Old 09-22-2002, 09:57 PM   #51
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Re: Is there an echo in this thread, SP?

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you're kinda repetative. lol.

And lauren much as I adore you, pus--no matter how multiwhatever it is--is just gross. And come to think of it, multi pus is mega gross (sorry for the valley girl-type speak--I spend too much time around adolescents).

Angeline thinks pus is gross! See, I'm not the only pus hater.

Lauren had a box
it was a surprise
she opened it wide
and shocked my eyes
out oozed pus
strangely erotic
and ewwww
grossly exotic

See! You shouldn't use pus in a poem! lol
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Old 09-22-2002, 09:58 PM   #52
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Re: reminder

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I often enter threads at the end and so miss the point, purpose or challenge. Then I reply with posts that are far from on the point.
This tread is for posting a poem live into the Literotica Forum reply window.
No cut and paste, no returning to edit.
Once it's there, it is there.
good luck,
pray for peace

some say it depends on the context.
I say in the context of LH and her multilinguisticasticity,
pus is just fine
sp, sorry that pus is oozing all over your thread.
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Old 09-22-2002, 10:21 PM   #53
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Yes, let's be a little more decorous

we can talk about snot. snot as bad as pus, lol. or if we really want to high tone it sweat--i think there's a hierarchy in all this. For examples, scabs are not as bad as lice, but worse than dandruff, right?

I think there's a poem in all this, but I'll be damned if I'm going to write it.
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Old 09-22-2002, 10:32 PM   #54
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Re: Yes, let's be a little more decorous

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we can talk about snot. snot as bad as pus, lol. or if we really want to high tone it sweat--i think there's a hierarchy in all this. For examples, scabs are not as bad as lice, but worse than dandruff, right?

I think there's a poem in all this, but I'll be damned if I'm going to write it.

Snot, Snot, Snot, Snot
Dripping out my nose!
Fungus among us
sprouting from my toes!

Dingleberries and crabs
hanging from my ass!
Eatin' beans and salsa
pootin' lots of gas!

Somebody else want to pick it up from here?


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Old 09-22-2002, 10:33 PM   #55
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Re: Yes, let's be a little more decorous

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we can talk about snot. snot as bad as pus, lol. or if we really want to high tone it sweat--i think there's a hierarchy in all this. For examples, scabs are not as bad as lice, but worse than dandruff, right?

I think there's a poem in all this, but I'll be damned if I'm going to write it.
Like it or not
We all got snot
If infection got us
Then we all ooze pus
Naughty or nice
We can still get lice
But if it flakes right off
Then ya have dandruff
And if ya don't treat crabs...
Them scratches become scabs...
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Old 09-22-2002, 10:52 PM   #56
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Re: Re: Yes, let's be a little more decorous

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Snot, Snot, Snot, Snot
Dripping out my nose!
Fungus among us
sprouting from my toes!

Dingleberries and crabs
hanging from my ass!
Eatin' beans and salsa
pootin' lots of gas!

Somebody else want to pick it up from here?


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OH, that's it! I'm never ever reading another Rybka post again! lol
(what's a dingleberry? is it suppose to hang from your ass? how do I know if I have one?)
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Old 09-22-2002, 10:54 PM   #57
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OH, that's it! I'm never ever reading another Rybka post again! lol
(what's a dingleberry? is it suppose to hang from your ass? how do I know if I have one?)
*laughing so hard her sides hurt*
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Old 09-22-2002, 10:55 PM   #58
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Re: Yes, let's be a little more decorous

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we can talk about snot. snot as bad as pus, lol. or if we really want to high tone it sweat--i think there's a hierarchy in all this. For examples, scabs are not as bad as lice, but worse than dandruff, right?

I think there's a poem in all this, but I'll be damned if I'm going to write it.
and no maggots in a poem. or eyeballs. eyes are ok but not with balls. and don't use "stink" in a poem. or crusty. lol I have a long list of "Wicked Eve thinks these are icky" words.
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Old 09-22-2002, 11:00 PM   #59
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*whispers to Eve*

psssssst! don't give Fishie anymore ammunition to gross ya out with!
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Old 09-22-2002, 11:03 PM   #60
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Re: Dingleberries

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OH, that's it! I'm never ever reading another Rybka post again! lol
(what's a dingleberry? is it suppose to hang from your ass? how do I know if I have one?)
See: A SPACE - Haiku

Dinbleberries are the little pieces of shit that stick to the hairs around your ass!

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Old 09-22-2002, 11:07 PM   #61
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yup

that's what I thought they were alright....
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Old 09-22-2002, 11:08 PM   #62
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as a polite usher in sunday church

now, could we kindly return to our seats and write poetry live?
Or perhaps you would enjoy doing it in front of a mirror, or in front of total strangers or close friends.
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Old 09-22-2002, 11:12 PM   #63
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Re: as a polite usher in sunday church

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now, could we kindly return to our seats and write poetry live?
Or perhaps you would enjoy doing it in front of a mirror, or in front of total strangers or close friends.
Doin' it yes...in front of close friends no....



in front of a mirror...... maaaaaaybe
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Old 09-22-2002, 11:18 PM   #64
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now, could we kindly return to our seats and write poetry live?
Or perhaps you would enjoy doing it in front of a mirror, or in front of total strangers or close friends.
"Oh the monkey wrapped his tail around the flagpole,
just to watch the hair grow, around. . ."


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Old 09-22-2002, 11:20 PM   #65
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"Oh the monkey wrapped his tail around the flagpole,
just to watch the hair grow, around. . ."


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Old 09-22-2002, 11:46 PM   #66
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Wink I laughed, I cried, I just kissed my 10¢ goodbye...

And trust me, this is as live as it gets...
Did you say edit? Because of the links?
All in this window? Throw down your bets
if I lied, I'll lose, and a round of drinks

Is on me. If you lose, you can start
by forgeting the topic, loosen the rules,
People wrote pus, even shit, but not fart.
Dingleberries, those are prized jewels?

No, I'm just kidding, I know what they are.
I can't believe the things said in this thread
I could crown some, or spread feathers and tar
on those sick people who should be in bed

Since it's obvious they've been up for too long
and continue to write in this hour of the night.
Live, from New York, ... this is totally wrong
it's Monday, in fact, and I'm not at all bright.
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Old 09-22-2002, 11:48 PM   #67
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Exclamation Arg!!!!

The above is mine... I hate timing out. =(
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The above is mine... I hate timing out. =(
Hey that wasn't bad at all! I didn't know you wrote poetry!
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Old 09-23-2002, 12:27 AM   #69
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Laughing reallly hard here

i think this belongs on another thread but the word for the day is:

instigator "to goad or urge forward "

"It must be erotic. Need not be disgusting, but what the hell, why not if that is your cup of tea or coffee. "

Gosh, who said that?

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Re: Laughing reallly hard here

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i think this belongs on another thread but the word for the day is:

instigator "to goad or urge forward "

"It must be erotic. Need not be disgusting, but what the hell, why not if that is your cup of tea or coffee. "

Gosh, who said that?

huh? I thought this was a Poetry forum? and the thread says writing live....hmmmmmmmmm....didn't know it was supposed to be erotic only. guess I better go, cuz I don't write erotic stuff all the time.
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Old 09-23-2002, 12:55 AM   #71
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Re: Unedited...

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I came to cum, and came to see
The thread you started here.
The challenge thrown, I say "mercée"
my skills have none to fear.

No changes will I need to make
my verse comes genuine
The rules you set, I will not brake
I hope I get to win

the prize you tout. I'd like to know,
I'm burning to find out
If what I write should be a show,
a scene to talk about?

Or, like these other poets, who,
while writing towards their prize
wrote buzzing lines I have to 'shoo'
away from stinging eyes.

They are too sweet, to vapid, oh,
My condescending tone!
Please do excuse, my manner's low,
which I do not condone.

Instead of typing you a book,
I'd rather take is slow.
For I have other poems, look,
and make my ego grow.
hey this is good for being written on the spot Sweetie!
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Old 09-23-2002, 12:58 AM   #72
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reminder and breathless

it is for poems
not chat
and with oxygen not bred
of puffy wuffy
phoophoo and doodoo

however love may be mentioned
in lines singing or tearing
then wraped up with a wap
BIG OL WAP
in the night when expected
people
come home

WAP
WAP
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Old 09-23-2002, 01:08 AM   #73
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my big boney nose

it is pretty big
but slender and curvaxious
narrow with great ability
at smelling
finding lost objects
and just cool thing
to hang around with

it is as old as the rest
of it's universe
the fingers
the toes
that slick crease
the almost defunct dimples

the smile below
fades and tunes back again
not cable or dish can rescue
haplessness

my father fiddled with the
knobs as the rest of the
family redifined trust
and technology
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Old 09-23-2002, 01:09 AM   #74
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Surrogate

computer screen filled with
faceless cocks
fantastic fetishes
vying for her attention
and what they think
is her body
her perfect chocolate kissed
nipples and blushing pussy

computer screen filled with
her mind
fantastic fibs
plying them with attention
and what they think
is her life
her perfect chocolate kissed
nipples and blushing pussy
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Old 09-23-2002, 01:22 AM   #75
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Re: Re: Dingleberries

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See: A SPACE - Haiku

Dinbleberries are the little pieces of shit that stick to the hairs around your ass!

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I just have to answer this, then I'll get back to the business of the thread.
Rbyka, you're so totally cool! lol I don't even think I would have had the balls to be that blunt! tee hee hee hee hee

Okay, sp. I apologize for being one of the thread hijackers. How can I ever make this up to you? Just name it? If it's naughty, PM me. I'll get suzi and angeline to help out. Oh yeah, and that chick Lauren with the pus.
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