Looking for feedback on a Non-consent/Reluctant story

[MyWildWife]

Before I ask for an editor, I would like some feedback on a story I would post as a Non-consent/Reluctant story. I am hoping to have a handful of people read it and provide their thoughts. I am not looking for editing, just if the story would be appropriate to post.
thanks

[sr71plt]

What you're asking for is known here as a beta reader. And there's a thread to post to if you're looking for one: http://forum.literotica.com/showthre...1161443&page=3

[MyWildWife]

Thanks, I will head there.