CookingDom
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I have a short story that I've submitted but had it rejected as its not long enough. I've gone back to it a few times to try and edit it but I feel that its exactly the right length, given the context of it.
Any ideas/suggestions much appreciated
While you were sleeping...
........waking up next to you watching you sleeping... Running his big fingers over your body so softly while you sleep, stopping each time you stirred so as not to wake you. Slowly, carefully making you move around so your nipples and thighs were away from the covers... Running his fingertips across your cheeks one moving between them ever so slowly parting them. You stir once more, he stops, you curl your knees to your chest and push your back into his chest and pull his big strong arm around you, moaning in your sleepy state 'morning' as you drift back to sleep. After a while his hand moves lower, moving your left cheek as his now hard cock nestles between them, the tip now rests against your pussy as his finger gently parts your lips
he feels the warmth as he slowly, SLOWLY rocks back and forth.
You murmur once more, the game is up, he's been rumbled.
It's ok you are just dreaming
He'd love to know what you're dreaming
he pushes forward as the head of his cock, now wet from you and him presses against your clit. His finger tips circle the top half of your clit as his cock caresses under and each side.
he slows down, he almost stops, he never stops as your lips part easily and envelop the head, always careful not to wake you, always touching nothing but the right spot.
Your back arches, pressing into him as his other arm rests under you, gripping you with his hand flat on your chest. He holds you as your orgasm takes over you, your head thrown back as you shake against him, flooding his cock and the bed as your 'dream' takes you there.
Perfectly still, waiting for your body to calm and relax before achingly slowly pulling himself away from you.
Rolling onto his back reaching down running his fingers over his softening, drenched, cock. Content at not waking you as he drifts off to sleep.
You wake and reach back for his hand but find his wet cock, confused as you feel the cold wetness underneath your ass as you slowly stir and wake up. Instinctively rolling over to wrap a leg over him as you always do.
Eyes wide you look down at his cock, your fingers instinctively go to your pussy to feel your wetness. 'What the fuck happened in my sleep??' you think to yourself.
'Was it a dream, did he just take me?' Easing a finger inside you to feel for the all too familiar slickness of his seed, you find none.
You conclude it was a dream as you nestle your face into his shoulder, softly taking his fingers to kiss them you realize it was no dream. As you gently suck on his fingertips the truth dawns on you.
You smile
'you're a bad man Sir, a bad man.....'
Any ideas/suggestions much appreciated
While you were sleeping...
........waking up next to you watching you sleeping... Running his big fingers over your body so softly while you sleep, stopping each time you stirred so as not to wake you. Slowly, carefully making you move around so your nipples and thighs were away from the covers... Running his fingertips across your cheeks one moving between them ever so slowly parting them. You stir once more, he stops, you curl your knees to your chest and push your back into his chest and pull his big strong arm around you, moaning in your sleepy state 'morning' as you drift back to sleep. After a while his hand moves lower, moving your left cheek as his now hard cock nestles between them, the tip now rests against your pussy as his finger gently parts your lips
he feels the warmth as he slowly, SLOWLY rocks back and forth.
You murmur once more, the game is up, he's been rumbled.
It's ok you are just dreaming
He'd love to know what you're dreaming
he pushes forward as the head of his cock, now wet from you and him presses against your clit. His finger tips circle the top half of your clit as his cock caresses under and each side.
he slows down, he almost stops, he never stops as your lips part easily and envelop the head, always careful not to wake you, always touching nothing but the right spot.
Your back arches, pressing into him as his other arm rests under you, gripping you with his hand flat on your chest. He holds you as your orgasm takes over you, your head thrown back as you shake against him, flooding his cock and the bed as your 'dream' takes you there.
Perfectly still, waiting for your body to calm and relax before achingly slowly pulling himself away from you.
Rolling onto his back reaching down running his fingers over his softening, drenched, cock. Content at not waking you as he drifts off to sleep.
You wake and reach back for his hand but find his wet cock, confused as you feel the cold wetness underneath your ass as you slowly stir and wake up. Instinctively rolling over to wrap a leg over him as you always do.
Eyes wide you look down at his cock, your fingers instinctively go to your pussy to feel your wetness. 'What the fuck happened in my sleep??' you think to yourself.
'Was it a dream, did he just take me?' Easing a finger inside you to feel for the all too familiar slickness of his seed, you find none.
You conclude it was a dream as you nestle your face into his shoulder, softly taking his fingers to kiss them you realize it was no dream. As you gently suck on his fingertips the truth dawns on you.
You smile
'you're a bad man Sir, a bad man.....'