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Old 05-21-2017, 03:09 PM   #51
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Father is watching
Old fears, new tears...but steady.
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Old 05-21-2017, 05:44 PM   #52
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Daddy watches
begging . . .


She submits,
knowing that
within his strength
she will find safety
and unconditional love.

He dominates
knowing
full well
that
she is his weakness . . .
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Old 05-22-2017, 07:40 AM   #53
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Old fears, new tears...but steady.
His love is enough.


Caressing your cheek

Looking long into your eyes

And seals with a kiss
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Old 05-31-2017, 04:13 PM   #54
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Tested. And pensive
One kindness, I'll do today
Remembering joy.
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Old 06-06-2017, 11:46 AM   #56
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Old 06-11-2017, 07:50 PM   #57
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Victoria skies
Reach 'round the globe to my luv
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Old 06-12-2017, 03:27 AM   #58
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he spoke, she quiver'd
her pulse racing in response
submitting her all
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Old 06-18-2017, 04:37 PM   #59
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Happy Father's Day
loving, attentive and more
Be proud, dear daddy.

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Old 06-19-2017, 06:49 PM   #60
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Old 06-19-2017, 06:58 PM   #61
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Testor tester tested testee testes testosterone?

All of those "T's" and not one Tit?

Two tiny tits tell tails that test the troubled times thus tempting tattle tails to thrust tears trickling to the terris Tiny Tim.

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Find our true short stories...Click Here--> https://www.literotica.com/stories/m...ge=submissions

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Some stories are short and contain two or more little chapters.

Book #1 Living Our Fantasies---------- Book #2 Please Hold My Titties.
Book #3 The Gogenfart Farm------------- Book #4 Ms. Dollie's Random Stories
Book #5 People Watching---------------Book #6 Mr. Joe Whuzzit
Book #7 Ms.Dollie’s Living Fantasies-------Book #8 TENTS, TRAILERS, TITS, CONDOS, AND CUNTS
Book #9 TiTs and TAXIS--------------------Book #10 PUSSY, PECKERS, and PIZZA
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Old 06-19-2017, 07:04 PM   #62
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Testor tester tested testee testes testosterone?

All of those "T's" and not one Tit?

Two tiny tits tell tails that test the troubled times thus tempting tattle tails to thrust tears trickling to the terris Tiny Tim.

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Sometimes its the one thing that is left unsaid which may in fact be the focus.
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Old 06-19-2017, 07:09 PM   #63
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Female titties are always in focus.(.)(.)
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Find our true short stories...Click Here--> https://www.literotica.com/stories/m...ge=submissions

--184 stories done Keep in mind I'm a Pervert, not an Author, and TRUE STORIES are often boring.
Some stories are short and contain two or more little chapters.

Book #1 Living Our Fantasies---------- Book #2 Please Hold My Titties.
Book #3 The Gogenfart Farm------------- Book #4 Ms. Dollie's Random Stories
Book #5 People Watching---------------Book #6 Mr. Joe Whuzzit
Book #7 Ms.Dollie’s Living Fantasies-------Book #8 TENTS, TRAILERS, TITS, CONDOS, AND CUNTS
Book #9 TiTs and TAXIS--------------------Book #10 PUSSY, PECKERS, and PIZZA
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Old 06-21-2017, 12:49 AM   #64
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Old 06-21-2017, 12:51 AM   #65
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Old 06-21-2017, 02:01 AM   #66
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Eagle on the shore
Iconic bird~ strength and love.
I will fly with you.

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Old 07-03-2017, 11:51 AM   #67
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Old 07-05-2017, 01:08 AM   #68
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My passions burn hot

An inferno now far gone

Out of my control



Truth or destruction

I'll burn the goddam place down

Surely damn us both



The oceans will boil

With the rage filling my heart

I cannot stop it



I hate what's become

Of our love twas once so sweet

Now changed forever
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Old 07-05-2017, 04:13 AM   #69
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I cry for you, luv

Please hear my voice pleading now

Reaching through your pain


An ember our love

Still glows in our hearts, searing

Binding us as one


Truth or destruction?

My pain. Your pain. Multiplies.

Hold tight in this storm.


If your faith in us

Wavers from my foolishness

Hold fast the anchor.


When I was lost luv

My compass. My guide. My friend.

Take a bearing now.


I am still here luv.

No. I am not leaving you.

Not today. Not ever.
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Old 07-09-2017, 01:20 AM   #70
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Triggers, my darling...
Turquoise bugs and bear skin rugs...
Hold my hand. Breathe deep.

The power should fade
as we travel round the sun
...and then - surprised again.

Lean on me, my luv
Mark the compass, sail with me.
Adventures await.
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Old 07-15-2017, 12:30 PM   #71
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A small lake cabin
Causes distress, pain, not joy.
A blind spot, I see.

Book club, drinks and death
Obscure my path to you luv
My words cut, confuse.

Perspective is strange
I ache to see your view luv
Straining, I but glimpse.

This raw exposed nerve
Clumsily, I trip over...
I feel such shame.

Words seem to fail us
And words arouse and tease
Then burn, cut and slice

Desperately, luv
Reaching for your hand and heart
I trust in our love.
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Old 07-16-2017, 04:20 AM   #72
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Assignment tugs me
submission with pain - sub space
Each day more yours luv.
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Old 07-16-2017, 02:34 PM   #73
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The storms of passion

Tossing my heart on the seas

Of wild love for you




Searching for the calm

Of quiet hearts rapt as one

In peace and wonder




Your tender words, fill

My sails aloft, and we sail

Together, and on
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Old 07-16-2017, 09:41 PM   #74
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You set the sail luv
Under the stars, touch and kiss
My captain forever.
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