College Girl Humiliates Her Rival

Ambrose99

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Carla is a student in college, she has a loving boyfriend, and a promising future.

Carla has brown hair, and is pretty.

She hopes to get into med school.

Her boyfriends name is Brady. Brady has been accepted to law school.

Carla has a roommate, Jade.

Jade and Carla have been frienemies all their college years. They have competed for grades, in volleyball, and for the attention of guys.

Carla is the team captain of the volleyball team.

Jade also hopes to apply to med school. Jade is a blonde

girl, with sexy eyes, a beautiful smile and an amazing body.

Things hit off on the right foot, as the two get along in the first few weeks.

Jade secretly hates Carla, because she sees Carla as an inferior obstacle in her way.

Jade is turned on by Brady, she wants him bad.

Jade starts her plan to seduce Brady.

Brady is attracted to Jade but he tries to not think of her..

Jade finally seduces him, as they begin an affair behind Carla's back.

They sleep in Jades Car, Carlas bed...nowhere is off limits.

Jade demands he stop sleeping with Carla, and that he stop being sweet to her.

Carla loses sleep over Brady's change in attitude

Jade manipulates the team/coaches against Carla, they make Jade the captain.

Carla leaves the team.

Jade sabotages Carla's school work, she throws away a research paper Carla has
stressed over...etc.

Carla loses the spot in med school, to Jade.

Jade is accepted to med school, and has Carla's man.

Jade confronts Carla; she puts her down, verbally humiliating her.

Brady shows up.

Jade announces she has took Carla's man..

Carla begs Brady to not leave her,

Jade and Brady start to make out, then make love in front of Carla.

Carla leaves.

Jade and Brady go on to complete their school, start their careers, and marry.
 
Carla & Jade start as lovers, so when Jade steals Brady, the betrayal is double.

And since I hate ending on betrayal, in part 2, Carla rejoins them in a poly relationship...
 
That's the fun of Story Ideas. There's no guarantee an author will pick up your idea and run with it. They may like part of what you said and then take the story into a totally different direction. You never know. Hell, some authors on Lit (frequently found in Author's Hangout) claim they will write a tailor-made custom story just for you...for a price. At Lit, you get what you pay for.
 
That's the fun of Story Ideas. There's no guarantee an author will pick up your idea and run with it. They may like part of what you said and then take the story into a totally different direction. You never know. Hell, some authors on Lit (frequently found in Author's Hangout) claim they will write a tailor-made custom story just for you...for a price. At Lit, you get what you pay for.

I'd like someone to write my ideas but...I am not paying real life money for it :/
 
Understandable. But that's why I say "you get what you pay for". When "paying" zero/free don't expect 100% custom tailored.
 
Silly rabbit. If you put two women in a Lit story, you can guarantee they are going to have a sexual relationship.

??? if it is my idea and I say no then no lol

Everything is not about lesbian sex...

Read the link I posted..
 
Once, I was reading a Lit story, and suddenly a gf materialized on my couch and we started making out; it was pretty hot.



As EquinoxRising has said, once you post an idea here, it is no longer yours; it belongs to the forum and writers are free to pick and choose the parts they like to create their own unique story. That's the entire point of this forum, to knock story ideas back and forth to create new and interesting takes on them

Really? I had no idea. I thought it served 2 purposes.

share a story idea for feedback on the persons story line

or

ask for a writer for a story idea
 
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