Author name: Myryad
Story name: Redhead Zombie
Category: Erotic Horror
Word count: About 4,000 words
Link: here
Hello!
I've just submitted my first story on literotica, and one of the first erotic story I've written to completion.
Being young (+english isn't my first language), I thought I could use some constructive criticism, especially given the weird tone I found myself using, and how I could improve from there.
Thanks a lot!
Edit: I would like some advice on the sex scene part, since I feel it's the most important and "newest" part for me.
Story name: Redhead Zombie
Category: Erotic Horror
Word count: About 4,000 words
Link: here
Hello!
I've just submitted my first story on literotica, and one of the first erotic story I've written to completion.
Being young (+english isn't my first language), I thought I could use some constructive criticism, especially given the weird tone I found myself using, and how I could improve from there.
Thanks a lot!
Edit: I would like some advice on the sex scene part, since I feel it's the most important and "newest" part for me.
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