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Old 12-31-2017, 04:39 PM   #1
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Bdsm Story Feedback Request

Hey Guys,

Requesting your feedback for my story series : The Wrong Choices. It is based on bondage and bdsm, and the characters are Indian. 3 chapters have been published so far, and there are 10 more to go. Please let me know your thoughts.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/m...ge=submissions

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Old 12-31-2017, 07:41 PM   #2
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A quick note about the content might help steer the right people your way. I would have looked, but I don't do BDSM, sorry.
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Old 01-02-2018, 04:05 AM   #3
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A quick note about the content might help steer the right people your way. I would have looked, but I don't do BDSM, sorry.
Thanks a lot. I have updates the post.
Also, need to change the story category as suggested by others.
Will move it to Non consent section soon.
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Old 01-02-2018, 03:46 PM   #4
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Someone please reply.
The stores have been moved to non consent category.

Really anxious for some feedback.
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Old 01-02-2018, 04:21 PM   #5
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The stores have been moved to non consent category.
It's been moved? It didn't start in that category?

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Old 01-02-2018, 05:10 PM   #6
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It's been moved? It didn't start in that board?
See Post #3. The OP changed the category.
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Old 01-02-2018, 05:53 PM   #7
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See Post #3. The OP changed the category.
Ah, yes. I missed that part.
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Old 01-02-2018, 05:56 PM   #8
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Just an FYI:

Even though the category says "Nonconsent/Reluctance" when one goes to your story page, when they click on a submission it says it's in BDSM.
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Old 01-02-2018, 06:58 PM   #9
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Even though the category says "Nonconsent/Reluctance" when one goes to your story page, when they click on a submission it says it's in BDSM.
Different data sets on the site have different update cycles - the story page should catch up in a day or two and everything should then be in synch.
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Different data sets on the site have different update cycles - the story page should catch up in a day or two and everything should then be in synch.
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Old 01-03-2018, 01:57 AM   #11
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Thanks a lot. More chapters on its way.
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Old 01-05-2018, 11:43 AM   #12
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Chapter 5 has been published :
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-wrong-choices-ch-05
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Old 01-08-2018, 01:57 AM   #13
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Chapter 6 has been published :
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-wrong-choices-ch-06

7 more chapters to go...
Happy Reading!!!
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