yelps and the blush deepens, although it's accompanied by a mischievous grin
I try...and you're amazing too you know...everyone here is...damn...it's as inspiring as it is intimidating sometimes!
Total hit Luna!
This is definitely gonna make for a really interesting read, we have a great kick off
Okay Beca and Nina, you're both up. Beca, you can sit it out if you like or write the dream post, Tammy can't wake up too soon unfortunately; it would just mess up the thread reality too much.
Sixxy, whenever you can darl!
And I'm going into a comatose state of collapse because my dear Sir Leo has officially exhausted me, night ladies!
I am glad.
Night Minxy! Glad to see you've survived the night.
I am glad.
Night Minxy! Glad to see you've survived the night.
Awesome post Nina!
I have one little nitpick on sentence structure but other than that, it's perfect!
That. Two different people speaking means two different paragraphs otherwise it just becomes a little trickier to read.
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Posted!
Now tell me you love me
Oh and I've added the NPCs to the first post along with what they're afflicted with, to make it easy for our staff!
Gotcha... there are also a few missed capitalizations, a missed comma and i have to separate another paragraph so you can tell who's talking about whom... lol..
thanks much!
bunnies and gnomes.... what has the asylum come to these days>!>!>!?
sitting drunk outside a club and this guy was wearing these loose, shiny leather pants and he was fucking hot, with chains hanging off him....and I couldn't help it. I ran my hand over his leg and his shiny pants!
