Mystery/Thriller - missing wife/transformation/detective

I would like to commission a story to be published on literotica. Any literotica writers who are browsing and interested, please PM me...open to negotiations. I can paypal $100, 50% upfront and 50% after story completion. It's a pure fantasy fetish that I think many other literotica forumers also may enjoy.

Story Length: min 4 literotica pages

Story and Plot Set Up: A mystery thriller. A couple - husband and wife - travel abroad, and the wife ends up missing. After a year, police, family, and friends give up the search, but the husband persists, and stumbles upon a clue that points to a nefarious organization that dabbles in drugs and prostitution. The wife is transformed physically (e.g. boob job, hair color change) and mentally (e.g. new name) to embrace being a prostitute for the organization. The husband hires a private eye (name Poirot, for example ) to investigate further.....and you have creative license to come up with the rest!

Preference: It would be nice to have the story primarily from the husband and the private eye's perspective, and proceed as things get unveiled bit by bit (think in terms of a thriller or detective movie where things are gradually revealed). Prefer the narrative to focus on the unveiling and investigation, the anticipation and discovery, the before vs. after contrast in the transformation of the wife as opposed to excessively focusing on sex act narratives (e.g. description of a blow job is good but should be a plot device rather than a focal point). Wife should be between mid twenties to mid thirties (always sticking to the legal age requirements!)

*** Some have asked me, why not write myself? Well, I answer with a movie analogy: my enjoying a good mystery movie and willing to pay a movie ticket to see it doesn't make me the best candidate to be the movie's director or screen writer. There are many more talented writers out here!

Please PM me if there is interest, and we can talk!

Cheers!

Ok, ladies and gents, this speculation over what constitutes as an ad is really making a mountain out of a molehill. It's really SIMPLE actually: Anyone who sees this thread is WELCOME to pick up this story idea as written on the posting and develop a literotica story about it for the pubilc.

Now, if one of them desires extra incentive and is willing to further collaborate with me on ideas, then he or she PM me and I'm happy to compensate on the extra effort, as I believe in proper compensation for taking the time to put out GOOD WORK that may involve some more specifications. I have ZERO intentions of trying to profit from this effort. I have been very clear up front that, regardless of the degree of collaboration, the final story is designed for publication to the PUBLIC on literotica.

Just trying to develop a good, juicy mystery thriller for eventual posting to the literotica pubilc.

Hello,

Just curious: what exactly is the fetish? Is it seeing the wife transformed? What exactly about this storyline gets you interested?

btw, off topic, but I don't see any problems with threads like these. In fact, there should be more threads like these, not because of the alleged money offer, but because it's an actual detailed story plot. This forum section is for developing ideas for new stories.

have a great day

Yes, it's an erotic fetish. I think good erotic fiction does not need to always involve 10 pages describing never ending sex acts; rather, it is more titulating to see the unveiling and establishment of a before vs. after effect.

It's the mystery + the unveiling + the realization of a transformation that makes things very interesting. Change, especially one that is unconventional and drastic, is what makes things interesting and exciting!

The creation and destruction of an identity is a very erotic theme in my opinion...can an identity (the wife's in this instance) change be forced upon but become inevitably embraced? One example can be a person compartmentalizing his/her former identity and identifying him/herself presently as someone else in order to preserve sanity (given the extenuating circumstances).

Two of my favorite erotica and bdsm authors are Charles Arnold and Gordon Kerr. Leaving some taboo topics in their novels aside, what makes the narrative in their books so powerful is not just the sex acts (there are plenty of those), but above all the main character's identity transformation, often from something vanilla into something very different - a new identity molded according to a more dominant figure's will, and one that becomes reluctantly but inevitably embraced.

HeyAll said:

Hello,

Just curious: what exactly is the fetish? Is it seeing the wife transformed? What exactly about this storyline gets you interested?

btw, off topic, but I don't see any problems with threads like these. In fact, there should be more threads like these, not because of the alleged money offer, but because it's an actual detailed story plot. This forum section is for developing ideas for new stories.

have a great day

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I agree.

Those types of stories are very erotic. One of my all-time favorite stories here had a similar theme with an office employee, but it was taken down by the author unfortunately.

Anyway, when I first read the story idea, I immediately thought of that movie Frantic, directed by Roman Polanski. Great movie.

OK, so the transformation of the wife is the fetish. Is it the *process* of transformation? Or would it be just as good to miss the process and see the before and after?

Have you watched the TV series DollHouse? It's a show based around a company (The DollHouse) that has worked out how to upload personalities and skills into people. They use "willing" subjects who sign-on for five years, at the end of which they are supposed to get their old personality back. But there are always sinister overtones to the DollHouse; they are not pure good guys or bad guys.

This could easily be written as a DollHouse fan-fiction. The mind-wipe/upload technology falls into the wrong hands, the bad guys use the tech to turn nice wives into willing sex partners for sale (not just prostitutes, they are fully mentally transformed to be the buyer's perfect partner). Somehow the husband learns of the technology and tracks down the DollHouse (the "good" guys, not the evil ones). For a price, they transform one of the dolls (Echo, of course) into a super-detective to track down the wife. Echo herself gets captured, excitement and action ensues, but of course the wife is saved. But will she remember her husband? Can they restore her personality? Does she even want to?