Old 11-04-2016, 11:00 PM   #26
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Hands tied pussy licked
Writhing no control cock near
Rope your wet freedom
Cool more authors join
The Haiku fun and games here
Welcome friend Gwanji

You like the Dom/Sub
Lifestyle as others do too
Here in Haiku thread

Feel free to post all
Your poet's mind just set free
So all can enjoy
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Old 11-05-2016, 12:02 AM   #27
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Or so I believe

A man of pure mind
The essence of pain and joy
Made one by the fates

The path she crosses
Road shared so much less lonely
One is two and two is one

The woman is rock
Foundation solid fluid
Miss is a concept

Mission to accept
Trust given trust taken
Freely willingly

Water gently flows
Pain shared is carried away
Serenity stays

Much death in the past
Sadness has left many scars
Pet a concept too

Solid back offered
Struck bent so much strength remains
Shields to protect her

Though both are so far
Life unites as it divides
Cares not our limits

Nature abhors void
Destiny is manifest
It is my belief

Universe rules us
Entropy is order too
Chaos prevails not

There was no reason
That is the very reason
They met I do say

Words said buttons pushed
Emotions hidden revealed
Not for faint of heart

Daring to believe
Faith can hurt as it can heal
Two way street it is

That is the idea
Two is one as one is two
That is the concept
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Old 11-05-2016, 01:38 AM   #28
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Writhing no control cock near
Rope your wet freedom
Jerking, struggling,
Teasing cock with the movement.
Pussy wet with need.
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Old 11-05-2016, 02:47 AM   #29
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Jerking, struggling,
Teasing cock with the movement.
Pussy wet with need.
Victim submitting
Welcoming it deep within
Cream wells from the depth

Pleasure rises loud
Thrusts are returned with much joy
Bliss between is shared
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Old 11-05-2016, 02:51 AM   #30
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Jerking, struggling,
Teasing cock with the movement.
Pussy wet with need.
Cock draws circles mouth
Searching cunt ready fluid
Toes grip dense air and waiting
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Old 11-05-2016, 03:46 AM   #31
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So very personal

Words flow fly fleeting
Emotions remain behind
Foundation standing

Heart in plenitude
Fulfilment seeks and do find
Swells with gratitude

Contact established
Rules of engagement not yet
Talk carefully speak

Want need desire trust
All felt expressed and returned
So much joy and bliss

Soul soars on the wings
Of hope to bolster courage
To dream of a life

Winds of change whistle
Through the branches of the mind
Renewal rebirth

Miss I talk to you
Open wide open to you
Miss I listen too
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Old 11-05-2016, 04:45 AM   #32
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Cock draws circles mouth
Searching cunt ready fluid
Toes grip dense air and waiting
Lips open softly
Cock hard and ready for thrust
Now it should be 5?
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Old 11-05-2016, 05:04 AM   #33
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Lips open softly
Cock hard and ready for thrust
Now it should be 5?
Sucking six holding
Cum for cunt later waiting
Fingers drenched your juice
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Old 11-05-2016, 07:51 AM   #34
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Sucking six holding
Cum for cunt later waiting
Fingers drenched your juice
Fingers clutching hold
Try to pull you close to me
Wave sounds from the sea.
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Old 11-05-2016, 08:08 AM   #35
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Naked skin against
the harshness of Harris Tweed
holding me in hug.
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Old 11-05-2016, 06:11 PM   #36
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Cool Forever after

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Naked skin against
the harshness of Harris Tweed
holding me in hug.
Head bent to smell her
Hand gives the softest caress
Shivers acceptance

She offers her throat
Her life for him to partake
The brief pain is naught

When he has drunk her
In softest bed there she lays
Reveling watching

His power revealed
As the two naked women
Undress his body

His gaze canít escape
His mind holds her in his thrall
Prey but so much more

He sits at her side
She is unable to move
His willing captive

His touch burns a path
Searing her every nerve
Her passion rises

She is his all his
He caresses her soft neck
Healing his own mark

Arches in response
As he cups her tender breast
Her nipple rises

Woman scent he breathes
So eager she is ready
But is she really

Her very soul reels
When he spreads her so gently
Cream flows as she moans

Eyes so very dark
Hold hers still living blue ones
Searching her deep soul

The question he asks
Will you be mine as they are
He must know before

To take her as his
She must submit willingly
Or she will perish

The five she takes in
Beauty eternal they have
Life a puny price

For the love of such
Male perfection incarnate
She submits and smiles

Her bare neck again
He bites for more than bliss now
Life given taken

At the gates of death
His open wrist at her lips
Greedily she drinks

Renewed life flows in
Her soul she gives in exchange
For the precious gift

She arches in pain
As maidenhead he does rip
In a single thrust

Pleasure so intense
Heat courses through cooling veins
Power her new blood

Pains of the living
Fading memory only
To be felt no more

Only joy remains
Perfect sexual release
Glorious orgasm

His seed she takes in
Cherishes its vibrancy
Mixed with her own cream

He holds her after
Taking her to the heavens
Her eyes are black too

With her new sisters
They are his children his wives
Forever lovers

A woman no more
Master father creator
Made her a vampire
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Old 11-05-2016, 07:30 PM   #37
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Very rich and well-written, Angel! I will try to maintain the motif!

Undead new life spent
Serving master feeding fed
Light avoided crypt home
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Old 11-06-2016, 12:44 AM   #38
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Very rich and well-written, Angel! I will try to maintain the motif!

Undead new life spent
Serving master feeding fed
Light avoided crypt home
Crimson is the life
Some feed off it as they must
They are living dead
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Old 11-06-2016, 01:43 AM   #39
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My blood her corset
Black save for my gift to her
Fuck me she commands
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Old 11-06-2016, 10:23 AM   #40
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My blood her corset
Black save for my gift to her
Fuck me she commands
Her lips wide I spread
Unnatural my hardness
Cream churn with delight

More more she orders
Take me deep hard and so good
Come in my wet cunt

Mistress' orders
Obey with alacrity
And so much delight

I so will fuck her
Eternity and beyond
She needs but to ask

A child of the night
As my creator commands
My cock is all hers
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Old 11-06-2016, 07:32 PM   #41
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Fragile blossom

Rock cracked to fine dust
Strength rendered so easily
Zephyr blows gently

Power was offered
Not taken lightly forsooth
Wielded so kindly

Dark to brightest light
Hope fanned blazed like inferno
Strong yet so fragile

Dust does remember
Memory a harsh mistress
Fear is the weakness

The tortured maple
Lost amidst silver birches
Weeps in shining light

Darkness of deep night
Truth revealed hidden no more
Patience the virtue
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Old 11-06-2016, 08:12 PM   #42
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Black save for my gift to her
Fuck me she commands
Lie back, be ready!
Your strong cock hard and erect.
Mounting astride, fucks.
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Old 11-06-2016, 08:21 PM   #43
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The tortured maple
Lost amidst silver birches
Weeps in shining light
A hand gently lifts
the dear lost tortured maple
Light showing the joy.
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Old 11-06-2016, 09:01 PM   #44
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A hand gently lifts
the dear lost tortured maple
Light showing the joy.
Fine dust into rock
Flowing river running dry
Light heals peace prevails
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Old 11-06-2016, 09:53 PM   #45
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Peregrine so high
Death defying dive it did
And then soars higher

Gaia mother all
Plenitude her legacy
Gaia life giver

Bosom soft and warm
Safety acceptance and peace
All is well again
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Old 11-06-2016, 11:44 PM   #46
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What is Haiku

I checked out other Haiku threads.

One in particular I found quite ridiculous.
First, they argued about what is Haiku, and played like us, then someone gave a course in Haiku:
(Of course, it's the LAST post. Who wants to play there?)

There are a few rules that are often ignored by people teaching others to write haiku.
Haiku must:
-express only a single moment in nature
-contain at least one seasonal word
-avoid anthropomorphism
-avoid value judgment or interpretation of the scene

Fuck that!
I'll continue to do free poetry in Haiku form.
I like the discipline, but also the freedom of expression.
I love our efforts here, thank you very much.
To hell with the purists.
Lets keep up the good work people!

A vampire motif may not true Haiku, but it's great fun anyway, so is a XXX one.
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Old 11-06-2016, 11:57 PM   #47
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Blood source of all life
Blood end of all life also
Rebirth ecstasy

As she sucked her dry
She gave the best orgasm
And the last one too

Take that damn purist
We take all the fun there is
Then we make some more

What say you people
If American Sentence
So be it I say

Sorry dearest Silk
I'm not sophisticated
I like to have fun

From what I see here
So do you lovely lady
Keep laughing with us
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Old 11-07-2016, 12:19 AM   #48
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Raid the dew for wet
Leaves, crunchy bed for breakfast
Your clit my sunrise
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Old 11-07-2016, 12:49 AM   #49
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Raid the dew for wet
Leaves, crunchy bed for breakfast
Your clit my sunrise
Cool! You have a little of everything in there.

Sunset to sunrise
Your moon I burrow into
You order more lube
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Autumn sunrise frames your ass
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