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Old 04-07-2014, 03:39 PM   #1
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Breaking the fourth/fifth wall

Has anyone tried that so far? I'm mulling it over in a new story. I've quoted the relevant part here. Would the site have any issues with such a cheeky jibe?

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<description of something embarrassingly sexual>

"For my peace of mind, please tell me you were above eighteen when that happened."

"Of course I was," replied Maura. "How else could we be part of a Literotica story?"

"Good point," agreed Heather with a nod.
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Old 04-07-2014, 03:48 PM   #2
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I doubt it.

Laurel has a pretty good sense of humor.
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Old 04-07-2014, 05:18 PM   #3
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Yes, I've done that from time to time. Just another technique in the quiver.
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Old 04-07-2014, 05:28 PM   #4
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I like it!
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Old 04-07-2014, 05:35 PM   #5
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Yes, I've done that from time to time. Just another technique in the quiver.
The Oliver Queen of writing.
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Old 04-07-2014, 05:46 PM   #6
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The Oliver Queen of writing.
The boxing glove one is still the best.
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Old 04-07-2014, 05:50 PM   #7
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The boxing glove one is still the best.
Classic DC Cheese!
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Old 04-07-2014, 05:52 PM   #8
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I wrote a story in a similar vein: Six Characters in Search of Erotica.
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Old 04-07-2014, 05:54 PM   #9
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I mentioned a character reading those "sick incest stories on literotica" in one.

I've also used, "What do you think this is, some cheesy porn story on one of those free sites?"
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