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Old 08-08-2016, 07:32 AM   #51
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Cool Available to beta-read

No toilet stuff, non-con, gay, or non-human...not really my style. I'll give you an opinion...
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Old 10-18-2016, 11:25 PM   #52
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I'll volunteer my services as a TECHNICAL beta-reader and adviser.

If you need to come up with some technobabble to solve your plot problem esp. in sci-fi setting, I can probably come up with one for you. I was a "Treknologist" which means I'm most familiar with Star Trek (all eras), but I am reasonably versed in most generic scifi or science. You got technical questions? I can probably help.

I can also advise on most MILITARY stuff as well as weapons-related stuff in general terms. Wonder if your military scene reads right? I can tell you if you're way off or in the ballpark. Wondering if your weapon can do that? I can probably help.

I'll obviously give you my reactions to your overall story as well. Though I reserve the right to give you no feedback if I object to the overall theme of the story. I do have a pretty tolerant stomach, so it'd probably rare, but no watersports of scat play, no gay or lesbian (I'm str8 so I can't relate), no torture or non-con, absolutely no children or gore, and please, no bestiality or otherwise non-human /humanoid stuff.

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Old 11-21-2016, 06:31 PM   #53
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Beta readers welcomed - Military Tactical

Lynn
Thanks for opportunity to reach out to potential new friends with this thread. Here goes.....

Story is best described as non-erotic (there is no sex in the story), secretive agency adventure, 13K or so words. Of highest interest is toward the end of the story, or first chapter possibly, where there are activities of a small group of folks being in a live fire environment and their actions during and after the engagement. I really don't want to embarrass myself when I pass this on to a couple of folks who have recent experience in that kind of situation, hence the call-out for military related experience.

Anybody interested in helping me preserve my dignity?
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Old 11-21-2016, 07:37 PM   #54
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Hey folks, I'm available as a beta reader. I've been told many times (here and IRL) that I'm good at giving constructive feedback, so that's what I'm offering. I will also read unfinished stories.

Please note that I'm not able to properly assess the technical correctness of your writing. However, I don't mind pointing out the grammar mistakes I do find, if you want me to (as long as your text isn't completely littered with them.)

I'm mainly interested in:
Gay Male & Bisexual MMF - vanilla, or any kind of kinky; I'm quite open-minded
Heterosexual Femdom - any kind of heterosexual story in which the female character(s) hold(s) some kind of power of the male character(s).

All characters can be cis or trans.

Let me know via PM how long your story is, and what it's roughly about, and I'll get back to you!
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Old 11-29-2016, 10:11 AM   #55
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Hello everyone!

Thanks to Lynn for starting this...

I am a writer and need a set of eyes to go over my story. I mostly do stories in the Transexuals / Crossdressers section and am looking for someone to give me thoughts and inputs on the final chapter of an ongoing series.

It's about a loving couple who engage in Crossdressing, role reversal, gender play and pegging. The story is about 10k words. I'm not sure how many lit pages that translates into though.

So if anyone is interested in checking out the story and giving me some thoughts and constructive input then please PM and we can talk further.

Thanks!
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Old 11-30-2016, 09:20 AM   #56
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Beta reader needed

Hi. I need a second pair of eyes / a second opinion on my current work in progress. It's 13,000 words long and is intended for the Toys and Masturbation category (all the sex is either solo or mutual masturbation). The story focuses on university roommates (m/f) who masturbate together and gradually realize they both want more.
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Old 01-17-2017, 02:33 AM   #57
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I've written only gay stories so far, but want to branch out into str8 ones. I'd like to find an editor or beta-reader for my stories and have pm'd some of the posters here, but haven't gotten any responses.
If anyone is interested in helping me, I'd appreciate it. I've gotten very good responses on the stories I've posted, but feel a 2nd set of eyes could be helpful. If interested, please pm me.
Thanks, Josh
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Old 01-30-2017, 09:38 AM   #58
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Cool Available to Beta read.

I'm free to Beta read most categories except GLBT, BDSM, Toys, Sci Fi and give critical feedback prior to editing.
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Old 02-09-2017, 03:12 PM   #59
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Willing to Beta-Read

Not into incest, scat/watersports, sci-fy, or non human.

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