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Mille Regretz

Hi every one.
This is the kind of poem that I avoid submitting in the main submission page, cause for one thing the dedication and the link included in the dedication of the poem is in my mind an integral part of the poem itself. But would Literotica allow me to publish it with such a link?
Any comments, suggestions, criticism are welcome.


EDELTRAUD ==> DISMANTLING BIG TIME

(to Edeltraud with Mille Regretz)
MILLE REGRETZ

No colour empirical,
still, plenty of colour,
discretion satirical,
the best part of valor.

No fucking reciprocal,
still, plenty of fucking,
in fashion untypical
the issue I'm ducking.

On souls incorporeal,
such as we became,
no demon primordial
could put any blame.

In poetry's poverty,
depicting sheer pain,
it would be a novelty
to love you again!

And share Josquin's penitence,
on my guitar's frets,
if that would make any sense
for Mille Regretz.
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