Old 11-30-2017, 01:40 AM   #1
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Lightbulb Virgin to submissive

I started writing about a conservative indian origin virgin girl who just turned 18 attending school in US.

The first story explores her crush on a guy and some masturbation.

I am wondering which direction should I take it next. One idea I had is the girl meets with a guy as part of a class project and as they chat candidly, he asks her to wear a more revealing dress.

After that she likes the attention and becomes a mild tease. Then a dominant guy starts being affected by her teasing and they develop a relationship.

My concern is, is it a good idea to loose virginity as a submissive?
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Old 11-30-2017, 02:57 AM   #2
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Take it where YOU want it to go. Writing by committee is never very clever.

Maybe take this request to Story Ideas. You might get more reader input there - on AH we're predominantly writers, and will just say write what you want.
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Old 11-30-2017, 03:00 AM   #3
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Take it where YOU want it to go. Writing by committee is never very clever.

Maybe take this request to Story Ideas. You might get more reader input there - on AH we're predominantly writers, and will just say write what you want.

Good advice. Thank you.
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