WendallBlaise
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Hello, I'm looking for some feedback on this story. I have a few stories published now, and many more in progress, but am looking to get more connected. Any feedback would be great: general editing, theme or story structure, even armchair psychology is welcome and appreciated.
This story started from a writing prompt on submissive oral fetishes. Not sure I really grasp the sub/dom thing yet.
Thanks for reading.
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This story started from a writing prompt on submissive oral fetishes. Not sure I really grasp the sub/dom thing yet.
Thanks for reading.
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