Hi everyone.
Thanks to everyone that took to time to read this story.
It's an odd duck for sure. Several of you liked it enough to "favorite" it, but the public comments have been scathing. The score stands sub 2.5; however, it is my most widely read submission with more than 28000 views. A real mixed response.
I had intended this to be a highly explicit humorous story in "open texture" allowing the reader to fill in the blank spaces with his/her imagination. Repetition was used for humor and the dialogue was similar to script writing for a fast read.
So, what did you like and what did you not like? Please be specific and give examples.
Thanks to everyone that took to time to read this story.
It's an odd duck for sure. Several of you liked it enough to "favorite" it, but the public comments have been scathing. The score stands sub 2.5; however, it is my most widely read submission with more than 28000 views. A real mixed response.
I had intended this to be a highly explicit humorous story in "open texture" allowing the reader to fill in the blank spaces with his/her imagination. Repetition was used for humor and the dialogue was similar to script writing for a fast read.
So, what did you like and what did you not like? Please be specific and give examples.