would you
apologize

to me
and my indignity?
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Old 10-03-2003, 07:12 PM   #122
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you called me sobbing
you "couldn't do this anymore"
I knew what you meant
because I feel the same
except when you mean
this creative "relationship"
I mean
the fact that you don't know
you don't feel
you don't recognize
You're too passive for me
baby
you're not aggressive enough
your silence is screaming at me
and it's not saying anything
but it's telling me
I'm not worth it,
and you know what
you're not worth me
 

Old 10-03-2003, 11:30 PM   #123
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The soften lines of hardened sites.
And muffled barking dog.
The moistened grass and and lowered heights
All wrapp'd in walls of fog.

The leaves have turn'd to Autumn hue
But can't be seen to day.
There's nothing left for us to do
But sleep the night away.

Close by your side, I feel your heart
Beat within in your breast.
Held in your arms I'll do my part
To see your fears address'd.
 

Old 10-04-2003, 04:10 AM   #124
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seldom but special

in her house I chased
a mouse into a hole
that led to a wide blank
one void that could not be jumped
with brain or muscle or groin-a-fire

so we sat on our smolder
it sifted to the other side
the spirit side with brass buckles
paper matte vase,

it took all day for anything to happen
but here is not a place to talk or listen
so we sat back, chewed straws,
rented little cars and drove in circles

then there was sex, it was off the edge of the bed
we poured our little buns onto floor and down drain
we laughed at shit, literally.
free and stupid full of ourselves
our genitals and what ever is needed in this gap of humanity

the morning fell, not like anything, sorry
yes
the morning fell sorry
dew plus tears equal simple laying down
on a soft spot
next to a spoon lover

rocking all meridian
below eyebrows
painted inflight
by a confidant
of Sgt. Bunny
 

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one day
I will
raise
the
bar
and
take on
a mountain
and climb up
up until
there
is
no
up
only
descent
just to see
for myself
that
g
r
a
v
i
t
y
will
never
give up
pulling me back
to where I belong
and that the
sun and
stars
still
sit
up
there
laughing
at my folly
and my pointless
attempts to somehow
disguise myself
as their peer
and I will
come
back
with
one
dream
destroyed
but a million
new ones
already
born

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