voluptuary_manque
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Oh yes it's intended to be that way, this is the first site like this I've joined so I'm a little apprehensive about giving away too much information.
The story started out as a little teaser until my main one intended to be my debut was finished, but I lost that story in an unfortunate incident.
Anyway the series will definitely have two chapters with a spin off already in the mix.
The actual story itself is about a special day int he Nymph calendar, where the Queen of the Nymphs publicly conceives the next queen by way of breeding with a human, humans of course back then were neanderthals, it details the preparation for the ceremony, which includes having sex with a stone avatar of a God, the actual ritual of breeding and a few after celebrations.
I've yet to get a professional opinion on the actual story itself, but the friends of mine who have read have given it rave reviews.
Make sure that you have someone edit out the little errors and typos that you don't see yourself. Such things can get all sorts of nasty commentary, especially from those who don't have the intestinal fortitude to write something themselves.