Rivalry

I'm looking for someone who can write a story for me. it's about me and my girlfriend and a couple more. there's a kind of rivalry and hatred between us. to tell us about the situation I am and the other guy friends since long. we have raced about everything since we were kids. Now we are 25 years old. the thing is that he is big, really big down there and I only normal.

our girlfriends are both 24 years old and also friends since long. the thing is that they both ran into my friend but he chose the other girl. the last thing right now about us is that the second girlfriend sometimes feels like she does not like particularly good on me.

i want the text to be about us, maybe a party that gets out of hand and that our rivalry grows into a competition between the pairs. perhaps in several races where losing couple humiliated and exploited in every way possible. boy girl, girl girl and guy guy.

of course you can get more details about the looks of us. I want that text to be about us. In conclusion, an important thing. I and my girlfriend are going to lose.

Please let me encourage you to write this yourself. You know the story better than anyone. Don't worry that you're not a 'writer'. Just write it. Don't even try to make it a 'story'. Have you ever kept a blog or journal or diary? Just write this as if it happened to you -- what you saw and said and heard and felt.

Write a series of diary entries, with dates and places. That forms your plot. Read what you wrote, and fill-in details. That's the 'sculpture' approach to writing, where you start with a framework and slap clay on it till you have a mostly-finished piece. Polish it up, and you're done! Maybe submit it to an editor for suggestions.

There are ten million stories in the Naked City. Yours could be one of them. Have fun!

Hypoxia said:

Please let me encourage you to write this yourself. You know the story better than anyone. Don't worry that you're not a 'writer'. Just write it. Don't even try to make it a 'story'. Have you ever kept a blog or journal or diary? Just write this as if it happened to you -- what you saw and said and heard and felt.

Write a series of diary entries, with dates and places. That forms your plot. Read what you wrote, and fill-in details. That's the 'sculpture' approach to writing, where you start with a framework and slap clay on it till you have a mostly-finished piece. Polish it up, and you're done! Maybe submit it to an editor for suggestions.

There are ten million stories in the Naked City. Yours could be one of them. Have fun!

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what hypoxia said...

But My feeling is that other can do it better

tesla87 said:

But My feeling is that other can do it better

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Define 'better'.



Look, I know I'm no fucking Pulitzer winner nor NYT Bestseller lister. I'm a former tech writer and blogger who dabbles in smut. Many writers here on LIT are light-years ahead of me in crafting fiction. Big fucking deal. I get to write my own stories my own way, with all their weaknesses and idiosyncrasies. I like to think my fiction writing is improving. Editing suggestions help. Practice helps.

Generally, the more one writes, the better one gets. So write your story. Then rewrite it. Then pass it to a volunteer editor. Then post it, and write another. Continue until you reach perfection, or till the heat-death of the universe, whichever occurs first. Have fun!

While one are better storytellers, others have dirtier minds, and some can turn a phrase better, none can write MY fantasy. The reason being if someone else wrote it wouldn't be my fantasy. Write it yourself and it's yours...someone else writes it then not yours.