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Old 11-20-2017, 10:15 PM   #1
BiscuitHammer
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Post Looking for someone...

Not just to proof-read, but to give me an opinion about a story I was commissioned to write. It's dark, and more than a little violent. Just looking for another perspective before giving it to the person who requested it and also (potentially) publishing it on here.

Any takers?
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Old 11-20-2017, 11:40 PM   #2
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What elements does your story include as far as fetish, kink, sexual content, etc., and why do you consider it dark?
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Old 12-04-2017, 10:02 PM   #3
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REMINDER:

The Editorís Forum is for authors and editors to discuss issues related to editing stories. People are forgetting this. It's not a place for personal arguments, attacks, or discussions not related to editing stories.

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