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Old 07-18-2016, 04:57 PM   #3201
SilenceDances
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Squire Adela

Squire Adela
Genre: High fantasy, romance, erotic couplings, drama

Sir Marcus and his Squire are about to go up against the biggest challenge that has been faced in a thousand years. With the tenuous help of their lovers, the Dragons, and their King, will they be able to survive the forces they face?

Finally have the second instalment up, and I am so excited.

Chapter One

Chapter Two through Four
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Old 07-20-2016, 04:53 AM   #3202
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Rope and Veil

3rd part of my story about Amelia and Alex is posted. It's a slow weave about pregnancy and change.

https://www.literotica.com/s/rope-and-veil-pt-03
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Old 07-20-2016, 07:34 PM   #3203
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Kim's Journey - new chapter

My latest chapter on my younger days and how I became the woman I am today chronicles my first really true lesbian experience. It is labeled as Kim's Journey Chapter 4 but is actually Chapter 3. Not sure how that happened. You may read it here - https://www.literotica.com/s/kims-journey-ch-04
I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed remembering the wonderful time I had in my first lesbian experience. Votes and comments are welcome.

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Old 07-22-2016, 12:23 PM   #3204
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Smile Feedback on my new story.

This is a three part exhibitionist fantasy that I wrote. The first part of the story has been covered many times, but as far as I know the second part is unique. Let me know if there are any other stories that have covered this in the same way.

Thanks.



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