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Old 02-04-2017, 06:00 PM   #1
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Arrow Need a keen editor with time to edit a tale of truly twisted/kinky epicness

I hope this thread can be a forum for positive feedback and only for those who find this subject something they like to talk about and want to help contribute. Thank you.

My story's first chapter is already posted here https://www.literotica.com/s/forced-18 . It's submitted under Novels and Novellas.

It's not a straightforward tale. It will take a keen editor open to working with extreme themes including coercion, rape, and incest. And someone who is willing to help me guide this through to being a more realistic approach to a man with his own harem fantasy. I want to write something much better than the story I already posted. Please know this is something I will put the work into making happen. I want to work with someone who can see this to the end and is willing to try for something unconventional and original. And really something we can both be proud of.

It starts with an enraged 18-year male living with his single mother who he blames for everything wrong in both of their lives. Over time he blackmails her and his ex-girlfriend into being his live-in slaves, and frequently prostituting them both out to help his long term plan of amassing a big nest-egg.

What I want to do is elevate this from being the average stroke story and show the psychological toll this takes on the women in his life. His obsession with porn, extreme sex, money, and power. The effort and time it would actually take to cause people to submit to someone else's will, won't just take two chapters to achieve. Eventually, how his criminal actions put him in jail after he has fathered a baby with his mother. Showing over the course of time how his fractured ego is going to destroy everything. Also, I am trying to avoid the pitfalls of depicting his mother, his girlfriend, and the other women as just straight-up dolls who submit to his psychotic desires, but as women who do not idly submit to his domination of their lives and who fight him every inch of the way. While also showing the thrill they experience submitting to the really overwhelming erotic manipulations he puts them through.

I have a loose outline for further chapters. If you want to chat further about it, please let me know.
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Old 02-05-2017, 08:33 PM   #2
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Ok, I see the forums are dead because of what? The Bowl game?

Surely there is a fearless editor around to give my story a read. Well anyways, I hope everyone is having a good weekend.
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Old 02-05-2017, 10:02 PM   #3
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So, you want an editor to "edit" a story you've already submitted to Lit?
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Old 02-06-2017, 11:39 AM   #4
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Yes, I do. I consider the story I've already posted the barebones version. It needs an edit. And I do still need help with the story going forward.
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Old 02-06-2017, 12:56 PM   #5
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I understood that you were talking about chapters going forward. And maybe someone will be so enthralled with reading your posted first chapter (and you probably have a better chance of finding someone to help with this because you have posted some of it than if there was nothing to buy into other than a concept), but be prepared to depend on a one-off freak connection established. It's very difficult for someone to hitch on to someone else's wide-open dream and work for free.
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I understood that you were talking about chapters going forward. And maybe someone will be so enthralled with reading your posted first chapter (and you probably have a better chance of finding someone to help with this because you have posted some of it than if there was nothing to buy into other than a concept), but be prepared to depend on a one-off freak connection established. It's very difficult for someone to hitch on to someone else's wide-open dream and work for free.
Thank you. I realize this isn't the "normal" route for a writer to take. I also know that people come and go as they please. I am looking to do right by those that would want to work with me. I'm exploring the options of finding the right editor and see where it leads.
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Didn't read it ... you wrote a lot and seems you are waiting for responses.

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That was uncalled for and nasty.
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Didn't read it ... you wrote a lot and seems you are waiting for responses.

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As pilot said, your post was uncalled for.

The Editor’s Forum is for authors and editors to discuss issues related to editing stories. People are forgetting this. It's not a place for personal arguments, attacks, or discussions not related to editing stories.
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Old 02-07-2017, 06:46 PM   #10
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What I want to do is elevate this from being the average stroke story and show the psychological toll this takes on the women in his life. His obsession with porn, extreme sex, money, and power. The effort and time it would actually take to cause people to submit to someone else's will, won't just take two chapters to achieve. Eventually, how his criminal actions put him in jail after he has fathered a baby with his mother. Showing over the course of time how his fractured ego is going to destroy everything. Also, I am trying to avoid the pitfalls of depicting his mother, his girlfriend, and the other women as just straight-up dolls who submit to his psychotic desires, but as women who do not idly submit to his domination of their lives and who fight him every inch of the way. While also showing the thrill they experience submitting to the really overwhelming erotic manipulations he puts them through.
IMHO this sounds like you're looking for a co-author, rather than just an editor.
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Old 02-07-2017, 08:19 PM   #11
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IMHO this sounds like you're looking for a co-author, rather than just an editor.
I appreciate your opinion but I am just looking for an editor with their own opinions and willing to tell me off if I'm getting too silly with my writing. Strong opinions hopefully. Editorial experience preferred.

I just want to get this going.
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I appreciate your opinion but I am just looking for an editor with their own opinions and willing to tell me off if I'm getting too silly with my writing. Strong opinions hopefully. Editorial experience preferred.

I just want to get this going.
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Old 02-08-2017, 01:25 AM   #13
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Thank you. You answered a question I didn't even think to ask.
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