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Old 02-07-2017, 06:02 PM   #1
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Looking for editor to get me over a hump

Hi
I have a partly true story I am capturing about an encounter (moving into fantasy) I experienced with a much younger girl

Category - Mature
subcategories - incest (no actual incest but roleplay), interracial (not making a big deal of it)

I'm currently at 2500 words but as I go through it, I am not satisfied with my telling of the story. I expect to get to about 5-6000 words.

I'm looking for someone to help me make the story pop. I'd say, generally my grammar and technical aspects are good.

If you can help, I look forward to hearing from you.
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Old 02-08-2017, 04:07 AM   #2
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Are you still needing help? I have the time, and would be willing to give your story a read, and give it a critical reading.
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Old 02-08-2017, 08:18 AM   #3
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Old 02-08-2017, 08:37 AM   #4
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Let me know as well if you still need another look.
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