I hope this thread can be a forum for positive feedback and only for those who find this subject something they like to talk about and want to help contribute. Thank you.
My story's first chapter is already posted here https://www.literotica.com/s/forced-18
. It's submitted under Novels and Novellas.
It's not a straightforward tale. It will take a keen editor open to working with extreme themes including coercion, rape, and incest. And someone who is willing to help me guide this through to being a more realistic approach to a man with his own harem fantasy. I want to write something much better than the story I already posted. Please know this is something I will put the work into making happen. I want to work with someone who can see this to the end and is willing to try for something unconventional and original. And really something we can both be proud of.
It starts with an enraged 18-year male living with his single mother who he blames for everything wrong in both of their lives. Over time he blackmails her and his ex-girlfriend into being his live-in slaves, and frequently prostituting them both out to help his long term plan of amassing a big nest-egg.
What I want to do is elevate this from being the average stroke story and show the psychological toll this takes on the women in his life. His obsession with porn, extreme sex, money, and power. The effort and time it would actually take to cause people to submit to someone else's will, won't just take two chapters to achieve. Eventually, how his criminal actions put him in jail after he has fathered a baby with his mother. Showing over the course of time how his fractured ego is going to destroy everything. Also, I am trying to avoid the pitfalls of depicting his mother, his girlfriend, and the other women as just straight-up dolls who submit to his psychotic desires, but as women who do not idly submit to his domination of their lives and who fight him every inch of the way. While also showing the thrill they experience submitting to the really overwhelming erotic manipulations he puts them through.
I have a loose outline for further chapters. If you want to chat further about it, please let me know.